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Moving On Chapter 15
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Bette began, Tina, I. when Kristie walked up standing right in front of them, staring at Bette and then at Tina.
A tear trickling down her cheek at seeing their hands entwined with each other
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Tina quickly let go of Bettes hand and leapt to her feet, Dr Phelps
Bette looked curiously from Tina to Kristie, Do you two know each other?
Kristie: (dejectedly) Yeah..Ms Kennard is a patient of mine.
Bette: (surprised) What?Why didnt you tell me Kris?
Kristie: (her anger beginning to rise, her insecurity running rampant) I never knew you were interested babe.. Youve never asked about patients before and I have no idea about your relationship with Ms Kennard here, youve never told me!!!
Bette could see the uncertainty in her lovers eyes. She got up, taking Kristies hand and pulled her to one side, (politely) Tina could you keep an eye on Jack for me. Just for a minute, please?
Tina nodded, Of course! Tina could see the doubt and confusion in the doctors demeanour.
Bette: (lovingly taking Kristies hands in her own, turning her to face Bette, giving her a light kiss on the lips) Ok baby, whats the matter? What are you doing here? Are you Ok? Did something happen at work? Bette was honestly worried about Kristie, and her sudden change of mood.
Kristie had attended work and her early morning meeting as scheduled, feeling secure in the knowledge that Bette loved her. She was even feeling a sense of relief that Bette and Tina were meeting to talk and bring closure to their previous relationship. This would have a significant impact on their relationship and may mean that finally Bette could see Kristie and her were together for the long haul.
Kristie had concluded her early morning meeting and was sitting in her office thinking when a sudden wave of fear and doubt passed through her body. Usually the doctor was so in control and confident, these doubts were driving her crazy. She instinctly felt that she needed to talk to Bette, to know where she stood and to let Bette know how she felt. how much she adored her before Tina and Bette got into it! She rescheduled her appointments and made her way to see Bette.
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Awww man! Cliffhanger! Come on please please please give us another one! Make Bette be honest about her love for Tina (sorry Kristie)
damn it another cliffhanger.
You have got to update again really soon or I’ll explode.
my dear mates….out hearts can’t take this….u must continue this tonight….please?…..i will beg if i have to….. **grins**
Is it possible for this story to get better and better chapter after chapter? Survey says…Yes. Freaking good Mates, more, more, more.
Oh come on! You can’t leave us sleeping with this cliffhanger in your heads? Sleep deprivation is not good for the body? Please……I am begging you! Thanks for posting…that chapter was the best!
You handled this really well. I’m so happy Tina has little Jack..
Dr. Hunter should be coming to town. Maybe thing will work out for her and Tina/ The only way that Bette will leave Kristie ,is for Kristie to leave. Dont see that happening thanks
Mates Honey how about I tape the tennis for you while you write and post how does that sound? Please another is needed A.S.A.P. So Let me know about the taping of the tennis
This story is simply getting better and better. An do enjoy the Australien open in tennins. It is afterall only 4 times a year there is a Grandslam. Made the best women win. Post soon
Great story, and each chapter just keeps us coming back for more. Thanks for moving it right along, for the most part. Tina is still Bette’s wife. She should look at it that way. So, if she doesn’t give Tina another chance, then she’s still going outside the relationship. Since, they never officially ended it. I know, just wishful thinking, but you got to give me credit for trying, right?! Please update soon, and keep the honesty going!
I don’t know who the Jerk is who is lowering the scores but that’s ridiculous especially on this story. Mates you’re doing an awesome job I love how you are telling this story please post again soon. I LOVE IT
Love your story and writing,you rock.
mates nice work as alaways… bust come on let bette confess her tru feelings now… :)
ok, bette is doing really good being honest, so let her being honest once more… it’s clear to kristie that bette still loves tina, and that the is such a strong connection that nothing, even 5 years had being able to broke it up, so… let’s bette being honest and tell kristie that some part of her wants tina
hmm.. i guess every writers here have mastered the art of leaving the readers cliffhangin’ eh? You sure did get me hooked. K.. looking forward to the next one.
Hi Mates, You sure know how to leave us hanging, brilliant chapter has always.
love this story mates,and i know how hard it is to read and watch the tennis(im in NSW) and read, let alone write! youve done good . and anyway its all a leisure thing ENJOY!!
OK I’ll be patient…but these cliffhangers are going to kill me! Awesome story!!!
SUPERB! Beautiful story…i love it.
Please let Bette be honest to Kristie about her feelings for Tina and the bye bye Kristie.Great story.
Hey, where’s the next chp?!? I’m getting withdrawal systoms over here :) I keep refreshing the page, waiting for the next update. I think i need professional help :P Seriously, great job!!
Jack has FOUR mommies – and TWO of them are doctors!
Oh man this is hard for Bette and what are she going to do to answer Kristie the question. Hope she willl find the right answer! Oh is that Dr. Hunter coming. Please post soon, thank you!