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Love’s Calling Chapter 29- Heaven on Earth
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Bette watched as a relieved smile crept onto Tina’s face and Bette found herself smiling broadly as she felt the need to tease her a little bit.
Bette: “Thoney are you sure this wasn’t your first time being with a woman because”
Tina: (surprised at Bette’s words) “Bette!”
Bette: (laughing loudly) “Sorry baby I couldn’t resist.”
Tina reached over and softly pushed at Bette acting as if she was trying to push her away from her. Bette reacted by pulling Tina even closer to her and holding her in arms.
Bette: (softly whispering into Tina’s ear) “BabyI have two things I need to say to you. First and by far the most important thing is that I love you. The second is that tonight has been the best night of my entire life. Making love to you and you making love to mewell there are no words to describe it. If this is what is like for your first time then heaven help me because next time I may think I’ve died and gone to heaven.”
Tina pulled back from Bette to look into her eyes. She was searching to see if Bette was just talking but only seeing sincerity there, she leaned in and kissed Bette before she pulled away from her saying “Give me a little while to recover and we will see if that is true.”
As Tina began to lay back down Bette gently pulled her back into arms and told her to rest. Within minutes Tina had fallen asleep and Bette lay there watching her for a while before she herself let sleep over take her. Several hours later, the feel of Tina’s soft mouth upon her skin woke Bette up. Bette slowly opened her eyes and looked down at the woman who was softly kissing her stomach. She lay there for just a moment, savoring the sensation and thanking her lucky stars to have found this beautiful woman, before she reached down and ran her hand over Tina’s silky blonde hair.
When Tina felt Bette’s hand on her head she looked up at her, smiled and kissed her way up Bette’s chest and found her lips for a long passionate kiss before she began to kiss her way back down so she could please her lover. She wanted to make sure that Bette knew how much she wanted her and that while she had been initially scared of taking this step in their relationship, she was extremely happy that she had and by the time that Tina pushed Bette over the edge into ecstasy Bette didn’t believe that she had died and gone to heaven but rather that she had found heaven on earth.
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I hope B gets there soon. I don’t think I can stand them missing kisses.
I’m loving the new chapter!! Don’t tell me, they’re going to miss each other before Tina’s flight.
what missing kisses. that is like unamerican??? this a soo good. looks like you guys picked up right where you left off. bette needs to book a flight. and dammit somone needs to be kissed. argh!!! thanks girls.
pls let them, at least meet before the flight..tts all i’m asking for!
I love this story. I hope they don’t miss each other before Tina’s departure.
So sorry to hear about your granny! Hope she and your knee pain get better really soon! Great post! Hopefully Tina will get to Bette’s before Bette leaves for the airport, or maybe they’ll have the foresight to call one another to let each other in on their plans.
Oh they gonna miss each other, and hope they will have a kiss goodbye. Let see what’s next, thanks!
If Tina is smart, she would have packed and checked in at the airport in 2 hours. Giving her enough time for her “detour” instead of sitting at her office wasting time by contemplating the dilemma LOL Sorry, I’m punctual like that, yeah I know “what a loser” I’ve heard it before LOL However, being as Bette has the exact same idea, oh hell! Don’t let them miss each other damn it! Thanks heartandsoul.
pls pls let them meet..!
Just as good as all theother chpters, worth thewait. Hope u arefeeling better and that all goes well with your grandmother. Thanks again for taking the time.
Dear Heart, above all I sincerely wish that your grandmother will feel better as soon as possible : you truly had enough worries for a good while ! Luckily, Soul is a so obvious support to you and that’s great.
So, this is your first new chapter ?? Wow, that must be something for you two, no ? Reconnecting with your wonderful story this way, after months – and for the biggest joy of all your passionate and grateful readers ! Congratulations !!
I loved this 29th piece of pure reading’s happiness, my talented duo, really I did.
And even if it’s pretty hard to let life’s reality brokes love’s dream – this “heaven on earth”, as so rightly said our Bette – , I cannot help but thinking that there’s nothing better than a short separation to full the fire more than ever ! Comes back are always soooo intense…
Anyway, I simply couldn’t feel an other way but sweet and positive after having fully melt thanks to this very beautiful line : “Bette knew that her newfound belief wasn’t simply about the passion that she had just shared with Tina but rather a sense of feeling love to the very center of her soul. It was as if they had crawled under each other skin and had been welcomed home there.”
… So, I’m confident : they’ll share a tender goodbye at time ! (… but if I’m too optimist now, please don’t laugh too louder and be kind ! *wink*)
Thank you so much for your work, H&S, you’re such an amazing pair !! ^_^
Really enjoying the series.. thank you!
hopefully they meet somewhere at their detour place.
aww ya for batte and tina…o no are they gonna miss each other with her detour and her suprize…ughgh not kool ok well please psot soon thanx byeness<33
i’ve been waiting for this chapter…and it was sooooo worth the wait! heart, it’s so good to see u r up and posting again…I hope your grandma recovers nicely from her accident. Thanks for the update, I loved it!
i hope Bette make it up in time and in an act of love she will travel with Tina..lol..ok i have to call you 2 ladys again of TEASEheartandsoul cuz this is not a nice way to end the story..lol..great chappy girls thanks :o)
oh yeah,starting the new chapters!!!! I love it, it is just as wonderful as the old ones. Can’t wait to see what’s in store for our two lovers. Knowing you two fun and lovin’ for sure. Tina takes a detour and Bette is packed ready to go with her right? Please? what ever you write I will read. Great job as always. Glad you are better heart, take care you too soul.
I’m glad to hear that you’re up and well, Heart. My condolences for your grandmother though. I hope that she feels better soon. She’s lucky to have you around to take care of her.
New chapter! New chapter!!!! *Does little happy dance* Thank you for letting B&T have an amazing night! It was time for them to take that step and I’m glad that they (especially Tina) have no regrets. It’s true love alright. I too am hoping they don’t miss each other. Another red light kiss perhaps? ;)
No, Tina! No detour!!! Argh, the tension!!!
Sorry…I just caught up with the story and I need to settle down. I love it! Glad you guys are surviving real-life drama and putting in the effort to bring us the fictional drama. Thanks.
Hope you and grandma’s legs feel better soon!
*Lucky for us you don’t type with your knees ;-)
you know how we feel about the kisses. Right albeez? Please don’t let them cross paths and miss that wonderful kiss. post soon
yes, a short separation does make the emotions of reuniting all the more intense. but mercy me… up to 2weeks ?
just too cruel right after their very first time.
and kissing goodbye is extremely important, for one never knows what is ahead. something not to let slip through your fingers.
i’m with Bette al the way. now, having each wanting to do the same, how can they succeed ? anxious for your design on this.
’cause a day without love
is a year with emptiness and
your love brings me happiness,
i can’t stand a day without love.
my word Ms. Kennard, you give new charm to blushing ! no wonder a certain gift sending person was captivated. she’d be wearing a smile from ear to ear had she witnessed your latest display.
this chapter makes the new ones as promissing as the past ones were delicious.
both you & grandmama caught in the leg huh ? wish the two a successful healing.
Heart&Soul, an amazing pair yes you are, no question ! Love to you.