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Love Revisted – Coming Home Part 48
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“Oh, yes, it is, Stan, yet it is.
“All right, Faye. I’ll see you tomorrow in court. If there’s anything you can think of regarding these witnesses, anything at all, call me. I don’t care what time of the day or night it is, call me.”
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Faye watched as Stan left her house. Several people from the CCC left at the same time he did.
She looked absent-mindedly around the room, taking in the near emptiness of this house. It wasn’t empty of tangible things, but certainly was devoid of all the things that make a house a home – human emotion, kind voices, a reassuring touch. Oh, the CCC people certainly filled those voids, but they weren’t a part of this house. They arrived, they talked, they reassured, they listened, they applauded – and then they left.
Faye was unaware really that for these few moments she had dropped all pretense and was questioning her life and the choices she made to bring her to this point in time – when did it happen? When did it change?
Her eyes went to the ankle bracelet and her brief moment in deep thought about the reality of her life evaporated – Poof! Gone! – into the air of the empty room.
She felt the tapping on her shoulder, the hot, dripping words falling from a forked tongue whispered in her ear:
you were doing fine, Faye, just fine until you looked into HER faceyes, Bette Porter, HER, and she looked right back at you with nothingness in HER eyeshow ***** dare she look at you with NOTHINGNESS in HER eyes! Your choice was clear! You had to extinguish the nothingness from her eyes!
List of witnessesI don’t give a flying ***** about their witnesses! I don’t need to look at who they’re going to bring into court to lie.
Faye put her hands on her knees and pushed up from the couch and headed for the stairs leading to her bedroom.
I’m going to bed. I’ll be damn glad when this is over so I can take this stupid ankle bracelet off, too.
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my first time to be able to comment on your story – I am hooked! Your love scenes are – well I can’t even put words to describe them. You get 5 stars from me and I’d give you 5 more if available! I don’t know who gave you 1 star, but it had to be a really big mistake. Please keep writing and give us more.
Faye is crazy. I can’t wait ’til she gets rudely awakened at the trial. Bette’s sooo cute with Angelica! I’m so happy she’s changing her ways. Boy would I like to smack Hell in the head.
I LOVE BETTE’S ROUTINE WITHE ANGELICA,IT’S BEAUTIFULL…HELENA AND FAYE ARE A BUNCH OF WACKOS!!!!GREAT JOB..PLEASE POST SOON…THANKS
I wasn’t there at time to comment your last chapter, so I’ll do for both now : your story is such an intense mix of all contrasted feelings, that’s truly a great reading pleasure ! At the same time, you so magically depict our Bette and Tina’s unique bound, you perfectly draw any fanatic’s hateful and blind state of mind through Faye Buckley, as well as Nancy’s subtle intelligence and Helena’s fascinating machiavelism. That’s really a great, great job !
In this particular chapter, I had a special weakness for Bette’s so touching attempt of “emotional telepathy”… It recalls me this so unforgettable Jane Eyre’s scene, when Jane can “listen” Rochester’s voice through a far distance, as if their souls were making one.
And now I cannot wait for the trial !!
Thank you very much for your gift !
Great chapter, everyone is saying that Faye is a psyco, but I (like her lawyers’s doctors) don’t give her that easy out. That Broad know exactly what she was doing and is consumed by her hate for Bette because of her own personal failings with her own daugther. She and Helena need to reep what they have shown. he is just going to crap in her pants when Nancy gets Helena on the stand and she has to admit that she is a lesbian. Maybe that is how thier lunch date will come out, because after Faye finds out that Helena is “one of them” it is going to be on, no holds barred. I fell so sorry for her lawyer because he will be caught up in a avalanche.
I to love Bette’s new routine at home and at work. I hope that she and Tina continue to work is a positive way on hier relationship so that they are able to fend off any and all negitive distractions. Hey, I know that youhave this story packed with all of this delicious drama, but we have not heard from the other girls for a while. Where is the crew (Dana, Shane and Alice).
K
Great chapter. I hope all goes well for Bette. Can’t wait for more.
Faye and Helena are both just psychotic. Both of them have their obsessions with Bette & Tina respectively. They’re just insane.
I really like that Bette has a routine…it’s so “normal” it’s cute. LOL. Bette & Tina’s openness and willingness to fight for their marriage is great. It’s ALL or nothing! Powerful, and love is definitely powerful.
hey acre. great chappy. grooving on evil talk. dont know what else to call it. kinda like how a schiophrenic feels, huh. i can say that cuz my son was one and not feel any hate from anyone right. thanks for the present.