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Love Revisited – Coming Home Part 71
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“No, everything’s cool, Susan. See you tomorrow.”
As soon as she was outside The Planet she turned on her cell phone. Blinking boldly was “I miss you.” Blink – 1 missed call – Blink – “I miss you” – Blink – 1 missed call.
*****. Why didn’t I change my cell phone number. Why is she calling me!! It’s been months. *****.
Truth was, even with the affairs since their breakup, Susan could not get one Dawn Rosen out of her mind. So much so, she was on her mind during the affairs. Understandable since they had spent over ten years together. The last year was so tumultuous, so wracked with the pain of knowing they were falling apart.
When she looked at Bette and Tina her mind jumped on the time machine and was whisked back to the endless love of Susan and Dawn.
They were in their late twenties when they met. Each were with their own group of friends on a Saturday night in the popular women’s bar. Susan’s group was gathered at the bar and she was nursing a ginger ale. Her nemesis was gambling, not alcohol. Two evils but at least with hers she woke up with a clear head in the morning.
Susan was leaning against the bar letting her eyes scan the crowd of women. She wasn’t really hopeful of finding the love of her life – that just didn’t happen in a bar. You found the love of your night. You met, you danced, and if even the tiniest connection was made, you went somewhere and fucked. Plain and simple. Sometimes you didn’t even leave the club. Up against the wall in a dark corner worked just as well. Love had nothing to do with it.
Maybe tonight it would be up against the wall as soon as she caught the stare of hungry eyes – the eyes she caught this night weren’t hungry but intoxicating. They weren’t asking for *****. These eyes were not questioning at all; these eyes were offering something she had not seen or experienced before. Susan pushed off the bar and started walking towards those eyes. Their gaze never broke. She was the night moth; those eyes were the light.
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Tina continued to make sure Bette’s mouth was occupied until Alice’s mouth ran out of gas.
Damn! That means Tina had Bette’s lips occupied for a lonnnnng time!
Fuck! Helena awoke with a start. Well, that’s not a good thing…I can’t be thinking of her in that way…in a loving way. This is about payback.
Helena’s plan is going to unravel and it may be at her own hands
Susan kissed Dawn lightly and said, “Tomorrow night?”
Dawn put her hands on either side of Susan’s face. “How about tomorrow morning?”
The things I find…soooo sexy!
Its apparent that D & S found love in very much the same way as B & T. I hope that Susan will find a way to see dawn’s early light (pun intended) and realize that the relationship she is going to destroy for good, could be her own. I mean, if she hadnt of effed up so badly, how would she feel if someone were trying to take Dawn away from her.
It seems that she has a huge heart like our B does; so maybe, just maybe she will go to B & T before it is too late.
so S&D had the same kind of strong love between B&T. hmm..hope Dawn would change some things here..
snQQpy – *big kiss* i swear i cant comment after you cuz you say the same things i want to. and i hate to be boring.
rc – i love how your mind can do devious. i dont think your devious, but you sure can bring it. gawd hellno is hideous. well see what susan is made of.
so who is going to crack first… i think hellno better watch her ass… tina will be kicking it bacy to the east coast… even though we don’t her…or that susan we don’t want her here either… but this plan is slowly breaking apart… loving this story… please continue
Hubba bubba mama, you crack me up. Though I do have to agree, Bette is definitly a hubba bubba. So since S&D are the slightly younger versions of B&T I think ole Dawn needs to get her ass out to L.A. before Susan does something really stupid. Love how this is getting more interesting. And, Alice even when she annoys you, ya gotta love her. Were waiting.
Ibelieve that Dawn will be the downfall Of Helene She will talk Susan into tell Bette and Tina and they will go alone with it and Candace will be out in the cold also ,In the mean time Old faithfull Alice will dig and find out more and tell Bette and Tina. thanks
RC…yes, I agree with cpq…there is a parallel between Susan’s situation and Bette’s. But how can Susan justify her actions to bring harm to an innocent party and still think it’s business. How does she think that doing this will bring Dawn back to her…she’s basically gambling with people’s lives now and not money…well she’ll get money for doing this deed. She’s made a deal with the Devil (Hells) and she thinks she’ll be free and clear at the end of the transaction…pity the fool who believes or trusts in the Devil’s word. Thanks for the chapter.
Poor,stupid Susan LaFay – she’s the one that just might get bitten in the ass if she doesn’t get her head on straight. Oh well, like my momma used to say “Stupid is as stupid does!”
Hopefully Dawn can reason with Susan and make her realise what she’s about to do. If not, I hope Dawn sees the need to get involved to warn TnB or the Shane&Alice Guard Squad before the poop hits the fan!
okay, let me get this right. Susan (similiarly to Bette) was in a loving long term relationship where she screwed thing up but STILL LOVES her former partner Dawn and want to eventully win her back. So, she thinks that she is going to be able to do this deed for Helena and return to Dawn, explain away what she has done, and make happy. She is sooooooo totally STUPID, and I define stupid to be when you know better but choose to not do better. So she expects to be able to return to Dawn and tell her that she sold her soul and totally distroyed someone else’s family and happiness so that she could return to her and be happy–NOT. If Dawn has any morals or a good heart, she will not go for it. At thid point the only way that Susan can reclaim her life and love is to devoluge Helena’s hedious plan. I hope that Dawn is able to save her love by revealing Helena’s plan and working a counter attack with the girls. Very interesting twist, please continue.
Perhaps Dawn in Susan’s life again will help her see that the work she is doing for Helena is in fact morally wrong. It’s not business, its screwing w/ someone’s life.
There could be a way for everyone to get what they want in the end: Dawn come to CA to see Susan; Susan tell Bette and Tina about Helena’s plan; B & T play along until Susan gets paid and then back to Jersey; B & T pounce on Helena and kick her ass.
At least, that’s what I would like to see, idealy. However, I have no doubts in my mind that you will figure out something most clever.
Great post!
Susan’s not so evil after all. I don’t trust her though. I love fun times with the framily! Helena’s just sick. Sick sick sick sick sick. Thanks, rc!