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Love Revisited – Coming Home Part 65
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“Okay, if you need anything, give a holler.”
What I need you’re not ready to give, she thought, not just yet.
“Will do, thanks.”
Tina got that shiver down her spine again as she reached the patio doors. She could swear she felt Susan staring at her back as she went into the house. Let it go, Tina. It’s the heat. You’re beginning to imagine things. The woman is outside working in your yard.
* * *
By the time Bette and Peggy left the restaurant it was 3:30. Bette checked in with James during lunch just to make sure nothing urgent arose. All was well.
As Bette got into her car to head back to the CAC, she was mulling over in her mind Peggy’s offer. With Peggy as a silent partner, it certainly would ease a lot of the financial stress. Between her connections and mine in the art world, there would be no loss for events and the right people to attend them, Bette thought.
There’s also the unspoken feelings that Peggy has towards Bette – it’s so close to Peggy wishing that Bette were her daughter. Here actions, although minimalist at most, nonetheless, depict deep admiration and, daresay, love for Bette Porter. There’s no doubt that she loves Helena and also her grandchildren. Bette just doubts there is much like in there towards her daughter.
Even though Peggy is definitely not
* * *
Shane walked into the living room to the phone. She left her cell in the car. Why isn’t she picking up the phone? I’m heading over therenow.
Angelica was napping and Tina was standing at the sink doing her day’s thinking while washing dishes. One day she’ll put that dishwasher to use. Meanwhile, it was just soothing to her to listen to the music through the ear buds from her mp3 player that she had around her neck. She didn’t even hear the phone ring. God, she thought, Bette hates this music. She smiled – then froze in place.
.In mere seconds of motion and thought, arms and hands encircled her waist tightly and startled her. She didn’t hear someone come up behind her. Why did she keep the ear buds in while the patio doors were open and she got that feeling from Susan – ***** she stiffened immediately, grabbed a plate from the sink – not the best weapon she thought, but it’s something – and started to turnadrenalin starting to pump throughout her bodyvisions of what happened with Helena flashed before her eyesplease, not again
TBC
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I can just imagine Bette sneaking home to talk to Tina. Wouldn’t she be the one surprised if Tina turns around and cracks a plate over her head, lol. If it’s not Bette then Shane better come to Tina’s rescue. I doubt that it’s Susan…she hasn’t infiltrated the Porter-Kennard house enough yet. I’d figure she’d worm her way inch by inch until she was fully trusted before making any move.
Can’t wait for the next update!
I LOVE this!!!!
DAMN…..MAYBE BETTE GOT IN HER INVISIBLE JET AND WENT TO SEE HER GIRL?????PLEASE POST REAL SOON…THANKS
SHIT… i hate cliffhangers… please post soon… and if its not bette… i hope tina smacks her with the plate…
I didn’t get a chance to comment on the previous chapter, so my thoughts for the last one and this one…As always….this story is absolutely FABULOUS…your cliff hangers are going to be the death of me yet!
“God, T…let me turn over…let me feel you…let me touch you….”
“Not yet, baby. We will crown the Queen my way tonight.”
…and this was a coronation attended by only two. It went so well, they performed it twice.
Ok, I just creamed……..I mean, screamed…..Can ya hear me now?!?
I have to admit, he thought, it did feel rather good to stand up to Helena. The look on her face was priceless. What I’d really like to do is have her fuck me senseless – I can just feel those spiked heels walking up and down my back… ummm, if I traded the balls for breasts, I might have a fighting chance.
Clutching my pearls… Franklin…..you FREAK!!! LOL
As quickly as a lightning bolt passes from the sky to the ground and with the same intensity of impact, the thought…she’s not talking about plants…
Hmmm, how come my thoughts don’t travel this fast? Im’ma have to talk with T about this.
As long as that motion leads to Tina being under my roof again – just long enough for me to then dump her sorry ass.
I knew this is what she had planned for Tina….Helena just can’t handle being dropped…….for Porter!
And I sincerely hope Tina beats the shit out of whomever that is, if its NOT Bette or Shane.
oh shit! great chapter
Your stories are great, Just loving them, always checking Fan Fiction everyday in hopes of a new story posting. I believe it is Bette with her arms around Tina’s waist. Bette needed to talk with T about her conversation with Peggy, and right away. Bette is a smart and savvy lady and knows what’s in store for her at the CAC. But let’s see where you, the writer, is taking this.
what the hell???!?!Tina run..!!Shane to the rescue…
RC…damn Helena is truly a B@#(h. She plans on deeply hurting both Tina & Bette. Tina should run…but she cannot leave Angelica alone…Shane is going to help her — Yoda knows something is not right. Love the drama, just cannot and do not want Bette & Tina hurt anymore…LOL.
Great chapter, and I think that it is Bette who has her hands around Tina. Tina should however reframe from wearing the earbuds when she is at home alone with Angelica. As a parent you need to always be able to hear what is going on in your home. If she can or did not hear the phone ring, then how caould she hear Angelica cry out. I hope that Susan is not planting any listening devices in and around thier house. Come on Alice, get your NOSEY A** on the case, and Shane, get your butt over there and let Tina know that you called. Sorry arceextl, this is YOUR story (hee hee). Please continue.
wow nice ending lmao. nothing like a good cliffy. i think it is bette and tina will be suprised when she turns around. lol
Arce,
I am sitting hear with a mouth hanging open and catching flies.
How could you tease your adoring audience with that cliff hanger.
I do hope you post soon as I need to know what is going to happen next.
Has Bette detoured home and giving Tina a ‘hello, guess who?’ hug? It is someone malicious? Candace or Susan or an unknown third party?
Only you hold the key to this mystery.
Please, please, pretty please post soon.
Your Loyal Fan.
I feel like you’re dangling a carrot in front of me, rc!!! Ahhhhhhhhhhh who is it?!
ell damn thats not good. a plate? oh well if it is bette hopefully i wont do much damage. oh what a mind for the drama you have rc. post soon girl.
Hope its Bette that has her arms around Tina. if not Shane is on her way over
Ah, now why you gotta leave us hanging like that? Shane will bust Susan’s ass and if Bette gets a hold of her she’s done for. Please let it be Shane checking on Tina or Bette surprising her girl. No more DRAMA!