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Love Revisited – Coming Home Part 1
I knew Bette was not going to do anything without my giving her the sign it was okay, so I said in an almost begging voice, please, please touch me. I am so wet for you that I will implode if I dont feel you soon That was all Bette needed to hear. As her left hand and fingers were in seconds between my wet folds, thumb grazing my engorged *****, she emitted such a guttural moan, a sound of pain derived from pleasureOh, my ***** God, T, all I’ve ever wanted is you Bette, oh, Bette, I’ve been this wet for you since you took my hand this morningplease let me feel you inside meI cant stand it any longer. And with that Bette thrust two, then three fingers in, then out.in, then out. My hips kept in rhythm with her hand, her thumb now pressing on my *****. I could feel myself spilling over onto her fingers.
Look at me, Bette. Those beautiful, chocolate eyes staring intensely at me while loving my body. For just a fleeting moment each of us saw beyond the hurt, the heartache and the pain and witnessed the shadow of home in each others eyes. We were holding on to one another’s sweat soaked bodies for dear life, each silently willing this moment and this feeling to be imprinted in our memories forever.
"T, I need to taste you. I want my mouth on you NOW." I lay on the bed never disengaging Bette’s fingers and she positioned herself between my legs, still thrusting. Hearing the sounds of my wetness as she withdrew and re-entered was driving me crazy. And then I knew I entered the gates of heaven as Bette’s lips took hold of my *****, flicking her tongue, sucking it and doing that magic with her tongue only she can do. I was delirious with our joined passion and knew in mere moments – seconds, she would take me over the edge – and it happened, from the tips of my toes to the hair on my head I felt the tsunami of orgasms take over my body.
It was like no other ***** in my life. Its tide washed over me and through me, threw me up to the heavens, careened me from cloud to cloud, let me touch the wings of an angel, who then gently tapped me and sent me floating back to earth, landing me in the arms of the only person who could send me on this glorious journey – my Bette.
tbc, if you’d like me to…
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(51 votes, average: 4.29 out of 5)
You are off to a great start and must continue. That one star must be short for 100 stars. Great.
Very nice…keep going.
Absolutly… Continue…NOW!!!!
Keep writing, girl!
OMG!!!, you’ve got to continue this great writing. POst soon.
You must most definitely continue. I just love long stories and can hardly get thhem long enough, so keep up the good work.
Yes please continue. That was truly well written.
WOW, it’s so soft but so powerfull, keep going
By all means, please continue
Beautiful…full of love…and sexy as hell!!!! Don’t even think of not continuing!!!!
Oh my god you could feel the Love the tension yes please continue like now
WOW!!!
Great job please continue..I would like to see how someone sees what happened that day and before the walk to the door.. Thanks
oh yeah
What can I possibly say…hell yeah you must continue! More soon please!
I think that you definitely should continue. =) It`s very nice. You`ve got a way with Tina and expressing her.
Please keep going. Always interested in B&T getting back together again.
WOOO HOOOO fanfuckingtastic!
great storyline, you just got to go on, i love your mixture of sweet feelings and conviction. i feel you really love them!
Yes..keep going. I am just starting and will read all of your chapters. : )
Just began reading this morning; your writing is magnificent; I’m rushing to take in more.