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London to LA Ch8
She stood chopping up some salad for lunch, occasionally looking round at her son happily bouncing up and down on the couch in the living room and laughing, she used to do that all the time when she was a child, her father hated it, but it was the only way she could get him to notice her.
Alice goes to pick up a plate and a sharp stabbing pain shoots through her head, she places the plate onto the counter with one hand and grabs the side of the counter with other. Again the pain comes, she’s dizzy, she hold on, then again and again the pain comes. She yells for Jake, then again the pain strikes but this time it knocks her to the ground. At first she lays there still and silent, then the convulsions hit her body.
Jake comes running into the kitchen to see his mum lying on the floor, he runs to her, not knowing what’s happening. He’s terrified, his mums whole body is shaking and there is blood coming from her nose. He spots his mums phone on the table and frantically looks for his fathers name, he calls, no answer. He rememberd what his mum said. He dials 999, nothing. He starts to cry then he spots Danas name on the phone and he presses the call button.
Dana – hey Alice
Jake – its me Jake, mamas on the floor, and she shaking and she cant hear me and and… Jake is crying so much Dana cant make out what he’s saying
Dana – Jake don’t worry honey, where are you
Jake – at home
Dana – stay there honey, im on my way, stay with your mum Jake.
Carmen – what’s wrong?
Dana – its Alice she having a seizure and jakes with her. Call 911 im going over there now.
Dana rushes to her car and speeds through the streets of LA, she arrives at the house just before the paramedics, she jumps out of the car and sprints into the house, Jake is sat on the floor next to Alice holding his mums hand. Jake sees Dana and rushes over to her crying his little heart out, holding onto Dana for dear life.
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Even though yes the chapter was a little short, it was fantastic! Great job! Alice has to pull through…Can’t wait till the next update!
well done jake but so sad that he had to see it I hope that alice is ok can’t wait to see what happens next please post soon I love it
Apologies I don’t have time for a long comment but great chapter again, you post fast! I didn’t know the number was 999 in London and I was thinking “Man this kids an idiot,” then I felt bad about saying that about a child lol. Great job again I hope Alice can pull through, Danish should always prevail. :)
I’m grateful for the quick update and glad Dana was there for Alice and Jake.
Great story but PLEASE let it have a nice ending, I cant handle more death especially of my fav characters!!!
Poor little boy and please don’t let anything happen to Alice!!!!!
Jake sure saved the day! Poor boy, it must be really scary seeing your mom like that. I’m glad Dana coud help out. Still keeping my fingers crosses that Alice will pull through.
Wow, this is so sad, it makes me want to cry. Let Alice make it through! Jake, what a brave boy, he did save the day. Update soon, you are fabulous and I love this story.
That Jake is one smart boy,evertone should be proud of him. thanks