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London to LA Ch3
Dana – you don’t have to apologize al, it was all my fault, I was such an idiot,
They both stood there staring at eachother, tears in their eyes, when Shane comes over, she coughs
Shane – well how about we sit down and grab a drink yeah,
They get over to the table, but just before they sit down,
Jake – hi, mum please can I have a drink now, ive been good, ask Dana, ive been waiting ages and I’m real thirsty.
They all look at eachother and at Jake – so
The group of women all sit and chat away happily, the conversations took their time and were a little strained to begin with but with in no time at all they were laughing and joking with eachother like the old days.
Shane – sneaky al, so this is Jake, geez I thought you had gone and got yourself married to some English guy
Shane – so how old are you then Jake?
Jake – looks at his mum, im 4 and a half
Shane – whispers to alike – I know my math’s is not good al but you left LA 5 years ago nearly to the day, that means that you know you were pregnant before you left LA.
Shane nods.
Jake – mum, when’s dad gonna get here,?
Bette and Tina look at
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(43 votes, average: 3.49 out of 5)
great post. fun day at the beach. Can’t wait. Please Post soon.=P
Great, Dana and Jake really hit it off and that is mucho good. Maybe they will become a family, also. Like the way this has started.
I absolutely love this story. I like little Jake he is soo cute and I can see him looking just like Alice. Plus, how cool is that, he and Dana already like each other. Cheers mate…
What a pleasant surprise! I love that Dana is sweating it out because she thinks there is a guy in the picture. I also like the mellow tone you’ve given Alice – must be motherhood… :-)
I love this story so much, it is amazing. please continue. I can’t wait for the next post.
This is too cute. Love Jake and Dana. Come on to the beach please.
That’s the first thing I tought…the father of Jake must have been one of the one night stands of Alice’s…and so it is. I loved this chapter!! So will Dana win Alice’s heart (*who wouldn’t melt by seeing the interaction between Dana and Jake :P*)?? :D
great update! yes… please post soon.
I’m really enjoying the story. Post soon. Good Job.
Thanks for the post. I’m really liking this storyline and looking forward to seeing the direction things go. Keeping my fingers crossed for all things good and Danish.
This is good and like the way Dana and Jake have. Ok let see what’s next, thanks!
I really love this. Cant wait for more!
Loved this update! Look forward to their day at the beach.
This story is great. I like the entirely different take on the whole group. I can’t wait till the beach! It’s gonna be Danish in the making. Yes I’m sure they’ll have some bumps to go over but it’s always going to be them in the end.