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London to LA Ch3
With the conversation turning to jakes father and the looks she is getting from the everyone,
Jake – oh mum
Bette – Alice what are you and Jake up to on Saturday afternoon, it’s just that we are having a BBQ at home, it would be great if you and Jake could come. Angelica and some of her friends will be there so the kids could entertain themselves. Leave us grown up to catch up.
Shane – look al, me and Carmen will come over and give you a hand,
Jake – Dana are you coming to our house on Saturday too?
Dana – umm I could, sure. If it’s ok with your mum
Jake – can she please?
Shane – look al, please let us help we all want to ok.
Shane – ok great, I’ll call you Friday and you can let me know what time
They say their goodbyes and
Dana -Hey al ?
Dana – oh sorry, look I was wondering, if you well, you and Jake, were like errm, well you know, oh god… it doesn’t matter,
Dana turns to walk away, when she feels
Dana – well I wondered if you and Jake wanted to do something tomorrow if you weren’t to busy or any thing, its just that I have angelica for the day and we are going to the beach and …
Dana – you do? Cool ok, ummm I’ll pick you at say 10 you think you can be awake for that al
Dana – ok I’ll see you tomorrow bye
Dana – its ok I’ll get it from Shane. See you tomorrow Al.
Alice and Jake got in the car and drove off, Jake waving at Dana. Dana stood there with the biggest grin in the world on her face. This was a day that she thought would never ever come. She was happier now than she had been in the last 5 years.
tbc
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(43 votes, average: 3.49 out of 5)
great post. fun day at the beach. Can’t wait. Please Post soon.=P
Great, Dana and Jake really hit it off and that is mucho good. Maybe they will become a family, also. Like the way this has started.
I absolutely love this story. I like little Jake he is soo cute and I can see him looking just like Alice. Plus, how cool is that, he and Dana already like each other. Cheers mate…
What a pleasant surprise! I love that Dana is sweating it out because she thinks there is a guy in the picture. I also like the mellow tone you’ve given Alice – must be motherhood… :-)
I love this story so much, it is amazing. please continue. I can’t wait for the next post.
This is too cute. Love Jake and Dana. Come on to the beach please.
That’s the first thing I tought…the father of Jake must have been one of the one night stands of Alice’s…and so it is. I loved this chapter!! So will Dana win Alice’s heart (*who wouldn’t melt by seeing the interaction between Dana and Jake :P*)?? :D
great update! yes… please post soon.
I’m really enjoying the story. Post soon. Good Job.
Thanks for the post. I’m really liking this storyline and looking forward to seeing the direction things go. Keeping my fingers crossed for all things good and Danish.
This is good and like the way Dana and Jake have. Ok let see what’s next, thanks!
I really love this. Cant wait for more!
Loved this update! Look forward to their day at the beach.
This story is great. I like the entirely different take on the whole group. I can’t wait till the beach! It’s gonna be Danish in the making. Yes I’m sure they’ll have some bumps to go over but it’s always going to be them in the end.