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    Life: Altered 03.12 ~*~ Breathe In, Breathe Out

    Story written on November 27, 2005 by Janet Marie.
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    Story Shortlink: https://assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=57914
    Author Notes:

    Dana does something un-Dana-like – Peggy Peabody makes a date – Shane finds a new home – Shane tells Dana about a secret – Bette breaks things off with Candace – Tina talks to her mom – Alice finally breaks down some of Quin’s walls – Cassandra and Tina get closer

                “Hands are shaking hard now.  You’ve
    fallen and can’t stand the pain.  Just
    clear your mind.  Let it flow.  Can you see it all now.  Time to fly.  Breath In. Breath out    .” Sang Quin,
    her voice hard and on the edge of insanity as she sang the lyrics she’d
    written, then Alice volleyed back with the other side of the
    coin to the same story.

                “Take your time.  How can you let
    it all go.  Everything you’ve ever meant
    to me.  All the heartache.  The compromise.  Take it slow.  Breath In. Breath out.”      Alice sang and her voice much higher than
    Maddy’s but sweet and smooth to Quin’s hard and passionate one.

                “All I want is just one taste.  Never to be erased.  One memory to take with me.  I’m taking over.  This is my last stand.  Tired of sleeping.  Time to wake up.  Time to strike.  Breath in. Breath out .”  Sang Quin, tearing into the song, and Maddy
    had to grin, Clapp was nodding his head and Doogie seemed to be getting a woody
    from behind the drum kit. Alice sang a semi chorus, and Quin emphasized some of
    the words, that told her story too.

                “Just take a breath .  Come back
    to me.  How can you let it all go .  The things we’ve meant to each other.  This is your last chance .  Take a glance.  At what you’ll leave behind .  Take it slow.    ”  They sang and Quin virtually screamed, on
    pitch and Alice looked over at her, their gaze meeting for that fleeting moment
    and Alice knew she had her.

                “Go!  A!  WAY!  ” A tearing solo by Keith and Alice tried not
    look at Quin again, not wanting the magic to be gone, and Quin glanced at her
    once more, with a heat in her eyes that Alice thought would burn her if it
    could have.

                “I only know, the time has come.  To
    do things left undone.  I let it go.  The pain.  The pleasure.  The time of hidden passions.  Time to take.  It’s mine to take.  Breath In. Breath out    .” Quin looked
    at Alice and they finished the song together, or rather against each other,
    singing it just as Alice had written it, two sides to every story, to every relationship,
    to every life.

                Quin: Breath In



                Alice: Breath out

                Quin: Gotta fight thru the pain

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    3. Tina w/ Cassandra, Bette w/ Candace excellent pairings. Tina & Bette seem to function better w/ other people. I may be one of the few people who liked the character of Candace. I would like to see where you take this couple. Poor Shane hope she sends Steve’s ass to jail. Guess Cherie hasn’t visited (if she’s still alive), not surprised she was all about self.

    4. OH what a nice way to wipe the day out of my mind, I see I have a lot of JM reading to catch up on. OK and bette smells like wood LMAO!!! that was fucking hilarious. Alrighty off to read your other story.

    5. I feel so sad about Shane!!! She could talk to Bette and showed her that she made a big mistake!! I’d like Tina does not cheat Bette before she find out her infidelity. And I still want Bette feels a lot of guilty and pain!!!Nice post!!!

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