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    Letting Go – Chapter eight

    Story written on August 17, 2005 by smile12345.
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    Story Shortlink: https://assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=56099
    Author Notes:

    Bette and Tina still in art class.

     

    “Of course,” Bette walked directly behind Tina, and started giving her pointers by showing her how to size and measure for proportion.  Bette wanted to guide Tina’s hand with her own, but she was scared to, she didn’t want to make Tina feel uncomfortable again so she tried to keep her distance.

     

    Once again, this was driving Alice crazy, she didn’t make Tina sit down and draw so she could see Bette not come into direct contact with Tina.

     

    ‘Sheesh, do I have to do EVERYTHING myself?’

     

    Alice was always considered nosey, but she never bothered to interfere with Bette’s relationships, because she knew that Bette wasn’t serious about the women she dated in the past.  With Tina, everything about Bette suddenly became different, Bette cared about her own presence in front of Tina, she had to watch what she said, and most of all, she was incredibly nervous every time she was near Tina. 

     

    From the moment Alice realized that Bette was beginning to fall for Tina, she knew she had to do something for her best friend.  Bette had distanced herself for so long from the world that it seemed like she forgot what being happy felt like, what loving someone would feel like and the feeling of completeness it would bring into a life.  Alice was determined to make this work for Bette, Bette had suffered from self isolation for too long and it was time for her to begin a new chapter in her life.

     

    “Ms. Porter, I don’t think she’s getting it, why don’t you just help her a little bit more?”  As Alice was speaking, she took Bette’s right hand and brought it above Tina’s right hand, where Alice then made Bette wrap her fingers around Tina’s.

     

    The touch of their hands sent a wave of shocks to their hearts causing it to beat more rapidly.  When Bette’s hand touched Tina, she let out a small uncontrollable gasp that made her lean back and sent her head directly below Bette’s chin and into her shoulders.  As Tina leaned back, Bette felt herself shuddering which caused her to naturally move forward bringing herself closer to Tina as Bette’s grip on Tina tightened.

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    1. smile, dont underestimate ur ability to make me enjoy ur story!! ha ha! the whole singing and sketching thing was really simple.. someone would sing and i would let the ‘artist’ in me take over..LOL!! yeah, well, anyway… i dont do that anymore! thanks for the story!

    2. hi smile! Guess what? I’m still lovin’ this story! And guess what else?? I’m now so screwed on the whole time thing! Ugh! I can’t believe I’ve gone and gotten myself hooked on another FF author! I hate me right now! (But I do love this story!)

    3. Moving right along. Great pace. Do you think you could perhaps drop your life and write 10 chapters a day, though? Sorry, can’t stand to be left hanging.

    5. i hate myuself too moonshadow. i read so many damn stories i get so confused at who im reading half the time.

      smile. your pacing is great. no need to rush. i really like this beginning. eric who? poor tinas got it bad, but who wouldnt with a bette after her. like the other poster said dont sell yourself short. your doing a great job. and could you drop your life and write 10 chappys a day. hehe. that was great. i.love.alice. i need a good al after what chickis doing with hers. thanks and post soon.

    6. Smile, I’m telling you this is jut too nerve racking. I keep leaning in farther to read just waiting, always on the edge and then never quite making it. Love the narrative with Alice, that girl just cracks me up and you write her so well you can almost see and hear her. Love all the shyness and being coy between Bette and Tina. And if you have okay maybe Eric can hang for a little while but only a little.

    7. ‘I’m not going to let go of you Tina, I know you’re the one.’

      ‘Please don’t ever let go, Bette. I might struggle to loosen your grip, but it’s only because I want you to hold on tighter.’

      Ok, call me a sucker…but I’m a big azz sap when it comes to romance!

      Another exquiste chapter….and thank you Smile for giving it length…..QQg 4wrd 2 the next 1!

    8. AWWW … DAMN BELLS!!! LOL! This is such a sweet story. I am really enjoying it. Keep the chapters coming; and, I’ll keep reading them. I love this story, btw. It’s cute, sweet, refreshing and has a bit of a nostalgic feel to it. Thanks for writing it.

    10. awww i love it!!!! your amazing!! i feel so happy lol its sooo great ok well your amazing and i love it your so good at this lol ok well ill shut up now cause im rambling lol but its kool ok well yeah ok please post again soon! thanx byeness<3389274892759827

    11. I’ve been a silent reader for a while now. I love this story. It has such an innocent sweetness about it. Thank you for a different outlook. Keep up the good work.

    13. HEY SMILE12345 your story is NOT GOING DOWN HILL I LOVE IT…….When you are ready for NC_17 LOOK OUT EVERYBODY……I understand they can’t sleep together yet, but a girl could wish for it *BLUSHING*I thought you did a fabulous job on this chapter and I hope you keep it GOING PLEASE………post soon.

    14. That was great. Sorry, fell behind a bit there, but I’m back. Loving this. Okay, now, we have to have one of these two be more assertive, since Alice won’t be at lunch with them. I don’t think I could handle them being inches away from kissing, and backing away again. Post again, soon, please.

    17. Good chapter. Still love and wait for you story. The moment Bette and Tina touch hands its amazing and sweet. Love what Alice do for Bette and Tina and funny about bracelet. Ok please post soon, thanks!

    18. Hey!! I’m gonna leave a super long comment… haha… here goes…

      ‘Oh my god, Tina wasn’t lying when she said she didn’t draw. Look at that, it sucks. What the hell is she doing?’

      ‘Sheesh, do I have to do EVERYTHING myself?’

      Hahahahahaha… it still cracks me up after reading it for the erm… 3rd or 4th? Or more Times…??

      ‘Please don’t ever let go, Bette. I might struggle to loosen your grip, but it’s only because I want you to hold on tighter.’

      Oh God…. helppppp!!!!… I can’t breatttthhhhh… This is sooooooooooooo goooooooooooddddd… More than good…

      You can certainly do more than anything without me… don’t doubt your writing ability anymore, see… you’ve such a great writing and can come up with such a GREAT STORY!!!

      Can I have a friend like the Alice you’re creating? Haha

      Oh my, hahaha… looks like we’ll have to wait longer for NC-17 as they haven’t even kissed!! :P

      Can I have more… like… right now?!?! :)

      Jolin: “Love, love… love…”
      Zabo’s version: “Great, great… great…”

      Haha :)

    19. oh my. thank God for Alice. otherwise it would take like 50 chapters for them to share their first kiss. ok maybe I am stretching it a bit but it would take a long time. the pace is perfect, and I look forward to your next post.

    20. you’re doing a real nice job with this story but i must say that Im hating that bell right now really hating it lol cant wait to see what happens at lunch… please post soon!

    21. Hey Smile that was so Beautiful Story I Love it I just back to the party LOL! and then I check if you posted yes you did Whoa! Thanks Please post soon.

    23. Vi…it was a charm that belongs to a bracelet that Tina found. And Bette was looking for it real hard.

      I’m so into this story. It seems so real and I love the fact that Alice is protecting these two. If the students found out, all hell would break lose and B&T could not steal these special moments any longer. I can’t wait for the lunch tomorrow! Kiitos!

    26. hee hee… can’t wait for your next post… you’ve kept me on the edge of my seat and verbalizing their thoughts is a nice visual aid for articulating the imagery.

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