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Letting Go – chapter nine
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Chapter nine:
Tina’s breathing finally settled back to normal when she reached her car. Thoughts of what happened minutes ago between Bette and her replayed itself. Tina could feel her pulse beating against her skin and her heart pounding searching for a release; it was as if her pulse and her heart were in a race, one would try to beat the other, and when one sped up, the other would follow close behind.
As Tina started her engine, both her hands grabbed onto the top of the steering wheel. Her brain couldn’t take in anymore information so Tina gave in and settled her forehead onto the backs of her palms.
‘What am I going to do?’ Tina wasn’t sure of Bette’s feelings towards her, but she knew what she felt for Bette. The idea of breaking up with Eric had been lingering in her mind, but could she actually break up with him? Even if she did, so what? Did she even have a chance with Bette?
No, she couldn’t think about this anymore, she had to get to discussion. Whatever happens happens. Not like her thinking could make the situation any better.
As Tina was driving to campus for her discussion class, she couldn’t help but wonder about the bracelet she saw on Bette’s wrist. Was that the one, could that be the one that she found outside the library three weeks ago?
Even if it was the same bracelet, so what? Would it make any difference, did it mean anything, anything at all? It’s not like the key on her necklace would’ve been the key for that lock.
‘Yeah right,’ but Tina couldn’t stop herself from thinking, everything that happened at the library and with everything that happened today. She began piecing the events together like a puzzle. She needed to see the end result, and she wanted to complete that picture. Tina thought back to that day three weeks ago.
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[Flashback to three weeks ago:]
Who the ***** cares if it was her birthday? There was nothing to celebrate, just another day to be miserable, another day to think that life was empty and meaningless. Sure, Tina had a loving family, friendships that would last a lifetime, and a boyfriend that would do anything for her. What was missing in her life? Tina couldn’t help but feel the emptiness grow and spread through every inch of her body, it spread like an incurable disease.
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Hey, I was about to ask you how’re u doing with your chap9. But surprise surprise, I log on and found your Chappy 9… Yippee… :D
Oh girl, your story is not going downhill, it’s still approaching it’s peak :) You’re doing so great, stop worrying about that anymore, focus more on your next chapter :P
Haha, again, you’ll still be doing great or much more better without my ‘help’ :P Hahaha, how can I not laugh at those dialogues, just picture the drawing that Tina was working on that made Alice quoted that way really cracks me up, and still do :D Hahahaha, hey, I really do find it romantic… super romantic of what Tina thought to Bette :) C’mon, appreciate your own writing a bit.
What what? Hahaha… you’re not trying to make Bette let go won’t u? Noooooo…
Hahaha, bad bad Bette, thinking of those… thoughts… but who can help themselves with a goddess in front of them?
Ok, now bring on the lunch and the clubbing night. :D
Oh fuck this is drama and what is Bette gonna do about this news, is she still go out with Tina for luch for tomorrow. Oh is Tina is Jamie’s sister, if its right that is a good twist. Ok post soon please, thanks!
hey smile! iam completely hooked to ur story.. please continue!
I think the story is great you should keep it going!!!!!
Tina must say no. Eric can cry back to Kelly. Please post soon because we need more. ; )
oh no!!
Hi Smile I want you to continue the story… I like it very much… Just have Tina to say no….Great chapter post soon
continuing to enjoy your story… you’re doing great!
Hey this is Amazing Please continue I Love it post soon Thanks.
I’m thinking Tina is Jamie’s sister.
umm… sure… right… you don’t know what you were writing. So, Tina and Eric are doing the enggagement thingy huh. Hmm… the tug and war game is sure getting more intriguing.
K,
loved this chapter. oh the possibilities!!! I can’t wait to see if Tina breaks up with Eric and goes out to the club with the girls. so is Kelly and Eric going to end up together? hmmmm. oh yeah I love Jamie, she seems fun. with her and Alice talking some sense into Bette, she should be able to deal. but who does Tina have to talk to?
please post soon. love this beginning.
Whoa,is Jamie, Tina’s sister? That would be so funny, how they are connected in different ways. Wow, proposal?! Poor Eric, is going to be so disappointed. But, then Kelly would be happy to make him feel better, I’m sure. Hope Bette doesn’t just give up and let Tina slip away.
OK….somehow Bette has to get to T’s apartment tonight and tell her how she feels…and then the ball is in T’s court..
Thanks for the update smile…and you do have to continue this amazing story here….we want more girl…..and regarding my own story..well the next chapter is comming along nicely and will be up in the beginning of next week……do post soon
Smile, please keep posting; you’re doing great.
nzgrl, you just may be on to something; I didnt put the 2 together until your comment.
sile why wouldnt you continue this story. its great the storyline is great. if you know where your going lead and well follow. someone needs to take charge here. will it be bette, tina , alice. clubbing sounds great for them just to chill.
nzgrl interesting idea.
HEY SMILE’S PLEASE CONTINUE THIS STORY..YOUR DOING AN EXCELLENT JOB..I like Jamie she seems cool..OH and Sag’s aren’t that Bad I happen to be one..and traditionally,Sagitarrians are the hunters of the zodiac.In love,as the other areas of their lives,the challenge of the chase is all-engrossing,and may even be more exciting than the capture.PLEASE POST SOON…THANK YOU
Oh Dear Heart, I sincerely do think you need to continue with this story. Besides, the locket, I suspect, is going to play an important role in the B&T relationship. Do not give up….this story is definately going somewhere. Five Twinklers!
Great story….please continue with your excellent writing as long it´s a happy B&T story :o))