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Letting Go – chapter 20
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*knock knock*
“Sorry, I didn’t mean to interrupt, but I just needed to know whether or not you’re spending the night here.” Joanna didn’t step into Tina’s room, she just peaked her head inside the door.
“I…uhh…” was spending the night appropriate? Would Joanna be upset? She did seem to emphasize the point that Eric had never even slept over here before. Should she, would she, could she?
“Don’t worry, I’m not interrogating you, yet. If you are, then I’m gonna go out so I was just wondering.”
“Yeah, go ahead, I think we’ll be fine. Tina seems to be sleeping pretty well, so…”
“Sweet. Well, if you want, just grab some clothes from Tina’s dresser and change into them, and you can just scoot her ***** over to one side of the bed so you don’t have to sleep on that chair. Or, if you want to, just take any of the two other rooms. K?” Without giving Bette any time to answer, she closed the door, and left.
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Tina’s throat, mouth, lungs, and body could no longer stand the dehydration. The thirst for water caused her to wake up at
‘What the ***** happened?’ Tina opened her eyes and rubbed her head with her hand hoping to get rid of that headache. The small ray of light that emitted through the window faintly shined onto her bed where Tina saw a body on the other side of her bed.
‘Oh God, Eric?!’ How did Eric get here? The last thing Tina remembered was finding out that Bette and Eric knew each other. Somewhat startled, Tina didn’t have much time to run her action thoroughly through her mind, and in some way of self defense, she kicked that body causing it to roll and fall onto the ground.
“Ow! *****! *****! Son of a…” Bette woke and found herself on the floor in pain with the wind knocked out of her.
“Oh my God! Bette?” Tina turned on the light by her bed stand, and ran over to the other side of her room making sure she was okay. “I’m so sorry; I thought you were…are you okay?” Tina helped pick Bette off the ground and sat a hunched over Bette clenching to her stomach down on to the bed.
“Damn it, Tina! What’d you do that for?” Bette asked.
“Bette, I’m so sorry. I really didn’t mean to do that on purpose. It’s just, I’m not used to someone else sleeping on my bed, and so when I noticed another body, I…I freaked out.”
“Well, you certainly freaked me out.”
“I’m sorry, are you okay? Can I get you anything?” Tina sat on the bed next to Bette with her arms wrapped around Bette’s body.
Still in pain, Bette managed a weak smile and half jokingly said, “Well, you can kiss the boo-boo you made, and make it better.”
End of chapter 20.
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Sorry guys, quick question. I have an idea of a story brewing up which involves more drama (Not super hardcore, but more…) would you guys want it in this story OR should I just save it for another?
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I have enjoyed your story. If you will write another story, if we say save the hardcore drama for another story, then save it. But please continue with this story, lightheartedly(is that a word)? Thanks
Not so into the “hard core” drama with this particular story. I believe an alternate venue would do nicely… B&T are gonna get it together in this story any time now… I just know it:-) Please post soon!
hey smile–go for it. I am sure it will be great, just continue soon Thanks
Still loving this story. Now that Tina is sober, is she ready to take the next step? Can’t wait for your next chapter.
enough of the hard core unless its an NC-17, lol. please no. tina really is having enough to deal with right now.
oops. sorry i enjoyed this chappy. glad hse threw up on eric. that should tell him volumes. love her sister. her mom reminds me of mine. so keep her away from me. heehee. please again soon. thanks. i think al needs to help with this also. maybe hook up with tinas sister.
more drama is cool, just keep this story going, please. It’s really fun – and a little drama is good for you now and then!
hey you are back. as much as I love happy B and T, a little drama never hurts. so please carry on.
Good chapter. Tina so cute when she’s drunk, glad Bette there with her and they so cute together, Joanne is so cool. Ok well now I think its time for drama and let see what’s next, thanks!
OMG you posted! Where have ya been? p.s
“WHY, why would Tina break-up with such a great man? WHY WHY WHY?!’ “
lmao. (your’e funny)
you can bring on the drama. Just keep writing, please. This story, new one, or both. post soon
ummm i think you should do what feels right you know?!?! weell anyways amazing story and please post soon thanx byeness<33
*waving at the screen*. Smile where have you been my mind has missed you terribly. I love reading this story and I can’t wait for more. As far as the hardcore drama, I leave that up to you, I trust your judgment. This is a great story and I don’t want it to end anytime soon, so do what you must.
Listen, I’m going into the hospital on the 18th for surgery and will be in for at least 5 or 6 days. Please tell me that when I get home, there will be more of this story for me to read. I will be off work for probably 6 weeks so I’m counting on you and some of the other fan fic writers to keep me entertained during my recovery.
This is after all your story and it has not had the heavy stuff. Do as you must for the sake of the story. Enjoying it. Seems tht the girls will get together before too long, so let’s try not to have any rough stuff. Thanks
Really like this story, was afraid you forgot about it…I’ll read whatever you write…your choice…tks post soon
LOL, Bette got kicked off from the bed. Drama… hmm… not too heavy ya!?
This chapter was HILARIOUS! I couldn’t stop laughing at Tina kicking “the body” out of her bed. Great stuff.
If your new idea involving more drama would fit into this story, have at it. If not, you should start another. It’s your story, do what you will. I’m sure it will be great either way!
Enjoying this story, It really sweet and tender. Finish this one and give us a new one. thanks
Okay first, I mean this in the sincerest way BUT where the F**k have you been??? I was seriously missing your story…lol!! Don’t go away for an extended amount of time,this site is the dealer and the stories are the drugs. I need my fix before I die of withdrawals. Okay I have gotten that off my chest, now for the comments. I am loving this chapter, when is Bette going to meet the other sister who by the way (what a small world) is her hair stylist??? I love drama so what ever drama you have cooking please bring it into the fold. It will make the story that much interesting!!! Please post soon!!!
Wow, good thing I wasn’t holding my breath waiting for this chapter:) We’ve missed you!!!
Hi Smile… Great chapter… Well I think you should put the hard core drama in a other story. I like the lightness in this story… Because then I would have two storys to read from you… And that would be fantastic… But in the end it is you who deside what you want to do… Please post soon ;-)
snQQpy why did you make my comment green:-)lol
great story, i love her sister she is a freaking blast. Hope to read more soon… so please post soon :-) ;-)
Nice to see you´re back smile…wonderful update as always….love the fact Tina kicked Bette out of bed…that made me laugh.
If you want to put drama into this story it would be ok with me, you know I love drama. But it is your call if you want to write a second story just as long as you continue this one as well. Do post soon and yes I have already finished chapter 30 in my story today…just profreading it and hopefully it will be up and running tomorrow and yes I´m writing on chap. 31 so writersblock is gone this time.
Really enjoy this story smile keep it going you can through in the drama if thats what you want!
Hmmm. . .tough question. . .drama. . no drama. . .well, not-so-hard-core-drama is cool. . .AS LONG AS there’s some love, happiness and passion thrown in the mix. . .but hey, you’re the writer. . .keep us on our toes! Ewww the puke part was SOO GROSS. . .but the freakin meatball thing totally cracked me up! Lovin this story as always, please post again soon.
I can handle the drama infact I love it! Wether you inclued it in this story or onother I am definetly reading. Just keep writting and I will be happy.
Hey Smile What this is really Good Awesome Story and I’m just really happy to read it I’m really enjoy reading of this come on it’s really good chemistry with Tina and Bette I Love it and it’s getting funny too so Please continue Please Thanks!!!
GREAT JOB SMILES…Please keep this GREAT story going..THANKS..
Sure bring on the drama, I haven’t been on a good rollecoaster ride in a long time. Just keep writing.
I say take your story where you want to because this story totally rocks. Great chapter keep up the great work and please post soon.
good story! and yeah, let’s bring in some more drama :-)(provided they end up together ofcourse!)
…..his words were swallowed when Tina threw-up, …..Bette gave Tina a quick peck on the lips, and pushed herself up from the bed using her arms.
Ewwwwwww…..now that’s love cause my gilrs’ 1st stop would have been straight to the bathroom w/ some Colgate & Scope!
“Sweet. Well, if you want, just grab some clothes from Tina’s dresser and change into them, and you can just scoot her ass over to one side of the bed so you don’t have to sleep on that chair. Or, if you want to, just take any of the two other rooms. K?”
I like Joanna……a lot.
Sorry guys, quick question. I have an idea of a story brewing up which involves more drama (Not super hardcore, but more…) would you guys want it in this story OR should I just save it for another?
(running around in circles) ** singing ** DRAMA DRAMA DRAMA DRAMA DRAMA DRAMA ….. (insert wicked grin here)
Me particuarly Am not in to hard core,so I love tis story so put it in some other story
please save it for another story, this one is great as it is. please post soon :D
Drama heh… bring it on :) when she saw my messy bed with my clothes all over. Well, there’s no harm to get lazy sometimes right? Hehe ;)
Wow… it has been 2 week? I had to re-read Chap19 to recall where you’d stopped :P
Tina is sooooooooo cute when she’s drunk :) Yeah, she shouldn’t be drinking after her 21st birthday ‘incident’ ^-^ Kick off ‘the body’ on the bed? Gosh… that’s dangerous. :D haha
Yeah, I’m getting lazier too… today my ‘cute’ roommate was like “You’ve changeeeddd… why are you getting lazier…”
A little drama is fine, please keep posting.
I don’t this story is ready for the harcore drama, maybe later or in a differnt story. Good Chapter. Good Job.
Glad your back with this update. Hah, how picture perfect was it for Tina to lose it on Eric. Don’t know if I want hard core drama in this one, cos they’ve already got so much going on. But it you do, can you make sure it come back around for the girls.