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    Letting Go – chapter 20

    Story written on October 9, 2005 by smile12345.
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    Story Shortlink: https://assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=57016
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    It’s been a long night!

    Chapter 20:

     

    “Whoops!” A mildly drunken Tina said as she missed the meatball with her fork causing it to roll off her plate, onto her sweatpants, and finally splatting onto the ground.  She leaned her loose body towards Bette as her hands roamed the floor in search of that missing meatball.

     

    “I can’t find it,” Tina pouted her lips.  A mere second later, she forgot what she was doing and leaned her head on Bette’s shoulder as she let out a small giggle.  “Wow, you’re so hot, Bette!  Mom, isn’t Bette hot?”

     

    Yeah…this was an awkward situation.  Ms. Kennard, Eric, and Joanna were now staring at Bette and Tina.  If only Tina could be this friendly towards Eric when she was sober!

     

    Joanna rolled her eyes and shook her head giving a I knew this was going to happen look.  “Okay, Tina, yes, Bette is so hot!”  Emphasizing at the ‘so.’ She pulled onto her sister’s arm in an attempt to straighten her body.

     

    Nope, it didn’t work, Tina was now leaning her head on Joanna’s shoulders.  She saw Eric sitting right there, across from her. 

     

    “Hi Eric!!”  Tina waved.  “Well, I know you’re dying to find out my answer.  Well, I’ve been dying to tell you.  I’m sooooooooo,” Tina prolonged that ‘so’ as she shook her head while saying it, “in love with…”

     

    ‘*****! Tina’s going to ***** this up!’ Joanna started to get frantic.  Of course she didn’t want Tina to marry someone she didn’t love, and she knew Tina was going to dump Eric right then and there.  Yes!  Ding!  But no, Tina couldn’t do this now, not at a dinner table while she was drunk, in front of their mother, and with Bette right there.  The consequences would be so much worse, and Tina would regret that later on.  She had to do something, and she had to do something before it was too late.  Joanna searched around the table for something, anything.  Her eyes stopped on Tina’s plate finding her half eaten garlic bread strategically placed at the corner of her plate so the marinara sauce wouldn’t get on it.

     

    “Tina!  You didn’t finish your garlic bread!”  Joanna shoved that half eaten piece of bread into Tina’s mouth.

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    1. I have enjoyed your story. If you will write another story, if we say save the hardcore drama for another story, then save it. But please continue with this story, lightheartedly(is that a word)? Thanks

    2. Not so into the “hard core” drama with this particular story. I believe an alternate venue would do nicely… B&T are gonna get it together in this story any time now… I just know it:-) Please post soon!

    6. oops. sorry i enjoyed this chappy. glad hse threw up on eric. that should tell him volumes. love her sister. her mom reminds me of mine. so keep her away from me. heehee. please again soon. thanks. i think al needs to help with this also. maybe hook up with tinas sister.

    9. Good chapter. Tina so cute when she’s drunk, glad Bette there with her and they so cute together, Joanne is so cool. Ok well now I think its time for drama and let see what’s next, thanks!

    13. *waving at the screen*. Smile where have you been my mind has missed you terribly. I love reading this story and I can’t wait for more. As far as the hardcore drama, I leave that up to you, I trust your judgment. This is a great story and I don’t want it to end anytime soon, so do what you must.

      Listen, I’m going into the hospital on the 18th for surgery and will be in for at least 5 or 6 days. Please tell me that when I get home, there will be more of this story for me to read. I will be off work for probably 6 weeks so I’m counting on you and some of the other fan fic writers to keep me entertained during my recovery.

    14. This is after all your story and it has not had the heavy stuff. Do as you must for the sake of the story. Enjoying it. Seems tht the girls will get together before too long, so let’s try not to have any rough stuff. Thanks

    17. This chapter was HILARIOUS! I couldn’t stop laughing at Tina kicking “the body” out of her bed. Great stuff.
      If your new idea involving more drama would fit into this story, have at it. If not, you should start another. It’s your story, do what you will. I’m sure it will be great either way!

    19. Okay first, I mean this in the sincerest way BUT where the F**k have you been??? I was seriously missing your story…lol!! Don’t go away for an extended amount of time,this site is the dealer and the stories are the drugs. I need my fix before I die of withdrawals. Okay I have gotten that off my chest, now for the comments. I am loving this chapter, when is Bette going to meet the other sister who by the way (what a small world) is her hair stylist??? I love drama so what ever drama you have cooking please bring it into the fold. It will make the story that much interesting!!! Please post soon!!!

    21. Hi Smile… Great chapter… Well I think you should put the hard core drama in a other story. I like the lightness in this story… Because then I would have two storys to read from you… And that would be fantastic… But in the end it is you who deside what you want to do… Please post soon ;-)

    24. Nice to see you´re back smile…wonderful update as always….love the fact Tina kicked Bette out of bed…that made me laugh.
      If you want to put drama into this story it would be ok with me, you know I love drama. But it is your call if you want to write a second story just as long as you continue this one as well. Do post soon and yes I have already finished chapter 30 in my story today…just profreading it and hopefully it will be up and running tomorrow and yes I´m writing on chap. 31 so writersblock is gone this time.

    26. Hmmm. . .tough question. . .drama. . no drama. . .well, not-so-hard-core-drama is cool. . .AS LONG AS there’s some love, happiness and passion thrown in the mix. . .but hey, you’re the writer. . .keep us on our toes! Ewww the puke part was SOO GROSS. . .but the freakin meatball thing totally cracked me up! Lovin this story as always, please post again soon.

    28. Hey Smile What this is really Good Awesome Story and I’m just really happy to read it I’m really enjoy reading of this come on it’s really good chemistry with Tina and Bette I Love it and it’s getting funny too so Please continue Please Thanks!!!

    33. …..his words were swallowed when Tina threw-up, …..Bette gave Tina a quick peck on the lips, and pushed herself up from the bed using her arms.
      Ewwwwwww…..now that’s love cause my gilrs’ 1st stop would have been straight to the bathroom w/ some Colgate & Scope!

      “Sweet. Well, if you want, just grab some clothes from Tina’s dresser and change into them, and you can just scoot her ass over to one side of the bed so you don’t have to sleep on that chair. Or, if you want to, just take any of the two other rooms. K?”
      I like Joanna……a lot.

      Sorry guys, quick question. I have an idea of a story brewing up which involves more drama (Not super hardcore, but more…) would you guys want it in this story OR should I just save it for another?
      (running around in circles) ** singing ** DRAMA DRAMA DRAMA DRAMA DRAMA DRAMA ….. (insert wicked grin here)

      BRING IT!

    36. Drama heh… bring it on :)
      Wow… it has been 2 week? I had to re-read Chap19 to recall where you’d stopped :P
      Tina is sooooooooo cute when she’s drunk :) Yeah, she shouldn’t be drinking after her 21st birthday ‘incident’ ^-^ Kick off ‘the body’ on the bed? Gosh… that’s dangerous. :D haha
      Yeah, I’m getting lazier too… today my ‘cute’ roommate was like “You’ve changeeeddd… why are you getting lazier…” when she saw my messy bed with my clothes all over. Well, there’s no harm to get lazy sometimes right? Hehe ;)

    39. Glad your back with this update. Hah, how picture perfect was it for Tina to lose it on Eric. Don’t know if I want hard core drama in this one, cos they’ve already got so much going on. But it you do, can you make sure it come back around for the girls.

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