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    I’ve Got You Under My Skin – Chapter 5

     
    Tina thinks to herself, “that was quite a nice accident”.  Bette’s hand against Tina’s
    breast sent chills down her spine.  Tina’s already erect nipple grows even harder.
     
    Bette:  “We don’t have the best of luck in my hallway, now do we?”
     
    Tina:  (chuckling)  “Yeah, I guess not.  Ummm . . . can I use your bathroom again to
    change?”
     
    Bette:  “Sure, I will be in my room changing if you need me.”
     
    As soon as those words came out of Bette’s mouth she thought to herself, “Slick Porter, real slick.  What the ***** was that?  Why the ***** did I say ‘if you need me.’  God, I would love to have her needing me . . .okay, Porter, get a hold of herself.”  Bette hadn’t felt this way about anyone in quite sometime.  The normal Bette would have taken advantage of the situation and would have looked for an opportunity  to ***** around.  But, this wasn’t the case with Tina.  There was definitely something different about her and Bette was determined to take the time to find out.
     
    Meanwhile . . . Outside at the Pool
     
    Alice:  “Dane, did you notice the extra attention Bette was giving to Miss Tina?”
     
    Dana:  “Yeah, I picked up on it.”
     
    Alice:  “Damn.   Porter always gets whoever she wants.  I don’t know how she does it.”
     
    Dana:  “Yeah, her and Shane.  What do they have that I don’t have?”
     
    Alice:  “Do you really want me to answer that?”
     
    Dana:  “***** you.”
     
    Alice:  “I’m kidding . . . calm down.  (laughing) I know one thing they have that you don’t.”
     
    Dana:  “Oh, yeah?  What’s that?”
     
    Alice:  “Gaydar.”
     
    Dana and Alice both start laughing hysterically as both Bette and Tina walk back towards the two of them.
     
    Bette:  “You girls ready?”
     
    Alice:  “Yep.”
     
    Bette:  “Alice, do you want to stay the night here or do you want me to drop you off at home
    and just leave your car here tonight?” 
     
    Alice:  “Actually I was thinking of crashing at Dana’s tonight.  Dana is that alright?”
     
    Dana:  “Yeah, I don’t care.”
     
    Bette:  “Okay, shall we?”
     
    Bette takes the girls to Dana’s first and insists on helping them get into the door.  At

    Comments

    1. I’ve just done the Eveyln Wood speed reading course catching up with this story. Love it, its so cute and refreshing. You’ve got the two bozos (Alice/Dana) down, and our two girls, hook up coming. I’m with the others, kinda was waiting for them both to realize they had bumped into each other before. Totally looking forward to your next update.

    2. Well that’s good, they got to know each other before jumping to a quick judgement, because of their little accident. Lucky for Bette, that’s for sure. It figures Bette didn’t recognize Tina from their morning run-in. Hope this smoothes things over some, before Tina realizes who Bette is. Great post. More, please.

    3. I really like your story and was excited to see your post tonight (I was just about to log off). I thought their first meeting would happen entirely different and wondered how they would ever get past their disgust for each other to like each other. So, this is an interesting turn although it is hard to believe that Bette did not recognize the farm girl’s voice, but that is infatuation (or love) for you.

      Anyway, remember to keep having fun with your writing and we will continue to have fun reading it!

    4. I like that Tina couldn’t see too well and got to know Bette’s heart a little. It’ll probably be a big shock for her when she sees Bette on Wednesday, huh? Hee, hee.

    5. i think bette was more angry than anything to really see who she was yelling at. to her it could have been anyone, something like blind rage. tina would more remember what she looked like. and remember when bette saw kit after she said that she should not have yelled at the woman and that she was already angry.
      anyway i love love love this story.

    6. LMAO @ Kit’s Miss Universe comment.

      Tina is blind as a fucking bat…this is too funny. This is the first story that I have read in which she cant see. I just look forward to when she finds out the her Monday morning bitch was Bette.

      What I dont get is why Bette didnt recognize Tina?

      Post again soon….

    7. i never expected this that tina would not see bette. i know bette would not recognize her because she was so mad she probably could not see straight. cannot wait for tina to see bette. sh*t is goint to hit the fan. lol

    8. I really like your story. The fact that Tina can’t see a thing without her contacts or glasses is sooo funny. I’m glad she got to know Bette alittle without seeing her…maybe once she “sees” her she won’t be too quick to judge her outburst. Can’t wait for the next chapter.

    9. yeah, porTARD why didnt bette recognize her. and tina saw her in the photos at her house. but being blind was slick. cant wait to see if they ever really recognize it was them. if they were in such embarassment (t) and anger (b) maybe they never really lookied. what to see whata you do with this. post soon.

    10. u r nothing but a tease, oh well, i just can’t wait for tina 2 c bette’s face and realize she was the one who so rudely insulted her and called her farm girl, please post soon.

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