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I thought we could spend the evening together… PT19
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I thought we could spend the evening together PT19
Previously
Tina watched, as the end choruses of the song began to play out, her mind swirling, her body reacting, fire coursing through her veins, through the pure visionary of Bette Porter. Her love, her life.
Bette stood still, one hand high on the pole, one hand on her hip, she looked out into the crowd, her eyes locked with Tina’s, she smiled and winked, she turned to face the bar and placed her other hand on the pole and swung her whole body around lifting her legs out behind her swinging free of the pole, as she swung around she lowered her body toward the floor and bent her knees, as her knees reached the floor, the pole between her legs, she leaned her body back, arching, her hands placed flat on the floor beside her as her head hung back, her hair hanging loose, just touching the floor, she closed her eyes as the last beats of the music came to its end, the spotlight highlighting the still body, once again silhouetted on the podium.
The crowd cheered, shouting for more, claps of appreciation, stamping of feet, everyone acknowledging that what they had just witnessed was a one woman show, by one woman, for one woman, they stood in awe of the show that had been put on, all in the name of love.
“Fuck”, Tina said, standing, open mouthed as the spotlight faded, her friends standing around her, shaking their heads, smiling, talking about the performance they had just witnessed, the cheers from the crowd still lively.
“Wow, that was something else, don’t you say T?” Alice was jumping up and down, pleased, proud and happy that Bette had did it, and she certainly did it in style.
“Uh… what did you say Al?” Tina looked at Alice, still dumbstruck.
“Wasn’t she amazing!” Alice repeated.
“Unfuckingbelievable!” Tina was still shaking her head, the smile had begun to spread across her face, it was completely and finally sinking in what she had just experienced, her body’s reaction was on fire, dulling her senses, the overpowering pounding in her ears, her chest and her groin, making her thought processes and formulation of words beyond her own capabilities at the present time.
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Well its not your Breast Work….(Tee Hee Couldn’t resist) going to read now….
yey that was wicked…and VERY VERY hot AGAIN!!!
Awesome, Hot, and breath taking chapter. Am I alive? Geez I think I so. Post soon. Bye
Wow, outstanding!!! This whole series is amazing, a shot in the arm after S3 crap….Thnks, but pls don’t stop anytime soon…Oh, how is your collaberation going??? Can’t wait!!
Holy hell, I seriously need to step outside for some fresh air immediately. I also don’t want to risk my laptop overheating. I’m pretty sure my warrantee doesn’t cover my laptop combusting from steamy fan fiction….but I’ll check. Fantastic, Jobadge! Please post soon.
Oh my god, this is so hot!!! Please continue! As of now I’m taking a cold shower!
NC17’s gotta love them….so r u gonna continue in this same direction, after all Tina said it best “I think I need a drink first, and then I will be more than happy to dance the night away, and after that, when I get you home… who knows…!” Tina smiled with another gentle kiss to seal the deal. SO I’M ALL FOR NC17’S SO BRING THEM ON AND DON’T DISAPPOINT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I love this story!! WOW! It is just so hot!! Thanks and keep them coming.
like Tina….unable to verbalize……..
OK i started off by laughing at the idea of Alice wanting to go after them and listen!!!…That was priceless..but as i read on i loved how you recalled the past few days they`ve had, all the reconnecting and the hot lovin!!!lol and with this chapter youve reminded us of all the amazeing past chapters and rolled them into one perfect one….even the Levis got a mention..lol…Yep that would be yet another `Sweet jesus`..LOL…
jo my big breast mate — you are on fire babe. just keep some ideas for our collaberation . oh i would love someone to want me that much. you are a brilliant writer and awesome woman !!
This was hot, hot, hot! It seems that payback’s not always a bitch ~ sometimes it’s completely worth it. Keep up the good work Jobadge…I love this story.
Jo, the way you compared Tina to a bottle of champagne was genius. That discription couldn’t have been more perfect. You my friend are a brilliant writer and continuely amaze me.
Not just an outstanding post, but a series of outstanding posts! Thank you for writing! Loved the champagne comparison. Very hot!
Holy Mother of God! …(Going for a cold shower, now!)
I could do with a glass of champagnenow ;). Thanks for this nice one as always.
I am going to have an expensive water bill this month. All the cold showers that I have had to take just reading this story. All of the love making has been fried into my brain. I will never view a scence of that magnitude the same way again. I still love the gallery scene. That one still sends chills throughout my body and brain. I can’t wait to see what you will bring us next.
As Tina would say “Un…fucking…believable!” Post soon.
Good lord!
…….. I STILL DON’T KNOW WHAT 2 SAY. (I NEEED TO THINK FOR A WHILE.) WHOA?! please post soon. PEACE.
hotttttttttttttttttttttttt longer post and bette on a pole can u give me both!!!!!!!!1
Damn hot hot!
Al wanting to listen…so Alice. LOL. And the comparison of Tina to a bottle of champagne being uncorked…priceless. Very sensual. They have definitely made many priceless memories…and it appears more are coming.
i know i’m happy…thanks
Hey Jo, I left a comment a couple of days ago but think it got sucked up with the server changes. Can someone help me up please? I’m underneath the floor. That was so incredibly intense. The imagery you provide is as amazing as your writing. Quite the talent you have…