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I miss you. I need you– January FF Challenge–Chapter 2
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Standing outside the door stunned at the turn of events, Candace spoke her own anger and disappointment, “Bette I cannot imagine you hurting me anymore than you have already. I’ve been there for you. I held you, bathed you, rocked you, caressed you, and made love to you whenever you needed, where ever you needed it. That was me Bette, me. Those were my arms. Where was Tina when you crawled into my bed night after night? Where was she? Were you thinking about her every fucking night that you crawled into my bed wanting me to take care of you and your needs? Now what about my needs.”
Bette attempted to close the front door but Candace quickly held it with her foot and arm to prevent it from closing. “I gave you everything you wanted and now how do you thank me? After I go down on you, try to pleasure you and just cut me off, just like that. You discard me like old clothes or last week’s leftovers to pursue your trophy wife. I guess she looks a lot better on your arm than a mere carpenter.”
The vein on Bette’s forehead began to pop, “You are being ridiculous Candace. She is not a trophy. I have been in a relationship with her for 7 years. She is not merely a fucking trophy.”
Candace began to speak softly trying to plead her case. “I don’t understand why the sudden change of heart. This morning you woke up, you were kissing me, enjoying me and then without warning, with no reasonable explanation, you tell me in essence to fuck off. I don’t understand this Bette. I need to understand why the sudden change. Did I say or do something wrong. I just need to know. I’d like to fix it if I can." With tears streaming from her eyes, Candace pleaded, "At least give me a chance to fix it”
“Candace there is nothing to fix. We have nothing. It’s over for us.” Bette again tried to close the door. “I need to go. I have to go. I’m sorry I hurt you. It was my mistake. I shouldn’t have….”
Candace stepped back from the door and released it but threw out a thought, “You know what, I think you are afraid to commit. You couldn’t commit to her and you won’t commit to me. I know it won’t work with you two. If you couldn’t figure it out how to make it work after 7 years, what makes you think you will figure out how to make it work after you’ve spent the last couple of months fucking me? I just don’t understand how you could be so cold. I love you Bette. But how could you be so cold?”
Bette felt her tears building up again, realizing some of what Candace was saying might be true. She shook her head and bit her lip as she fought back her tears. Slowly she apologized again but warned, “Candace, I’m sorry I hurt you but there is nothing more I can say. We-are-over. Please leave before I say something that I might regret. Please spare both of us that.”
She closed the door on Candace and looked at her through the door. She turned away leaving Candace at the door stunned about what had happened so quickly and so unexpectedly. Out of Candace’s sight her tears flowed again. More than anything in the world she wanted, or rather needed to reconcile herself to Tina. The life that she knew and the friends that she knew were all lost because of her indiscretion. If Tina would forgive her, if they could work on restoring them as a couple, she knew that everything and everyone that mattered in her life would be restored.
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squirl, that was really good…and heart wrenching, which made it really good…poor candace! i like the sensitivity with which you deal with all players involved. awwww, that sadness of seeing those things around your home that you used to share with someone. poignant:) looking forward to more of this one as well, which is what i said to jp at some ungodly hour when i awoke to find all of you smart people had posted. cheers:)
It takes two to make a happy marriage,also two to make a misable one. Both had a lot to do with the breakup. thanks
Another great and emotional chapter…I would say that although Tina was also a part of the failure of their marriage, Tina remains faithful to Bette and never seek temporary happines from someone else. I can reflect on Bette’s feeling of loss and longings for Tina., really painful… What pushes her back to Candace arms and stayed for several weeks after trying to prove Tina that she love her & is sooo sorry the night Tina found out the affair making her violate Tina sexually. Lastly, I really hated Candace but, this proved that IC’s writing really had a strong impact to us audience after watching the show. of the cheating left you for
Cont. It made the audience shocked bcoz most of us did not expect that Bette is capable of cheating on Tina. Thank you Squirl for writing a storyline for Candace of what occured when Bette broke up with her….at least i’ve an idea that the break-up was not that easy for Candace. That is what IC failed to show us during the show….thanks…
Hello Squirl, I think that this is such a powerful take on this story, Bette never intended to hurt anyone. She only wanted to be relieved of her own pain and unfortunately the person that she has been with for over 7 years, the person she is so passionately “IN LOVE” with wasn’t there for her, she was lost and through a lapse she found herself weak enough to seek solace in the arms of an other, whom she ended up hurting as well, and then she hurt her family by this very same act. For her she is carrying such a huge weight on her shoulders and she needs to be relieved of it, and to me that burden is the need to forgive herself, she made a mistake and until she realizes she needs to forgive herself she will continue to find ways to hurt the people she loves and alienate herself even more. This is so amazing. Sincerely, JC
Tins is just as fault as bette for their failing marriage. tina can’t all this on bette, but she should have had more restaint with candance, too many could have , should have , would haves that never happened, they both reacted instead of acted…what fantastic story the insisght is so powerful!!