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Hold A Place For Me
Bette gets defensive, “I may have been unfaithful, but we had other issues too and you chose to ignore them just as well as I did. You’re not totally blameless here.”
Tina throws her hands up, “You’re right, Bette. I’m the reason we fell apart. I’m completely responsible for your actions.”
Bette: “I didn’t say that.”
Tina: “Whatever. Look, I may have “ignored” certain issues, mostly because you were never willing to talk to me. I know we had problems, but at least I respected you enough to keep my pants on. You betrayed me and everything we’ve worked so long to establish. Now you’re telling me you pissed it all away for a meaningless *****? What does that say, Bette? About us? You sacrificed everything for nothing. If that’s your idea of love…keep it.”
Bette bows her head as a single tear slips down her cheek. The tenderness returns to her voice as her guilt is clearly reflected in her hushed tone, “I’m not denying anything you’ve accused me of. I’m not running from the truth. For once, I’m not running from you. This is the first time in my life I’ve felt open and willing to discuss my failures. I only regret that I was so stubborn when you’d simply ask me to talk to you. You were always right. You always have been. Your small requests of me were never without warrant. Your simple demands of me were not selfish and your expectations of me and of our future were not too great. You required so little to give so much. If you have to go, I understand, but before you do, please always remember I love you….only you and no matter how little this means to you, I’m sorry for everything I’ve done to you.”
Tina almost feels regret for lashing out at Bette, but the sting of her lover’s betrayal is now rooted deep within her and she can feel herself starting to give up, “Yeah? Well, so am I.”
Bette: “Tina, I’m trying to tell you how I really feel. Why are you being so cold.”
Tina: “Because you don’t know how I feel. You can’t just pretend this is all ok and that “I’m sorry” will fix it.”
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(45 votes, average: 3.53 out of 5)
K
Great chapter, very emotional. Hope you continue with it.
OMG..so fucking great..love it hope you keep going with that story..really great..Tina was right to tell Bette about the baby..and i hope you and your family are ok please post soon cant wait to see more
Wow this is so awesome and so emotion, and please keep continue the story, thank you!
Please continue writing, This is a fantastic storyline. But more importantly – be safe, be well. And continuing to post will let us all know you are still doing okay.
glad to know that you and family are safe. Please don’t leave the story like this, please get them back together. Like this story and where it is going, let them talk like no one else has and get them back together. PLEASE. Like your other story also, please continue.
this is a great story ..hopefully u will continue it…….and hopefully every thing works out for u and yo family…….
i know u stated this might be the only chapter-i hope not please continue.
hope all goes well w/u and your family after the katrina
I LUV it!…you really described the betrail..angst…anguish…regret..& Luv…mixed emotions….it was really great!…thnks 4 writing…please continue this..Keep it up…PLEASE Post sOON!!!
Powerful stuff, cole!! Excellent job! Thanks for having the courage to share your work with us. :)