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Heaven Can Wait – Episode 13: This Is Hardcore
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Lara reaches out and takes Dana’s hands.
Lara: Well…maybe somewhere in some other dream or reality or whatever you want to call it…maybe there you’re dead…but not here. You’re alive and beautiful and wonderful…and you’re not gonna lose us. Not me, not Alice…I’m not leaving you behind again.
Dana: You and Al looked like you were having a lot of fun today.
Lara: We were. She’s great…and…there’s nothing she wouldn’t do for you.
Dana: So true…I feel bad, though. Here we are in our nice little suite and Al’s probably being chided for leaving me alone with you.
Lara: I can’t steal you away from her.
Dana: Lara…in Al’s mind, I don’t think it would be stealing. Not with you.
In the restaraunt, Jenny’s call for dropping the subject falls away as Bette’s concern gets the better of her.
Bette: All I’m saying is that I don’t think it’s a good idea, I mean seriously Al are you inviting Lara to take Dana from you?
Alice: Bette…you really don’t know what’s going on between between me, Dana and Lara.
Helena shoots Alice a perplexed expression.
Bette: Whoa, hold on…
Alice: So just drop it, okay?
Bette throws up her hands, rolling her eyes.
Bette: What, are you people going to go off into some sick three-way?
Shane: Bette…just drop it…
Bette: I’m sorry, Shane, but I find it a bit ridiculous that-
Tina: You didn’t think it was ridiculous when we tried it.
Suddenly, Bette is reminded of a moment she would gladly take back if she would. His name was Beck and he rode a motorcycle. It was an evening full of desperation for Bette and Tina in the hopes of Tina becoming pregnant. Bette feels disgusted having it brought up as everyone looks in her direction.
Alice: You people can say what you want…but…this isn’t about you. And it’s not about what you guys want as much as it is about Da-
Carmen: Yeah, no shit.
Shane: Carmen…?
As everyone looks over at Carmen now, including a confused Alice, the suite that Alice shares with Dana is vibrant with Dana and Lara inside as they stand from the table and hold each other.
Lara: You know what I miss…?
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Whoakay… my head is just spinning. Alice wants this, between the three of them? Bette and Carmen disagree, and Tina is goading as usual. Gotta say tho, I like Dana and Lara together. That was an intense chapter, and I actually can’t wait to see what happens next. Cheers
Nice update! Although now I want more…way to leave us hanging, lol. OK, so Alice-Lara-Dana, who wants what and are they going to get over the ‘but I just want the other two to be happy’ blah blah blah and hit a threesome? Or is it going to end in a painful pairing with one of them getting hurt? I have to say I like that it’s not all super cut ‘n dry, it shows that their feelings for each other are just not simple. As I said before, makes for great fanfic, can’t wait to see the morning after scene. And thanks for putting Lara and Dana back together (my fave couple of the series, I’m prob in the minority but who cares), if but for one night. Or more? hm….please post soon!
I guess I might be the only one who see’s how much Carmen cares for Lara. I’m not too happy w/ Dana’s indecisiveness, she seems to be ‘having her cake..& ya know the rest. Hope Lara doesn’t get hurt again cause Carmen may not be around to pick up the pieces.
hey!!! what’s happening?? I want dana and alice together but this is good stuff. Post soon!
a threesome??? really dun like the sound of that. i kinda dun like dana in this story, otherwise shez one of my fav characters but here shez jst kinda blind to see wuts happenin between alice and lara or maybe she chooses not to see it and carmen cares way too much for lara im finally tryin to wrap my head around the idea of carmen n lara together. and tina HAD to mention that night lol! anyway it was a great update cant wait for the next one!
Not quite sure where you’re going with this … but damn intrigued!
very interesting story. please post again soon.
i think you are doing a great job…especially in keeping true to the characters and their personalities.. it seems to me that Alice is willing to sacrifice her happiness so that dana will be happy… it’s all going to be a big mess i think… i think it was great how you brought in claude (is that her name?) but she slept with shane this time.. great job… pps.. :)