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For the Love of You, Revisited post 19
Bette stretched out on the bed and groaned as Tina slid in beside her. The full body contact satisfying in a way that nothing else did except making her climax or coming for her. “You feel good” she murmured placing a kiss in the blonde locks.
Tina threw a protective arm over her and snuggled in. She ran her hand over Bette’s belly a new habit and a source of continuous amazement that Bette was beginning to swell with her babe.
“So you want to have a last night of passion as a single woman?”
“I haven’t really been single since I met you Tina. I have been ruined since the first time we ever made love. I have fucked other people but it never really compares. There are lines that express the feeling better than I can.
Your kiss has hindered my day…a longing that won’t go away…you just keep knocking and waking my heart…a daylight chasing the dark…I can exist being caught by your kiss willingly…or grant you control of my body and soul…ask it and so it shall be. ( k.d. lang – So it shall be.)
“That’s K.D. Lang right?” Tina swallowed the well of emotion in her throat.
“I never gave up hope. I never …ever stopped loving you. I have never in my heart been single though I tried to let you go.” Bette rolled over pinning Tina beneath her. “I can’t let you go.”
Tina gasped and arched as Bette entered her with her tongue. She licked her deliberately tracing her folds. “I can’t let you go.” Bette declared pulling her closer and spreading her thighs wider so she could lick her with abandon and alternately pierce her with the tip of her tongue. Tina’s cries grew louder and more frequent as she approached climax. She was so wet that Bette began to wash her face in her wetness. “So sweet” Bette murmured as Tina arched one final time and came with the tip of her tongue inside her. Tina shuddered uncontrollably as Bette continued to lick her clit until she exploded again.
I once had your loving baby/and I can’t let go…/I just had your lovin baby…and I can’t let go…/ can’t let you go…sure as heaven above we found love. (Isley Brothers – Can’t let go)
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(5 votes, average: 4.40 out of 5)
Damn, I just knew it would stop short of the wedding. Kelika, I think that this story is brilliant in its concept and execution. Please post again soon!
I love love love love love love love your story!
Really enjoying the story. You don’t seem to be stuck now. Yes it is longer than the original and surpasses the original, and i thought it was fabulous. Please keep writing and showing your love and affection for “Our girls,” we love it and love you for it. Post when you can.
That was very thoughtful of Tina, actually, not to knock Hels’ block off at the insinuation that Bette isn’t good enough for her… I jest. I think a lot of Helena, I do. And I’m glad Tina said what she did to Helena. That should lay it to rest between them now, though, forever, I hope. Thanks for the post, kel.
I just love this story. Helena needs to chill with the jealousy I thought she and Bette were good now.
wow nice conversation between tina and helena, wedding time? :)PPS
Love that Tina was so kind to Helena, Helena needed that. Love That Bette is pregnany and by the lovely Ms. Kennard. thanks
Love the story and it really is okay if it is longer.
Love it, love it, love it. PPS
Iam so loving this!!!!! The way your write is just beautiful. Thank you PPVS
Ditto Rau, I am just loving it. Helena definately needs to give it a rest. Regardless what happened between them, Tina always belonged with Bette and visa versa. :o).
I am in love with this story! PPS:)
I am glad that Tina laid it on the line with Helena. Helena was special to her but Bette would always be the woman that Tina wanted and needed. Can’t wait for the wedding to take place.
I like how Tina handled Helena, it was time the ladies had some sort of closure. I am looking forward to reading more.
That was great!
Great story certainly looking forward to the wedding please post again soon.
No body is in the right mind would stand in those two’s way, Helena has to let go, or she will have to face Bette, and I am not sure the result of that encounter will be any different from what it was with Jodi. The wedding sounds surreal and I know that it will be a day to remember for the rest of their lives whenever they face troubles, it’ll be something that will warm their hearts and remind them of the love that they have for each other. Thank you so much, you are brilliant and still one of the best.Love