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Denial / Acceptance – chapter 8
Dana rolled her eyes, “I’ll leave you to do the ‘laying’ thanks Shane, I’m gonna call Al and see about tonight”.
Sometimes love really could make people so fucking blind. Dana had told Shane about a year ago that she was attracted to Alice and had been for sometime and Shane was very patient about it all, willing to listen when Dana needed. At the time, Shane had suspected it was more than an attraction and today had confirmed it for her. Her Yoda like instincts were also telling her that the feeling might be mutual. Alice’s behaviour all week hadn’t gone unnoticed by the hairdresser and just looking at how her two friends interacted she could see Alice was obviously smitten too, just too scare to admit it to herself and everyone else, including Dana. Shane made a mental note to call Dana later on, but for now, Shane was off to get herself some pussy.
Back to Alice’s Apartment
Notting Hill had been playing for an hour and Dana was perfectly content with lying there, her body moulding with Alice’s, but a niggling in her mind told her to bring up ‘breakfast’ soon. Alice absentmindedly started playing with Dana’s hair and Dana felt the goose bumps tingle all over her skin. Dana smiled at the intimate gesture wishing this were how she spent every evening, happy just lying with her love, just being. “Alice?”
“Mmm hmm”.
Dana mumbled into Alice chest, “are you ever going to tell me what’s been going on with you lately?” She felt the writer tense up and halt the hair playing at that question. Alice tried to explain but couldn’t voice the words so in a small vulnerable voice she replied. “It’s really complicated Dane.” Dana looked up at Alice. She searched the deep chocolate brown eyes for any answers Alice’s lips were withholding. “You can tell me anything Al, please, I’m just worried about you and…”
“I like you”. Alice just blurted it out of nowhere causing a wrinkled brow to appear on the forehead of Dana. “Pardon me?”
“I like you”, this time it was said in a gentle tone. “I really like you, I can’t stop thinking about you and I know it’s so weird because we’re friends but lately all I want to do is kiss you and it’s confusing the hell out of me and I don’t know where all of this came from and I probably just made the biggest ass of myself but…” This time it was Alice who was cut short as Dana’s lips made contact with hers.
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(48 votes, average: 3.69 out of 5)
First!!! yay! This story is great, but don’t be such a tease! lol post soon.
Woot woot! awsome chapter, hope you post soon!
Hee! Yay. Have I mentioned yet how much I love this story?
It is high, it is far, it is … GONE!!! You knocked it out of the park! (FYI – that’s John Sterling’s call when someone hits a homerun – like you – just now. Yeah – I’m a Yankee fan.) I love the fact that Dana didn’t hesitate, and took possession of Alice’s lips. I don’t know what’s going to happen next, but that was worth whatever fallout may come. :-)
OWWW!!! how can you do that??! you can’t leave me hanging!! COME BACK!!! lol
Oh you are EVIL to leave us hanging. But I really love this story. Ok now get to work we need to finish that kiss.
Ohhhh, u’r gonna just leave us hangin’ like that. Thats just wrong, but i guess thats okay. I’ll wait patiently (for now) for anything in u’r story. LOL. And im sure u’ll do fine on the NC-17 b/c of how good the rest of it is. That is so alice to just blurt it out to dana, that was funny, but cute at the same time. Love this story, PPS!!!!!!!
Awwwwww!! Dude… I don’t even know what to say. Awesome chapter as always. Can’t believe you left it there, you big tease! I literally can’t wait to read the next chapter =D
ahhh you need to update pronto!
YAAAAY! Sorry I missed the last one babe. I’m all caught up again and thanks for the shout out the last chap. lol. Anyways, I like where this is going ;) Keep it up :-D
can’t wait to see the next post so please post it soon I love it and of course I will keep reading even if I can not post all the time great update
yaaaaay! …yeah that about sums it up. well done.
F*ucking awesome chapter! You are really doing one hell of a job writing this story! I just love Happy Danish stories,thanks! PPS
What a tease! No but I love the story. You’re doing such a great job. And how could you not… I mean anything with Danish is awesome!
Oh my God … why did you end it there!!! Please continue with this soon. Loving it, by the way.