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Coming up for air – part forty five
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Bette couldn’t help smiling when she saw how Tina was exuding complete happiness. It warmed her heart and made her cheeks redden when her thoughts went to how she had pleased Tina right there on the bear rug in front of the fireplace. Bette leant back in her chair. In her mind she replayed how Tina’s pale skin had glowed in the light from the fire, how tiny beads of sweat had made her flushed skin look like it was sprinkled with hundreds of tiny diamonds.
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Bette got the fireplace going while Tina finished up in the bathroom. Bette worked in complete concentration, wanting to build the perfect fire for Tina. When the fire flared up Bette felt Tina’s presence in the room. She turned around and found Tina standing in the doorway, looking back at Bette with a smile in her eyes. The look in Tina’s eyes was so full of love Bette felt her entire being literally fill up from a distance of fifteen feet. She wanted to say something, to reach out for Tina to bring her closer, but her voice caught in her throat, and her body didn’t seem to listen, so Bette had no choice but to sit and be filled.
“Take off your robe…” Tina whispered from the door.
Bette breathed in. Her lips separated slightly as Tina’s presence kept drawing her in.
“Please, baby… let me look at you for a little while…” Tina said softly.
Without breaking their eye contact, Bette raised her hands and ever so slowly slid the robe down her body. Tina watched from afar as Bette revealed her body to her. Bette was sitting on the bear rug with her front to Tina and her back to the fireplace. The moon lit up the room in a pale white light. The light from the fire was a warm flickering orange color. The two different kinds of light battled for the control of Bette’s body. The outline of her figure shone in vibrant red and yellow while her front was caressed by moonlight. It was the most stunning sight Tina had ever seen. She stood mesmerized, forgetting to blink, completely captivated by Bette’s vulnerable beauty as she sat there and let Tina take her time.
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Thank you for including the bear skin rug lovemaking session, that was absolutely hot! I do hope though that Bette does not become a workaholic again because that hurt their relationship to begin with! PPS
Bette wasn’t the only one drooling!! Very hot post! Lovely to see you back again…please write and post at will as I’m certain I’m not the only one missing your story.
Wow. Bette was being so damn adorable.. until she went back to work. Can she finally get her priorities right? Poor Tina. Sitting there alone with her thoughts about their possible future child. I know you will fix it. But still.. this chapter’s end made me pretty sad. I hope Bette adjusts stuff without being told to.. that would actually show awareness and maturity. PPS. For real.
Well Anker, a post like that is worth waiting for! All is forgiven!
What a beautifully written update! Welcome back! Your description of Bette’s memory was so vivid, it brought the entire scene to life. On the lighter side, loved when Alice was teasing Bette about the moaning. Too funny! Hope your vacation was as good as Bette and Tina’s. Thanks for posting.
Whew, that bearskin rug must have felt so nice on their skin. The picture of Bette in the contrasting light would have been beautiful of the dark haired woman. I bet that would be breath halting to have seen Bette in that frame. Tina needs to somehow remind Bette or Bette needs to be reminded not to put Tina on the back burner again.
I went to visit my son and granddaughter today and when I got home something told me to check the site. WOW am I ever glad I listened to that something. That my friend was a very very HOT love scene. Heck half way through it I even forgot that Bette was just remembering their time together on that bear skin rug. Anker, you my friend were on fire with this chapter. The ending does have me a little concerned though, but I trust you and know that you won’t let Bette go back to her old ways. I hope you had a wonderful vacation and I can’t wait to hear about it. I am looking forward to going on mine next Saturday. Hope to hear from you before then, but if not we will get in touch after I get back. Oh yes and just one more thing…I missed your writing so much that I went back and read this story over again from the beginning.
Damn, I can so picture Bette sitting their as Alice is blabbing away, and she’s got that far away look. Tina always knows. Lets hope Bette doesn’t get too caught up in work again that she forgets about Tina.
Glad to see you post, I thought this story was one lost for the ages. But as Phyl said, that was definitely worth waiting for.
Oh. my. gosh. I dunno if the weak feeling in my legs is relief cos you’ve finally posted, or just like, a reaction from the heat of what you did post. Damn, anker, that was… something else. A little worrisome towards the end, though, despite the good news from Charlie… Bette’s gone all workaholic again and falling into the same old habits… Not good. That however, cannot be said about this chapter, which was excellent… just flaming *hot*. Ack, and I’ve got to go into work now, on unsteady legs… I’m sure I’ll manage, but I might be a tad distracted. Post soon, anker… and btw, that was a good effort. I’ll give you 45 points, plus 5 extra for the knee-trembling heat of the chapter. Thanks for posting (and stop leaving us!!! Please!).
So glad to see the update. Can’t wait for more.
GULP! Wow, that was some HOT lovin. Just what I like to see my girls doin. Ok, please don’t let Bette get back into her workaholic mode again. That pretty much destroyed them the first time. Glad your back! PPS!!
Hey there friend; I’m so pleased u did the R & R thing and have come back to us with a brilliant piece of writing again. That was such a roller coaster of emotions happy, sad, funny and poignant…I really feel for Tina as she struggles to allow B her need to be perfect & yet once again cries alone…welcome home!!!!…take care of u at work & take the time u need for u. I’ll catch up on PM sometime soon. Arohanui, T.
“tiny beads of sweat had made her flushed skin look like it was sprinkled with hundreds of tiny diamonds.” Damn! That line was sexy as hell. Anker, you are forgiven for leaving us while you **and I quote** “went down south and caught a little of what you needed!” **raising eyebrows with a mischievous grin** LMAO! You go catch whatever you need bella. As long as you come back to us with posts like this one, it’s all good. LOL! And if you & I went skiing we would definately be laughing our asses off, because I would make a complete fool of myself. Though the warm and cozy part could be interesting…very, very, interesting. **wiggling my eybrows up and down** I hope Tina will trust that her and Bette have come a long way from the B & T of past. When you start to contemplate every reaction that your partner will say or do, you are shutting down communication before you even give a chance. I think Tina should go pull Bette out of her meeting and share the joy she is feeling. She needs to stop making assumptions for Bette’s feelings and let Bette do that for herself. It may or may not be the response Tina is looking for but that’s the chance you take when your in love. Ciao.
Hia babe…..BRAVO!!!!! That was a great come back chappy!Thanks for letting me know you posted. As you know I have little time for reading. Yes I did make time for you and reading this….It actually wasn’t too hard.I luv to read your story and wouldn’t miss it for the world….Lord how I have missed it and you! I can’t wait for Monday! You and your writing is a treasure, that I have found to be a great gift. Don’t keep us waiting so long this time please! xoxo
Anker, shame on you! How dare you even suggest you’d stop writing these love scenes due to my safety & well-being?! Don’t worry about me. I just renewed my health insurance and updated my will. In addition, I’ve got my “safe sex” items: Helmet – check! Shoulder pads – check! Knee pads (don’t ask) – check! Psychiatrist – check!
Hey E… I think this is my most favorite chapter of yours… so far. You are so massively talented baby… and I’m not even sure you know that. Talk soon… and please post SOONER! LOL
Hey Anker, Glad to see that you like my comments. That simple gesture just makse it all so worthwhile. I loved this chapter as the heat from the fire wasn’t the only thing causing my temperature to rise. There was a wonderful sense of connection between Bette and Tina as Bette relive their night on the rug. Alice’s comments were LOL moments as was Bette’s blushing. Strange and typical that working life has now taken over and Tina is beginning to question Bette’s committment to their plan to have a child. Now Bette needs to get her skinny ass home and talk these things through wiht Tina. Tina needs to show some backbone and challenge Bette on why she is spending so much time at school. Yes, ity does take time to build a reputation but Tina should head over to the school and see if she can help. Even if it is just making coffee and ensuring Bette eats. Being together is what counts and then communication will be simpler. Please let Bette see the state that Tina is in and help her out. More please, As ever you craft a beautiful drama. Many, many thanks from Your Loyal Fan.
Glad to see you back, anker. What a romantic vacation that was!! It is awesome how you show the love between Bette and Tina. You can give us more flashbacks whenever you want!