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City Of Angels Chapter 6: Four down, one to go, Re-edited (PS. Read the authors note)
She lets out a maniacal laughter as the shots have no effect on her what so ever. A random dancer that was trying to run out of the bar takes a round to the head that was meant for Dana. Another patron dies in a blaze of gunfire. People all around Dana are dying. As soon as their guns were empty Dana just looked up to the dumb struck group and flashed her famous wicked grin.
“What the fuck? One of the bouncers yelled as Dana rushed towards the group with incredible speed. She jumped up like a bird taking flight and landed right on the bar where the group of bouncers that were behind.
“You missed.” She said as she delivered a massive kick to one of the guard’s chin, shattering his jaw.
A Second guard jumped up to the table and faced Dana. He unsheathed the buoy knife that was in his boots and attempted to slash her.
With grace and ease she deflected the large steroid driven bouncer’s attacks.
The guard let out an angry yell as he pointed his knife at Dana’s heart and charged at her. She quickly grabbed the larger man’s arms and in one motion snapped it like a twig. He let out a painful howl as Dana grabbed him by his collar. She raised the knife to his throat as he looked into her fire burning eyes with fear.
“Don’t worry I’ll make this quick.” She whispers into the bouncer’s ear. With that, she slashed the guard across the throat as he dropped to his knees grasping his now blood spewing throat. He gurgled on his own blood as he slumped to the floor in a bloody mess. The last guard stared up at her as he feebly attempted to reload his Uzi.
Dana looked down at noticed a black handled Katana that was kept behind the bar. She also noticed the bartender who looked up at her in horror.
“You’re not human. You’re some kind of fucking zombie!” He yelled out as his horrific face looked up at the undead woman.
“That’s seems to be the popular theory” she replied.
Dana gracefully dropped down from the bar and landed on the bartender, snapping his neck. She reached for the long blade and turned her attention to the last guard that had finally reloaded his weapon.
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(9 votes, average: 4.22 out of 5)
this is getting good!!! i can’t believe that this is almost over!!! i can’t wait for the final climax, but you can’t stop after this is over!!! but i’m loving it!! PPS!!!!
can’t wait to see what will happen next please post soon I love it great update
OMG..that final battle is going to be awesome..Camilla need to be safely out of the way for this final confrontation to be climactic. Bring it on!
there is nothign wrong with reworking something, it takes years to get a novel done, why not take a while to get a chapter done… still liking it… just one to go? then what?
very dark and twisted sister! i dig it. loved talia’s death scene, what a horrible way to die! revenge is sweet for dana.
Goodness,this chapter was awsome! Just love the badass dana !!!No hurries on the next post lol Great job!!