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    Can She Ever Love Me? Chapter 10

     

    ALICE:  You cant possibly be knowing what I am thinking. Did you come back here to kick Shaney’s ass?

     

    KIT:  I hope not. I know she fucked up, but dang give the girl some kind of break.

     

    CARMEN:  (Holding hands up in surrending position)  WAIT!!!! Nooo, Im not trying to hurt Shane. I just want to talk to her.

     

    ALICE:  Are you sure, Carmen?  Because last time as I can recall, you said some pretty brutal stuff.

     

    CARMEN:  (Sadly)  I know, thats why I want to talk to her.

     

    KIT:  Babygirl, may I ask you a question?

     

    CARMEN:  Sure, Kit.

     

    KIT:   When did you get back in town?

     

    CARMEN:   Ummmm about 45 minutes ago.

     

    ALICE:  45 minutes ago?   Is your mom sick?

     

    CARMEN:   Nope, she doing quite well actually.

     

    ALICE:  (Scratching her head)  Your mom is okay. Why are you back?  Is this visit just to check on your mother?

     

    CARMEN:  (Sighing)  Yes and no, Alice. I also need to talk to Shane.

     

    KIT:  Well baby, we havent seen Shane much since you left.

     

    CARMEN:  Why? Did she leave?

     

    ALICE:  No shes still here, but Tina’s the only one who talked to her. After you two’s little episode, she has been non-existant.

     

    CARMEN:  (Tears in her eyes)  I need to find her. Kit, do you have Tina’s number or could you call her for me?

     

    KIT:  Hold on, here comes Tina right now.

     

    TINA:  (Waving)  Hey everyone…Kit, I need a salad to go please. Carmen, when did you get back in town. (Hugging Carmen)

     

    ALICE:  About 1 hour ago.

     

    CARMEN:  Tina, can I talk to you in private?

     

    TINA:  Sure Carmen, lets use Kit’s office.

     

     

     

     

     

    Tina and Carmen goes inside kits office and sits down.

    TINA:  Whats the matter, Carmen?

     

    CARMEN:  Tina, I need to find Shane and talk to her. Everyone said you are the only person who has spoen to her.

     

    TINA:  Yes, that will be correct. She wont be back until later, though.

     

    CARMEN:  (Sadly)  I feel bad about the party. I didnt men to lash out at her. My psychiatrist said I need to resolve things with, Shane. Thats why Im here, Tina.

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    Comments

    1. hey dat wuz waaaaaay too short . . . i mean come on chicka . . . i want mo like now, lol. Like alwayz from me, Baby-gurl, LYLAS ;p . . . Stank, da’ one and only, chicka :D Holla at me!!

    2. Hi Steph, Gooid to see Carmne back and now talking to SHane. Just want them to sort out their differences and get back together. Good times ahead??? Many thanks from Your Loyal Fan.

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