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    Can She Ever Love Me? Chapter 10

    Story written on February 28, 2008 by stephane518.
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    Story Shortlink: https://assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=68796
    Author Notes:

    The talk with Carmen and Shane

    CHAPTER 10

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

    Its been 2 1/2 years and now comes time to face all these nagging demons, I have inside of me. This demon has been eating away at my very heart and soul. How do i approach Shane? Where do I begin? Do I tell her, I still love her? I was wondering if she would even let me approach her since I treated her so terribly at the party. Should i tell her, hey im sorry and everything is cool. Nooo…cmon Carmen pull it together. Tell Shane, your sorry for treating her very badly. Gosh, that sounds so lame with no compassion. What am I going to do?

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

    CAB DRIVER:  Hey miss, are you okay?

     

    CARMEN:  (Looking puzzled)   Yes, why.

     

    CAB DRIVER:  Because weve been in front of The Planet for 5 minutes. And you keep mumbling to yourself.

     

    CARMEN:  (Embarrassed)  Ohhh,   im so sorry, sir. How much did you say the fare was again?

     

    CAB DRIVER:  That will be $22.50, for the 3rd time.

     

    CARMEN:  (Apologizing)  I said I was sorry. I just have someone to see and Im kinda nervous on what to say to them.

     

    CAB DRIVER:  Do what I always do. Just tell them straight from your heart and be truthful.

     

    CARMEN:  (Smiling)  Thank you.

     

    CAB DRIVER:  (Flirting)  Hey, with that pretty smile of yours, how could they not listen to ya.

     

    CARMEN:  (Blushing)  Oh okay, Ill keep that in mind.

     

     

     

     

     

     

    Carmen exits out of the cab, heading straight inside The planet.

     

     

     

     

     

     

    THE PLANET

    Meanwhile inside The planet, Kit and Alice are talking. Carmen walks in and shocks them both.

    KIT:  Wow…Hey babygirl,  when did you get back into town?

     

    ALICE:  Yeah, I thought we wasnt never going to see you again.

     

    CARMEN:  (Smiling but nervously)  Yes, I know I left on a bad note. Im sorry.

     

    KIT:  Girl, we do understand…Would you like something to eat?

     

    CARMEN:  No thanks, Kit. Have you 2 seen Shane?

     

    ALICE:  (Looking shocked)  Shane?…Did you just asked us if we seen Shane?

     

    CARMEN:  Yea Alice…and I know what you are thinking.

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    1. hey dat wuz waaaaaay too short . . . i mean come on chicka . . . i want mo like now, lol. Like alwayz from me, Baby-gurl, LYLAS ;p . . . Stank, da’ one and only, chicka :D Holla at me!!

    7. Hi Steph, Gooid to see Carmne back and now talking to SHane. Just want them to sort out their differences and get back together. Good times ahead??? Many thanks from Your Loyal Fan.

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