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Boundary Between Fear and Love – Chapter 6
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I’m dumbfounded. I can’t even bring myself to move. After what could have been a few seconds or a few minutes, I hit rewind and look at the last page.
“For you Al – I don’t always have the right words to express myself. That’s your thing. So I had to borrow from someone else. When I heard this, all I could think of was you. Funny thing is, the first time I heard it was a few years ago, and I never thought I’d have the chance to love you. I do now. Thank you. You have given me more in these last few months that I have ever expected for a lifetime. All I ask is the chance to give you the same back. I love you, Al. With all my heart and soul, I love you.
When the rain is blowing in your face
And the whole world is on your case
I could offer you a warm embrace
To make you feel my love
When the evening shadows and the stars appear
And there is no one there to dry your tears
I could hold you for a million years
To make you feel my love
I know you haven’t made your mind up yet
But I would never do you wrong
I’ve known it from the moment that we met
No doubt in my mind where you belong
I’d go hungry, I’d go black and blue
I’d go crawling down the avenue
There’s nothing that I wouldn’t do
To make you feel my love
The storms are raging on the rollin’ sea
And on the highway of regret
The winds of change are blowing wild and free
You ain’t seen nothing like me yet
I could make you happy, make your dreams come true
Nothing that I wouldn’t do
Go to the ends of the earth for you
To make you feel my love
I’m not sure what I’ll have to do to get those doubts out of your head, Al. But please know that what I say is real. What I feel is real. What I want is you, only you. For as long as you let me, I’ll do my best to prove that to you every day. I’ll be home before you know it. Get to the Planet, knowing you, you were already late to meet Carmen and Shane before you even got in the car. Love you – love me.
OK, so I think I just became a country music fan. There are defining moments in every person’s life. Some are horrible days that have lasting affects; some are strokes of luck that change everything and sometimes people are simply assured that they are loved. That might be the most prolific thought I have ever had. And seeing as how my mind is reeling right now, I’m impressed with myself. All I know is that Dana Fairbanks loves me. I’m not sure why, I still need to work on that. But she loves me. For the first time I can remember, I am assured of someone’s love. And that feels ***** great. Suddenly, coffee at the Planet sounds damn good to me. I hope the grin fades before I walk in there, I don’t want to share this with anyone. Actually, no I don’t. I hope this grin lasts a long, long time.
tbc
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lucia – as is par – superb!
I love the way you write. You just nailed all that horrible stuff about Alice wanting Dana to be successful but being jealous of the consequences of it. Great, as usual.
awww.. that was so good! great job lucia. such a great song! i never really listened to the lyrics until today. so nice. thank you.
I have this glowing feeling in me. Your writing is so good that I felt what Alice felt. And that is one of my fave songs and it fits perfectly in this chapter.
i have to say it is a great song, and he has two songs, that being one of them, that I have seen convert people over to country, even those hard core, i would never listen to country music people.
I still stand by my comment that this should be written for the show’s script. It’s perfect- their thougths, actions, how they know what the other needs. And I love Alice’s constant stream of thought. I always thought it would be interesting to write out what Alice was thinking during the show.
My favorite line in this chapter was, ” please know that what I say is real. What I feel is real. What I want is you, only you.” I think that Dana’s feelings often get overlooked because she’s “inexperienced” or viewed as the little sister and doesn’t know what it is to love. Great job- can’t wait till the update!!!
Dana´s letter was great, she knows her girl so well:) Alice has to get over her stupid thoughts…silly girl she is. tz well done
to me this is the way they have to work things on the show. Let them together work through their issues, but no… well we’re lucky to have your stories and the others danish writers, thanks.
definitely lword script material. this is the way we want it to be in the future. Danish solving insecurities and talking about them.. Dana is so cute :D Alice, believe Dana. Believe what she says :)
SO FUCKING ROMANTIC! i’m such a sucker for romance.. and i am really all for Dana and Alice. how i wish i could just watch them in person doing this, loving each other like this. the way you write is just amazing.. the show should get you to write for them. hope this happens in the show.. that song, i dedicated that to my gf.. so that left me breathless… anyway, i want SOME MORE! great work lucia!