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BETTE AND TINA… THE REST OF THEIR LIFE… MARRIED…ch.239
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Tina: Well good night ladies… (As she opens the door and gets in)…
Alice: (Screams) WHAT THE FUCK… it’s yours…
Bette: When did you get this Tee…
Tina: Don’t you remember we just picked it up…
Bette: Oh yeah…
They all jumped into the car… looking and touching everything… like little kids…
Shane: Take us for a ride…
Dana: Yeah we want to go for a ride…
Alice: And don’t hand me that shit that you’re tired… DRIVE
Bette gets in…
Tina: Everyone all set… lets go…
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After driving all around… up and down the coast… Tina was getting tired… so she switched places with Bette… she then drove back to “The Planet”… even though Alice was all over her to keep driving…
Bette: Alice we have to work in the morning…
Tina: Yeah and its almost 11 now…
Alice: I guess your right…
Dana: Thank god… I have to train in the morning…
11:15 at “The Planet”… the girls all get into their own cars and everyone goes home…
Tina was exhausted… she just stripped and crawled into bed… Bette followed and soon they both fell asleep…
7:00am
Bette wakes up and looks at the clock… trying to get Tina up…
Tina: Leave me alone… I need more sleep…
Bette: Sorry baby… but its 7am and we have to shower and dress and get to work…
Tina reluctantly gets up and they both head into the shower… Bette washed Tina and then herself… and then dries her off…
Tina: I’m so sorry babe… I am just so tried…
Bette: It’s ok… I guess we have to stop the late night…
Tina: Especially when we have to work the next day… thank god it’s a short week…
Bette: Well tonight we come home and just cuddle on the couch… how does that sound…
Tina: Like heaven… in fact if it’s a slow day I may leave early… I’ll warm up the couch for us…
Bette: Sounds like a plan…
They both were dressed and out the door…
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Hey MG, I’m with packer for letting your fans vote if they want you to continue with the story. You’re one of the first writers in my list of favorite authors! Ok ok so you’re not the only one there,but after a year long of continuos reading (all from the very first story they ever posted) i’ve got 68 other writers on that list EKKK! So….you’ve got my vote to continue, please please continue with your awsome story MG! I can always click on your story everytime I’m coming in to check for new chapters:))…..LOL
Ohh….I almost forgot to wish you good luck with your job. I know the feeling after hearing something similar in may of this year…..but’we’ll know no sooner than november what is going to happen as of the first of february 2008. Bye bye
Rnjoy talking to you so much,an on your birthday, Gkad you got the package that day. You can go to sleep on your Mets pillow case and drean of the Met winning the World Series. Hey Lady, You can stop writing this. So people has no tasteand because of you and the writer that started this site we have been entertain for almost 5 yrs. It their lost but don’t make us be the losers. we will read because we enjoy your stories. Praying and thinking of you and George today and your jobs thanks
I really MENT to say YOU CAN;T STO pWRITING THIS STORY. THANK
You are NOT allowed to end this! Good luck with your job. *crosses fingers*
LMAO @ Frank! What a funny Dad to have. I feel for Tina, she’s had a rough week. I hope this is not the beginning of a low self esteem issue. She is a career woman and a fox at that. Alice definitely knows how to put her feet in her mouth but I know she loves B&T.
Hey Mary, got home and received your message, I will be sure to email that wonderful woman!!! ;- ) As for the chatper brilliant…as for you stopping ARE YOU F*CKING CRAZY???? Don’t you ever stop what YOU love doing girl. Who gives a shit about numbers?? This isn’t the Nielsen Ratings! You still have all those hundreds of people that DO read, and DO keep coming back. Don’t get so hung up on that sweetie. Numbers mean nothing. I have always said, that if I can reach ONE person…JUST ONE person to bring them a smile, a chuckle, promote them to think, to make them feel that someone identifies with their struggles, then I am blessed. Let me tell you something, long after Fan Fic has been put to rest, will it matter how many numbers you had? OR, will it matter if you touched someones life because of that “writte” word, that power of the pen? Don’t ever let yourself get caught up in the trivial parts of writing babe. I LOVE writing, and if I get 50 or 5000 hits, it all means the same to me. I hope you can embrace this concept honey. We’ll be sure to talk offline more. xoxoxo
PLEEEEAAAASSSSEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!Do NOT stop. I love this story. When I first ran across an current post about 6 or 8 months ago, I went back and read all chapters beginning with the first year of the rest of their life. I believe that I read every chapter in about 2 weeks flat. Your writing is wonderful! Good luck with the job.
7 pages i am sooooooooooo happy!!!!!!!!! end the story what!!!!!!!!! nooooooooooo and u know that was hot al get u foot out of ur mouth
Hey Mary Grace. It’s a shitty place to be with a job & those of us who have been in the same or similar situations can sympathize. As for your story, only you can decide to continue or not. But I have to tell you, there are hundreds of us who will always eagerly await the next chapter……
I love this story. I know I pretty much missed the very beginning but I would love for you to continue it. Maybe change the name and start from chapter 1. I could deal with that. Besides can’t let the hot tub go not being used. And then there is the baby, so I am begging you please do not stop writing this story.
Hey, MG, thanks for the message and good luck with the job, been there and know how stressful that can be. I guess I didn’t get the tone, but I was surprised that everybody jumped down Alice’s throat. Maybe cause I’m single I interpreted it as meaning it’s harder to buy things like new cars when it’s just one income and not two. And if folks don’t know foot in mouth is part of the Alice experience by now, I guess they never will. And MG, what’s to become of those of us who DO read?
I like the story very much. Some people have no taste
It’s been awhile, but I can see why. I wish you luck on your job. I have been missing this story and you did not disappoint it was a great chapter. Can’t wait to see what comes next. You are right not many people will read that many chapters to catch up (I wouldmit’s great), but even if they start at this point they will be nothing more than pleased ;) please continue.
i love this story so mutch and i’ll be sad to see it come to an end… but if you love writing this story so mutch (and it shows!!) you shouldn’t stop !!! there are still alot of us that love reading it and can’t wait untill you update again! i hope you got some good news about your job ! i’ll keep my fingers crossed! pps
Please don’t stop the story. I love reading it. I haven’t been commenting because my mama passed away 3 weeks ago. I am really depressed so don’t make it worse. Good luck with your job. You are in my thoughts.
MG,wow it seems like for ever since we have talked and that needs to change.good luck with your job babe.and i think you should let ur fans voted for you to continue or not too.we are the ones it’s going to hurt the most.(WERE SPOILED)im glad frank finally pulled his head out and did right by his daughters,and alice she doesnt know better just BEAT HER oops she will like that too much*wink*.love this update looking forward for more to come when your back from Vegas baby. GO METS!!!! love you!
Funnyone… i know… and its because of the ones who READ… that makes this very hard on me… i love this story… i love writing this story… so believe me it pains me to even think about ending it…
MG, Another great CHapter!!! Thanks PPS
Hey AMG, Just loving all of this fabulous fan fiction. It is brilliant. Thank you for sharing it woth me. Your Loyal Fan.
Awsome chapter MG, I love this story and always happy to see you post, please don’t stop writting it and please continue with the story, you are an amazing writer and we all love you. Good luck with the job my friend and happy news will come to you!