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Bed of Lies – Chapter 7
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Tina took a deep breath, smiled at Alice, who was waving to her, and got out of her car, walking into the planet ahead of Bette, not wanting to drool in public over the sight of her ass in tight jeans. Shane’s truck pulled up as they were heading in and Dana, of course, was already inside waiting for them.
"I told you to go with Shane in the truck Al."
"Well, I hadn’t been on the bike in years; I thought it would be fun."
"Yeah fun. I think you cracked a few of my ribs. And I don’t know how loud you had to be screaming for me to hear it through your helmet and mine."
"Shut up Porter. If you didn’t ride like a crazy lady, I wouldn’t have to hold on so tight."
"If you opened your eyes while you were riding, you would not be surprised every time we turned a corner. I need you to lean with me!" Bette’s voice was rising and they all knew it had nothing to do with Alice and the bike.
Space was what Bette needed when she was in this mood, and space is what they gave her. Alice, Dana and Shane left the table to order their breakfast; Shane gave Tina a look as she stood, urging her to join them. Tina nodded but could not bring herself to stand and leave. She reached over and placed a hand lightly on Bette’s forearm; the brunette looked up and attempted a weak smile.
"I’m sorry. I’m ok. Just a bit tired."
Tina just smiled, moving her hand further down Bette’s arm until she was clasping her hand, giving it a gentle squeeze, feeling the butterflies resurface as she watched Bette’s smile grow. Tina looked away but their hands were still intertwined, they sat like that, in silence, until the others returned with coffee and bagels.
They ate and drank while they talked, keeping the conversation light and fun, knowing Bette just needed them around and she would talk if and when she was ready.
For her part, Bette found her thoughts drifting to the blonde sitting next to her more than to the passing of her father. Tina was obviously close to everyone else in the group, and they had heard a lot about one another in the past year, but they had only met a week ago and yet the connection was undeniable. At least for Bette. Had Tina felt it too? That dance… and yesterday in the kitchen… and the pool. She didn’t know what it meant, and she didn’t know where it would lead, but she knew she wanted to know more.
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wow….great writing…i need to snap back into work mode but you’ve made it very hard! can’t wait for the next posting…
WOW!!!! What is Tina going to do now? What is she sorry for? Thast was HOT!!!! Thanks PPS
wow! this story is simply amazing, that left me breathless! you’re now one of my favorite authors ever! please post soon
Aghhh you can’t stop there!!! Can’t wait for more…PPS:)
Just love the story. It’s so good and wonderfully written….one can just feel the intensity between them and the anticipation is killing me. Thanks and pps.
Intense chapter. Loved it. Looking forward to more.
Well TP…that was some writing!!! I could feel every word of that. I wish you had another chapter ready to post tonight, I’m dying to know what happens when the lights go on!
Tina needs to decide what she wants. I am hoping that Eric is about to get the goodbye talk.
I’m sorry too… that the chapter ended there. Tina’s got a choice to make, and soon. This is so good, tbp, so good. Thanks
sigh…i feel all warm and tingly inside…is that normal right before going to work? i love this story!
Hummmm, I wonder if Tina is finally expressing her sorrow over Melvin’s death to Bette, or is she saying sorry because she can’t kiss her right now????Good chapter. Good cliff hanger. pps
You’ve got great imagination! I really like reading this story! Can’t wait for the next part!
That was moving along very well…then BAM! What is Tina sorry for? Melvin or Eric?? I sure hope you post very soon.
come on someone got to do the first step!! i cant wait to see a little love or a list bette falling ard on tina, bette is cute when shes in love. and tina need to decide and soon
tina has some explaining for her “sorry”… it seems she wants to hang with the gang more and more… wonder how long before starts to feel left out?? doubt he will notice? :)PPS
I was not even aware of breathing while reading this last part until my lungs started screaming at me! That was gorgeous writing! Thank you!!
I’m thinking that this is going to come as a shock to Eric……Oh Well!!!
so good, so well written, so much want . Please set Tina free and post soon so I can breathe again
so good, so well written, so much want . Please set Tina free and post soon so I can breathe again. Thank you
Lordy, Lordy, sweet Lord. What a sight! “She knew Bette had a motorbike, had seen it parked in her driveway, had seen her carry her helmet… but she had never seen her on it. She was wearing her usual: tight jeans, boots, tight black tank top, worn leather jacket. And she was straddling a bike. ” I can just picture JB in this scene. What a way to make an entrance. It would be just perfect. Although, the darkroom scene wasn’t too shabby either. ;-) Tina’s got to be prepared to play w/the big girls now. PPS.
I don’t think Tina is sorry in regards to Eric or Melvin, I think she’s sorry that at this moment as much as she’d like to, the kiss is not going to happen. Though if that was me, after all that in the dark room with Bette, I don’t know that I could stop. Damn that was good. Looking forward to the next update.
Well, well, isn’t it a new kind of forplay here, pressing “bodies, arms and fingers” together in the pretty intimate and cut-off-from-the-outside-world dark room ! I simply love it (… and totally share Tina’s emotions and breath’s trouble ! *sighs*) The same way I adore the way that my beloved two develop both a film and a relationship, right ? (*wink & grin*) Sensitive and sweet, realistic, full of sparks and growing emotional – and physical – tension : that’s what I call an endearing story – a fovorite of mine from the very beginning. Thank you so much for sharing, TP, it’s a true pleasure to be your reader – your faithful and delighted reader. More, please ! (*puppy eyes added to my best smile !* ) ^_^ – A.
I am really enjoying your story, it does seem a bit more based in reality than the show. I especially like how you are building and showing the connection between Bette and Tina whilst everyone else is oblivious. However, I believe you having taken the course..How To Get lurkers Out of The Shadows By Adding Mean and Spiteful Cliffies….and you must have gotten an A, ’cause it worked on me. Please up date soon.
sorry for what Tina???? Very intense…can u post soon plz.
I think Tina’s sorry because she won’t be able to go farther than their first kiss – at least not until she clears things up with Eric. How could Tina resist kissing Bette? Those beautiful lips, the warmth of her breath, the darkness of the room…Ohhhhh – no one could resist all of that and be human! This is sooo darn good TBP. You’re killing me with these cliffhangers though… couldn’t they have kissed at least one time before Tina became remorseful??? More – Soon — PLEASE.