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Angel Fire – 13
But somebody was interested…had been observing Bette in the few weeks she had been coming to Milk. Bette was completely unaware of this and that would always be one of her flaws; she would consistently have problems reading emotional signals from other people.
One this particular night she went to Milk as usual, got a sandwich and drink and consumed them while glancing furtively around the room. When someone met her eye, she looked away, returning her attention to her food. One woman asked her to dance and Bette was thrilled. But she was a stiff partner and was not good at small talk or flirting and so the woman thanked her and walked away. She remained a little longer watching people dance, then finished her drink and left.
“Bette,” someone said as she walked toward the Milk parking lot.
Bette turned around and saw the very tall woman who was one of the bouncers at the club. She looked at the woman expectantly.
“I’m Red,” the woman said and Bette nodded.
“Why don’t you buy me a cup of coffee at the Planet?” Red suggested.
Bette hesitated but her intuition told her that this woman was not a stalker and was not even hitting on her. So in a few minutes, they were drinking coffee at the Planet. They made small talk for a while and Bette waited.
“I notice you never leave with anyone,” Red observed.
She also observed that Bette’s eyes flickered with embarrassment, just for a moment, but that was all that Red needed to confirm her suspicion. This girl was a virgin, thought Red, or close to it. She wanted to find sex partners but was too naïve and reserved to know what to do.
There was something about her that was poignant to Red and she wanted to help. Red really understood wanting a woman, but not knowing what to do. It could be very frustrating and embarrassing. She sensed that this might be Bette’s problem.
“I know someone who can help you. Help you so that you don’t have to leave nightclubs alone…if you don’t want to.”
Bette’s surprise stunned her into silence, but she hid it well. Red thought that it was a plus that Bette could hide her feelings so effectively but it was also a minus. The bouncer suspected that this girl had a wide streak of romance and vulnerability in her persona, but was afraid to reveal either.
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(58 votes, average: 3.33 out of 5)
1st…….brb
love this story………pls continue….
I’ve said it before, I’ll say it again, that Red functions as an angel in their lives. Or Deus Ex Machina if you prefer. Talk about a friend in need. VERY interested to see the next chapter.
Pancha, everytime I read a chapter you leave me wanting more and more and MORE! I instantly got dirty thoughts when she said “I want to show you my garden” lol Anyhoots I can’t wait to here about this expereince. I think older woman and thier younger lovers, be it man or woman are always a hot combination…I love to see that. Gosh I really hope Angie and stacy get it on, I’m blue for them! lol
Can’t wait for the next chapter. Bette’s emergence is getting better and better. Post again sQQn!
Thanks for the update, can’t wait for the next chapter.
Damn, what a place to leave us hanging. Go Red!
As always the post ended too soon because I’m intrigued.
“I’d like to show you my garden,” Yvonne said after they had talked for a few moments. “It always makes me so calm and happy to be in it.” …I may need to snip a bloom or two, let me go get my shears. This has the feel of a saga, Pancha. I love a good saga, a ballad even, the ballad of Bette and Red, or Bette and whomever is the lucky soul to introduce her to the ways of l’amour. This is a western, isn’t it? Love it! Thanks!
Great story! I can’t wait for your next posting!
Wow Red is Bette hero lol, this is so good and can’t wait to see more, post soon please, thanks!
As soon as I saw Red I was like, “OMG it was RED!” and then I debated on whether or not to read the rest of the chapter or skim to the end. Not saying anything is wrong with Red, but considering she’s always been like an older aunt or mother figure it would’ve come off completely wrong to me. Jelly and Tace are way too cute.
Pancha great as always. I love your idea of Bette’s coming out and getting her experience. Can’t wait for more!
Awesome story…. funny, I still feel like the young Bette. If we could all be so lucky.
I can’t wait for the next chapter….
Great as always, pancha. A courtesan sounds like a very civilized way to get one’s experience in lovemaking. Very gentile instead of gropin’ and grabbin’.
this is so good. i hope we get the next post soon. red is the bomb for being so intuitive about young bette.
lovin this..post soon!!thx~
next chapter please..soon!!
This is one of the best story. Aolder woman,that the way to go if you need to know the what and the where fors. This is how Bette was taugh the gentleness of love making and how to treat a lady like a queen thanks
goog very good. i hope angelica gets all the support from her moms! good post
Red to the rescue. I can picture Bette as a very insecure young woman. When Bette stepped out of those offices she was the woman that we all love (and would love to be with). Sitting on the edge of my seat waiting for the next chapter.
Love it. Thank you
I really LOVE learning about your version of Bette’s past and how she became… well… alpha Bette. Fabulous.