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All you need is love – chapter 57
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“It doesn’t take much for Peggy to misread the signals – breathing can sometimes do the trick “
“I’ve never been part of family group like the one that you and Tina have “
Bette felt the breath catch in her throat – she tried to wipe the tears from her eyes
“We have had some laughs “Bette agreed
“I know you think he’s an ass “
Bette didn’t answer
“Truly Bette – he’s a great bloke “
“Divorce is always complex and what with them both having gay lovers “Bette said tactfully
“He loves Tina – not in the way that you think – but he gets so afraid of losing his daughters – that’s when he says stupid things that he doesn’t mean – I know that he’s said things to both of you that he hasn’t meant. He’s shy and you just intimidate the hell out of him “
Bette decided that the situation was too fraught for her to say that it had been her aim all along to scare Tina’s ex lover.
“None of it matters now “ Bette said “This is what we all need to get through – as hard as its going to be – the four of us have to survive this “
Paul’s tears dropped faster down his face
“That’s the thing Bette – I don’t think Ollie will pull through this “
They talked for another five minutes until Bette said that she really had to ring Tina’s parents. She got out of the car – it had just started snowing. Bette was trying to find the right words – how do you tell a parent that their daughter is in hospital – that the doctors don’t know if she will survive.
With a heavy heart Bette pressed the mobile number and waited for the connection to come through. It was midnight in America – which made it 7pm in Scotland. She waited for 96 seconds before the phone was answered
“Bette – how are you darling?”
“I’m at the hospital “Bette didn’t know any other way of opening the topic.
Tina’s mom went silent for all of ten seconds
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I’m feeling a little better for Bette but my heart goes out to Paul. I hope they are ALL well in the end.
I actually hope Ollie doesn’t die because I like Paul so much. I hope Tina is OK when she wakes up. Maybe it will be a good wake up call for her.
wow great chapter! Poor bette for having to go true that again. But atleast tina is going to be ok and hopefully ollie to.. pps
Lets have B see T….nice chappy
Hey Ally, nice to see you back! This was a sad but good chappy! Thanks for the update!
hi there Ally, it was a very heart wrenching chapter, poor Bette and Pual imagine what they are going through, please don’t take so long to post another chapter, waitign is bad in these kind of situations, i love your stories, good luck, have a nice weekend mate.love
Ok, don’t leave us hanging too long. Ollie’s been a shit, but we don’t want to lose him. I’m scared to think that Tina might have been drinking and that’s what caused the accident. Put us out of our misery, you drama queen you!! PPS
I knew it was Tina. Please let her wake up soon & I really would hate to see Ollie die. PPS!!
hmmm, the plot thickens. very good. thanks.
I am so glad Tina wasn’t drunk driving and she will be ok. Tina’s poor girls mom hurt dad probably going to die. Bette will be there for them and maybe Tina will find the strength to stay on top of the on going fight with alcoholism. I feel bad enough for Ollie to hope that he pulls through this. PPS
OK ally, Ollie is a jerk but he’s nice foil for the story. Make it a long and painful recovery so he appreciates his life but don’t kill him. He is the girls’ Dad. Don’t be so heartless.
Wow… didn’t see that coming he he… I was certain that your “payback” was gonna be on the L wing. I agree with many of the guys here that I dislike Ollie but never at the level of wishing for his death. Honestly I think Ollie will survive but he’ll be handicap or something like that… and Tina, well I guess you’re very aware that your story will “jump the shark” if you let her die. Great chapter Ally… waiting for the next post
why oh why wasn’t Ollie wearing his seat belt? why do I fear this will be something that haunts Tina? Why because Ally is the mistress of drama and the queen of cliff hangers – that’s why.
Hello ally, that was heartbreaking, and yet there is a little silver lining. Families have to go through some of the most trying of times and you have absolutely captured the emotions that come with this. This story really hit me hard as I have lost some of the most important people in my life to this same thing, it really brings up some very raw emotions in me and I want to thank you, we all need a way to remember the things we lost and the things we gain from those loses and I think that no matter what happens this family will be strong, thank you for such a wonderful chapter and I cannot wait to see where you go with this story… I could read this forever and ever… you are brilliant. Sincerely, JC
Please Allyemmerson don’t let us wait too long.As usual you are the best. PPS
On the edge of my seat as always Ally! Great job! Now just to make sure…Tina didn’t i don’t know turn off Ollie’s air bag did she? Or worse yet, HE didn’t drug her and like kidnap her or anything did her? DId they do a drug screen test??!! OK OK calming down…Tina better wake up quick! Thanks!
I bet Paul thinks you’re a meanie. And Bette, too, making her go through another love in a car crash. Bette just needs to be honest with the kids and keep it simple.
Hey Ally, Thank you for posting this new shapter. The last cliff hanger had me n the edge of my seat. Now is a time to support Tina and hopefully Ollie. Things are bleak right now but the human spirit is a wonderful and strong force then can survive the most heinous of injuries. I do hope that Ollie makes it through as his kids need their father. This accident just goes to show how fickle life can be as Ollie hoovers at death’s door while Tina’s body has chosen to rest and recuperate on its own. It would have been awful for Bette to have lost Tina so soon after finding love again. Their love transends all earthly bounds however their bodies need the physical replenishment of touch, taste, smell, sound and sight. Helena and Jody were true friends offering what little support and comfort they can during this traumatic time. Now I want Bette to get herself along the corrider to Tina’s room and tell her exactly how she feels about her. The good and the bad. This is a time to lay all your cards on the time and roll the dice. Perhaps Bette’s dulcet tones will register in Tina’s head and bring her back to consciousness. Ally, thank you for this dramatic turn of events. Just proves that you have to grab every single moment and make the best of it. Now surely Bette will propose and demonstrate her undying love and committment to Tina. I can’t wait to follow that journey that you put in motion. Many many thanks From Your Loyal Fan.
Good chapter. Good to know that Tina is not drunk and driving, and please let her wake up soon and let her be ok, poor Bette have to go throught this again. Yeah please don’t let Ollie die too, poor Paul. Please post more, thanks!
AllyE, you are the true drama Queen. Never thought of this happening. Surely you will let Tina be Ok, won’t you. Ollie is a shithead but we just want him out of her life, not dead. Poor Paul. I would not want to be Bette right now. Surely, as soon as Bette goes to Tina and touches her or lies down and holds her she will wake up. As a line in a song by Nancy Wilson says, (no, not Heart, the first one, jazz singer, beautiful black songtress)”with my love beside me.” Post soon please, like today.
You are just mean you know. I didn’t think I would say that one day but don’t kill him. And of course, take care of Tina please. And you are this wesite’s drama queen!
Oh man. We know you won’t let Tina die because then that would be the end of the world. lol But Ollie? Yeah he’s a shit but I wouldn’t want him to die. Good thing that Tina’s father suggested she make Bette her next of kin otherwise Bette would have to sit there all night clueless.
Don’t leave us here long Ally please
Phew, what a relief that it looks like Tina will be okay, just some bruises. But what about her kids? For their sake I hope Ollie pulls through surgery okay. Just as things were going good for Bette this disaster had to happen. At least it happened after she had repaired the minor riff she had w/ Helena over Tina’s drinking. Bette and Tina are both going to need the support of all of their friends and family to get through this difficult time. Bette seem to be handling thinks okay now, but what happens if Tina doesn’t wake up right away. How will her memories of Emily’s accident effect her then? PPS!