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All The White Horses: Part One (1/5)
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“A moment of painfully proper etiquette that could have only come from
your passive aggressive ***** of a mother needling you over and over
about something like it,” said Alice simply and lifting her eyebrow out
of habit as it was what she always did when saying things like this to
Helena. “I always thought I was queen of useless ***** but I swear your
mother has got you beating me because of her society snobbery child
rearing ways.”
“Alice!” Helena proclaimed, laughing in delight and feeling strangely
guilty for finding the comment both funny and disturbingly accurate.
“What?” huffed Alice, managing to sound innocent and indignant at the
same time. “She’s a total society snob. I’m demanding here and now to
be included on the next one of those evil Peabody Foundation lunches
she has. Lets see her try to be all clever yet insulting with
me around. I’ll kick her in the shins.”
“The Maitre D would have you removed from the premises,” pointed out
Helena logically while she gave an affectionate chuckle from imagining
the scenario as it occurred.
“That’s why I would kick her in the shins under the table with ninja
stealth,” said Alice wisely, nodding her head. Dana shifted as she said
this and the blonde held her breath, watching to see if the athlete
would wake but instead she muttered something else and
cuddled closer. Smiling at this, Alice found her hand moving to smooth
over the subtle frown lines gracing the tennis player’s brow. “No one
could prove who did the kicking. Oh, we would know it was me and not
you but who could say for sure? And there’s no way your society snob
mother would get you kicked out of a restaurant. Family feuds are way
too Jerry Springer.”
Helena released a murmuring noise of agreement then after a moment of
silence she said rather amiably, “You do realize I know full well
you’re avoiding further pursuit of my question?”
“What question?” asked Alice, feeling an abrupt onset of stubbornness.
Her sigh was barely audible as Dana shifted her head closer to Alice’s
stomach, causing her nose to nuzzle against the suddenly bare skin as
the journalist’s shirt was pushed up by the movement.
“How are you?” Helena echoed the sentiment with the same genuine care
as before. “And do refrain from saying again that you are *****. I’m
already aware of that. What I want to know is how you are in terms of
your feelings for Dana and having knowledge of her illness.”
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You’re back! I love the story. Post soon.
Great story. I was excited when you mentioned you were writing this fic and you sure didn’t disappoint. You write so well, it’s always a pleasure reading your work. Thanks for sharing.
awesome story! so sad yet hopeful. i agree with fibbie – you do write so well. your writing style is one of the best on this site. have you ever been published?
Although I’m not a Alice/Dana fan, you write so incredibly well that you’ve converted me. I especially like your intros with songlists and diatribes against those that you’re po’ed at. I have read your stories on your website. I consider you to be the benchmark to which all other Danish stories are to be compared and evaluated. You’ve got the skillz, gf!
Reading this made me realize just how much I’ve missed your stories. This gives me hope for season 3. Up until now I’ve been in a bad mood due to the spoilers, and a slowly diminishing faith in danish. I also love the way you write Helena. Your comments on the other board about Dana were so dead on. It felt as though you were voicing my opinion as well as your own. I would have commented there, but I don’t know how to do the spoiler font. I hope you update soon.
Spoiler font on MediaBlvd is [spoiler]Insert your spoilery text[/spoiler] Now you can post! lol. Okay, yeah. I’m a dork. And no, I’ve never been published. I sadly lack the attention span and talent to try developing original fiction.
Wow! Fantastic writing! I almost didn’t read because of the spoiler warning but am thrilled that I did. Look forward to the next installment.
This is great. You really capture Dana and Alice’s relationship and interaction quite well. I have to admit the “rumors” for season 3 are pretty depressing, but stories like this keep the hope alive for some happier moments mixed with bad. Great story.
Thanks for writing this! Your writing is great as usual, dreiser! I’m very interested to see where you’re going with this fic. I have one question, though: Why always the NC-17 rating?
that’s a good question Vaya..I thnk u like the onli 1 2ask that..hehe I been wonderin bout that aswell dreiser..y always NC-17 rating when it aint always a NC-17 chapter?? not that I mind :p ..ne who0oo ur BAK!?!?! :D yaaa..WB! u been missed! I been missin ur striez, GRT as alwayz!! I LUV how u write S3 fan-fic!! u make me S3 wish’z cum true! :) THNX lot4writing mate, dun stop..I Friggin Luv: “All The White Horses” as much as I do luv: “Bitter Endings, Sweet Beginnings”
I suppose I use NC-17 rating because I like to force people to log on to read my fanfics. If that’s still the case. I don’t know. I’ve gotten complaints in terms of my story content and ratings before from other sites so I rather just tag all my fics as the very “worst” and leave it at that. To be honest, I never pay attention to the ratings when I pick out stories to read so I didn’t really think anyone else did either. lol. Sorry. It’s a quirk.
glad you’re back! love the story..feels like im picturing season 3..only, this is just too good to be true (the connection of alice and dana) but at least i found a version of S3 i’d like to see…
You are one of my favorite writers. You do it so well. I love how they’re ok, and Alice is willing to be there even if she thinks Dana doesn’t feel the same.
luv this story. great beginning and can’t wait to see more of these two reconciling. :D
this is great but I just hope that nothing bad has to happen to dana please post soon
you write so beautifully… i dread this story but figure i’ll come along with you- for now anyway.
Awww i just love your alice and dana stories ^_^ This is soo how i want season 3 to be….its amazing…Your a fantastic writer
Danish fics are starting to get buried in the update page. Anyway, you have no idea how glad I am to see you writing again! If S3 has even an ounce of your style and wit in it then I’m sure I’d be twice as addicted…only if I actually get hear Helena calling Alice ‘Darling’ then it wouldn’t be worth it. Lol, nice touch. As for the NC-17 rating – I’m a big Danish perv so it gives me some hope that Danish might be ‘getting it’ together. So please, continue giving me high hopes!
Great story! Thank you so much, you’re so very eloquent. I absolutely love your writing style. And I love the way you portray Helena, I think there is so much more to her character than they have shown in the L word. I can’t wait to see her and Alice become friends in Season 3. I hope you post again soon.
I’ve read this twice now, so I think it’s time to leave a comment. Is it possible to become a dreiser geekfan, because that is what I’ve become. I love your Alice always, but I’ve love your Helena also, I hope on the show they write her simular to the way you have written her. I can hope right lol. As always you have the Dana/Alice nailed. But you also give us a nice Alice/Helena relationship. Great as always. Plus I hope you haven’t droped your other story, I loved it and still check both her and your website often hoping for an update. Enjoy your break from college, and if you see yourself becoming bored, hey we would love to read anything you might write. Thanks again for the wonderful chapter. Deb