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Actions Speak Louder than Words chpt.36( from Is love Enough)
Dana is cut off by Alice
Alice: No I am not stressed out. Because if I was you would know definitely. And for your other question ***** no it’s not you. I enjoy you very much. And the reason why I’ve been doing is because I feel so comfortablw with you and some time I like it when you take of me
Dana: You do?
Alice: Hello earth to Dana. Of course I do. What are you that blind that you can’t see how much I like what you do
Dana: No I’m not blind Al. It’s just I was worried about you drinking and you being drunk a good 5 days out the week. I mean where is our time together? Do you think about these things?
Alice gets out of the bed
Alice: No.I didn’t think that it was a big deal
Dana is upset…She turns and leaves the bedroom…Alice runs after her…She catches up to Dana and she places her hands on her shoulders
Alice: Dana I’m sorry.
Dana turns around
Dana: No your not. You are just saying that. You told me the truth and now I am going to go
Alice: But I don’t to go
Dana: What do you care I could have dropped you home and then went home myself. You would have never noticed that I wasn’t by your side this morning. I gotta go
Dana puts her clothes on…She then grabs her keys and her bag…She heads out thr door…Alice is behind her
Alice: Can I call you later?
Dana: If that’s what your heart tells you yes. But if your mind tells you then no. I want all of you and not half. Until you understand that I think that we should take some time off for a while
Alice: Ok
Dana: See ya
Alice: See ya
Dana heads down the hall and down the stairs…Alice closes the door and leans up against it…She lets that tears in her eys fall…They feel warm against her cool body…She makes her way to the bathroom where she showers and gets ready for work…She gets dressed and leaves the house and heads for work…
GROUND LEVEL OF THE CAC
Bette pulls up and she gets out of the car…She sets the alarm and heads towards the elevator…She presses the button as she hears the door open on the lobby level…She hears the doors close again as she waits for it to reach the ground…It does and the door opens…Bette’s mouth opens and her eyes widen
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(39 votes, average: 3.33 out of 5)
The explicit sex scene would make this an NC-17 rated story.
come on, i want alice and dana… to make love and reconciliate
cold showers cold showers cold showers!!! but unfortunately the love scene is now being overshadowed by Candy C coming onto Bette and it seems that Bette does not hve the strength to say no again?? What the heck are you trying to do to Bette and Tina!!!nice going though
I love this story, really I do, but Candy Ass is really bothering me. Well her and Bette. So if Tina wouldnt have called was Bette just gonna let Candace fuck her right there. Then she just stands there. Thats not the Bette we know. Then why is she professing her love to Tina so much, making sure she understands, but then letting another woman feel and kiss all over her. This shit isnt right. I really intrestead in where this is going. I hope my couple will pull through this, but its not looking good. If I was Tina and found out about the elevator and the office, I would be outa there ASAP. Dont brake Tina’s heart a second time.
Even Bette is under stress because she may lose her job, why Bette lets candace kiss and touch her and says to Tina just after ” I love you. Do you hear me ? Why Bette says to candace “I can’t” ? Does she want it ? Is she tempts ? Tina seems not enough for Bette. It makes me remember what’s happen when Candace walked in the Planet and Bette whose eyes are fixed on Candace like a wild deer” didn’t say anything. Bette needs to be honest with Tina. If she wants Candace, she could say it. Tina earns someone who wants her and only her
Thank you four this story.
She can’t do candace again now matter how HOTTTTTTTTTT she is!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Yay!!!!!!!!!! You weave it together so well. The lovemaking….whoo…Oh my goodness. It was hott and so descriptive. Wow. Dana and Alice….
alice is kinda of taking Dane for granted. That’s not cool. I’m glad Dana has some backbone and stands up for herself. I like that you bring Candance back as a distraction that Bette has to face and push away. Bette is in such turmoil….everything in her life is on the line right now and she’s doing her best under the strain. I think keeping Candance in the story brings out a beautiful contrast between the old Bette and the new Bette. Once again she’s in an unbelievably stressful situation with a temptress nipping at her heels. Oh what, oh what will she do? Thanks for another great one. This chapter had me totally captivated.
Good chapter. Damn Bette and Tina are so fucking hot and awesome, and let see what’s next. Post soon, thanks!
Actually this story is more like a NC-we are all to young to read this story…..:-) *joking*
Why the hell is Bette being so nice to Candyass?? Oh that makes me mad!
i´m 100% with Neq..WTF she is thinking?? Tina dont deserve this and i hope Bette tell her that Candance is harassment her..great chapter V post soon thanks
God why bring Candace back, I hate that Bette is having so many different emotions, but please keep Bette and Tina together. Keep us posted.
I think a cold shower is needed after this. WOW. But do make Bette hit Candaces ass so far away as to the moon. Don´t make a mistake Bette. Post sson