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A TiBette Love Story: Second Serving (15)
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“I need a code word to get you to open the door?”
“Yes.”
“Shazammm.”
“Wrong, sorry.”
Patience and not getting her way had never been Bette’s strong points. Bette inhaled deeply and was unable to keep herself from confessing, “Tina…I am sorry if you feel I am pressuring you in any way. That is not and will never be my intention.”
Tina had moved away from the sink and had her head pressed up against her side of the door. Her eyes were closed as she listened intently to Bette’s words.
No response came. Bette placed her hands on the door frames and continued, “From the moment I met you, I have felt an attraction to you as I have never before experienced. I just want to spend time with you…I adore your company. We can just talk…dessert is being set up in the formal dining area…let’s just enjoy the evening together…I just…”
Though she could not see her, she could feel the sincerity of Bette’s words. They spoke directly to her heart. Tina knew she could no longer resist what she had been aching to do all evening…
Tina opened the door. “For the record, the magic word was please, Bette.” Tina gave her a small smile and moved out of the bathroom. “And just so you know, you already had me at Tina.”
Bette just stood there with her mouth somewhat open in shock. “Did you… listen to what I said?”
“I heard every word and I would like you to stop talking.”
Bette is completely taken off guard and just nods her head.
“Because I really want to kiss you.”
Tina moved in closer to Bette and began to explore Bette’s lips by softly pressing hers against them. Bette’s desire to absolutely ravish Tina was overwhelming but she vowed to let Tina set the pace and kept her hands gripping on the sides the doorframe.
Tina placed her hands around Bette’s neck and leaned in to delicately lick at Bette’s bottom lip and then moved toward the top. It became obvious that she sought entry into Bette’s mouth with her tongue. Bette was not going to deny her and opened her mouth.
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Yeah! Seven pages and lots of kissing! All I wanted! Thank you very much! =D
How can you top dessert now… wow… beautiful kiss… i think dessert should be hot and cold… like baked alaska… hot…pps
You doing a great job with the progression of this story. Can’t wait for your next post.
Hey LuvTi, writing you back on my last night in the middle of the desert. You are sick? Uh oh…that can’t be good. Must have been the dessert, harhar. Maybe Nurse Kennard can help, but she’s busy with a VIP patient named Bette Porter. Dessert looks…hmmm, promising! Get well soon because I really need another chappy!PPVS.
Well we got a kiss before dessert. Even better! Now on with dessert please. This is a great date! Thanks for posting!
how fun to have found an update from you…loved it…and i agree with mbe, you are really progressing this story nicely…sexy, believable, exciting…
Gah – as much as I’m glad Tina was straight (so to speak) with Bette, all this anticipation is killing me. The kiss left them (and me) wanting more…phew. Talk about hot! Loved this as always – thanks for making my day!
ok now I am just going out to by brownies….
Holy mackerel!!! Okay, ignore PM, cause this is WAY WAY WAY better!!!!! Somewhat came together? How about totally, completely, and perfectly came together! Can’t wait for the next step…thank you!!!
Looking forward to more! PPS
Oh my goodness. You have got a real talent for writing! I was really blown away with the intensity of emotions you developed. Thanks so much for an amazing chapter. It’s so nice to read something like that, maybe it will cure me? lol. I wish it worked that way. As soon as I am up to it, I will post again. Wow, really though. Excellent writing! Thanks for posting!
so would that be dessert or ‘dessert’. wink wink.
I love it!!! Thank you PPS
Thank you! :o) This was an excellent,adorable and humorous chapter! *wink*
God this is too much fun!Terrific job – as you were.
Great story. Looking forward to more.
A wonderful pre-dessert… ;-)
Thanks Luv – found the key – have made myself comfortable and read the update. Wonderful as always and so tender and sweet as well. So love how you wrote of them telling each other what they were feeling. I have told you that I love this story right :) So where’s that homemade pie and i hope you’ve gotten out of that writer’s block you had cause I’m here to stay at least till the end of June :)Thank you again for this story!
oh hoh! U r a great tease…dessert is still to come??? Bring it on! That by the way, was great, riveting in fact!!
now could we really have the dessert??? :)i love the flirtatious banter between the two. i cant blame tina…who could resist the charms of a bette porter? go gay for bette! :)
Oh yeah, after that kiss, I definitely wanna be dessert.
Hi there! I’ve been a silent reader for a while but just wanted to say that I’m totally LOVING this story! I love the banter and the flirting between them. Thanks so much for sharing this and PPS!!! :)
OK Luv, your answer to this question, “what do YOU suggest for dessert??”, my suggestion for dessert would be: 1. ice cubes2. strawberries & creamAnd just in case, a defibrillator. AWESOME post, Luv. I love it. I am SOOOOOO jealous of them. My heart is racing like crazy. WOW. Please don’t keep me waiting too long for the next post.
The ol’ nurse trick huh, that old chestnut :P Awesome chapter, you know how much I love a bit of tension and suspense ;) And I’m not too low down on the list! Crazy… Glad you finally got rid of that writer’s block :) I guess having a cold does wonders for ya. Keep em’ comin! (I am of course expecting 81 chapters from you too) xox
That was wonderful and sweet!