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A new and different B & T beginning CH 40
“WHAT!!!!!!!!………………..who is this?”, Bette said determent.
“One of your many admires!!!” DEEP VOICE said laughing
“Is this some kind of sick joke”, Bette asked angryly.
“Not at all detective Porter – only enjoying myself while taking out the competition”
“What kind of sick person are you – are you out of your fucking mind……there is no way you can be normal”, Bette screamed into her cell while Lare tried to grab Bette’s cell.
“I know you like to control things Bette……but this is one person you have no control over!!!!!!” DEEP VOICE said laughing.
Silence for about a minute.
“The person you are looking for Bette is in the water by Bridge gate”
The phone went silent and person hung up.
“I can’t belive this……..send a team out to Bridge gate at once”, Bette said out loud after hitting the endbutton.
Every one went back to work. A team, was sent out to Bridge gate. Bette went into the departements technical office to get some help.
“Peter……I need you to set a trace up on my calls……I just had the killer online”, Bette said.
“Okey….just give me your cell and I’ll make the arrangement. You can pick it up in about 30 min”, Peter said
“Okey….I’ll be back in 30min……….I’ll be at forensic….maybe they have found some evidence”, Bette said
With in an hour, Bette had spoken to forensic, got her cell back and was now on her way out to Bridge gater water due to the fact a body with only 1 ear had been found tied up to a pole at the bridge.
The body was of a young girl about 25-35 years old – they had not yet identified the woman and she didn’t seem to be homeless or poor at all. Infack quiet the oppisite with fine hair, well done manicure and expensive clothes on.
But the problem was that the body had been in the water for hours so many of the evidence was now gone and the team had many hours infront of them to gather some for future use.
Bette and Lara were exhaustet – both hadn’t had much sleep in the last couple of days and it was starting to show. Bette forgot to write down several clues, but luckely for her forensic had sealed most evidence before she stepped in them.
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(24 votes, average: 4.08 out of 5)
WOW good to see you back Trolle, hope you not leave us again lol. That was awesome and drama coming, hope we will find out whos the killer. Please more, thanks!
Just read the whole fic trolle i lvoe it, but I WANT BEE AND TEE BACK TOGETHER _ CAN BETTE SORT HERSELF OUT ALREADY!!??
I remember this story. Tina is out of the country with her daughter, while Bette continues to work in law enforcement. Bette at one time was watching over Tina and they fell in love then. Now they are separated due to work. Hope to see more of this story soon.
I just finished reading this wonderful story, and really hope you get to add some chapters to it soon.
where is the rest of this story, it to good to leave there
man finally got around to reading the rest of this story and it was great would love to read more. Hope you will update.
I’m really glade you are back on this great Story. I hope bet can get her deamons to rest and she can live with Tina happyly. I can’t wait how the killer is. PPS
Wow, this is really something. I may have to go back and read earlier chapters to get up to speed but it looks like a great ride. PPS
It’s GREAT to see you back with an update on this story. Bette needs to go to Italy to visit Tina. She needs the break and they need to reconnect. She can’t risk Tina coming back until this serial killer is captured and her being away may through him or her off their game enough to trip up. PPS :o).
Are you back for good?!?! *hopeful* Nice to see you back :D can Bette just quit her job and go to Tina and start a gallery and live a peaceful loving life happily ever after? *hopeful*
This is getting so good!!! I hope the killer is not going to go after Tina. Thanks PPS