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A new and different B & T beginning CH. 18
Bette began to wonder, if she had done something for Tina to gain her pain back in her shoulder. But at least she was resting in her arms at the moment. It felt good. Bette knew, this was what she wantet. She wantet Tina in her life together with Charlot. She wantet to wake up with Tina every morning and look at her beautiful face, her smile.
She so desperately wantet to be able to take the pain away from Tina, but she had to make Tina feel safe, when they were together. To gain her trust back. And they had to finish their conversation from this morning and it was going to be tough both on Bette and for Tina, because Bette had to tell Tina some things, she properly didnt want to hear.
An hour had almost passed by, when Tina opened her eyes. Looking directly into Bettes smiling face. Hey beautiful, Bette said, while kissing Tina on her forehead.
Tina: Hey babe
Bette: Are you alright Tee………is the pain gone?
Tina tried to raise her body from Bettes chest and with Bettes help, they managed to sit up. Year, Im ok and the pain is gone……..them painkiller sure helped, Tina said.
They were both sitting up in the bed. Bette looked concerned at Tina, trying to figure out, what Tina was thinking. Bette took one of Tinas hands and looked directly at her. Tina raiset her head, to meet Bettes smiling face, but it was not her famous Porter smile, it was a nervous smile. Tee, are you ok………I mean with what happend between us in the bathroom, Bette said.
Tina: I dont regret anything, Bette……..I wantet it too, you know……..but I didnt please you…….
Bette: Yes you did……..all I wantet was to make you happy, to make love to you. That was enough for me……..I dont want to push you into anything youre not ready for
Tina: (smiling) Bette……..I may not be physical ready to please you yet…….but youre time will come
Bette: Dont worry about anything, Tee……..well take one step at a time. Bette leaning in and placing a sweet kiss on Tinas lips. How about lunch, Tee?
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(39 votes, average: 3.36 out of 5)
Trolle, as I just discovered your story recently, I preferred to comment after having read all the chapters from the beginning.
Well… read them ? Savour them would be better to say ! You made a really excellent work and it was a great journey to do, discovering all the former chapters I missed until now. Detective stories with psychology are a genre I always liked a lot in literature !
So, from now I will not stay a “silent reader” anymore : I’m caught and happy to be – and will be delighted to wait and comment your next chapters !
By the way, please don’t be afraid of this good old writersblock : every authors know it, from time to time. So don’t worry, enjoy your break week and let inspiration comes back slowly, sweetly… Your story is great, both a thriller and an engaging romance : a wonderful and original mix !
Cheer up !! *wink*
Awww….. you’re going back to the sea, and you didn’t email me? And what’s wrong, honey? What’s going on with life, that has you upset? (I sent you two emails eariler, today….. so, email me, when you get back.) Again, Happy Birthday!! :)
Hope you have a wonderful birthday! Enjoy the sea and I hope that whatever is bothering you get better and you come back refreshed. Take care and of course, love the story
Hope you have a wonderful birthday! Enjoy the sea and I hope that whatever is bothering you get better and you come back refreshed. Take care and of course, love the story
K
wonderful chap, love this story, don’t stay away too long.
Happy belated birthday!!! Great chapter! Hope the writers block doesn’t keep you down for too long!
Do continue this story, love the line that your taking…Happy B-day, how OLD are you now???? tks
HAPPY BIRTHDAY :) And this chapter was great to, doesn’t seem like you have a writersblock to me :) Take your time, I’ll be waiting.
Happy Birthday :-)
Hej Trolle tillykke med fødselsdagen;-)Jeg synes nu ikke dette kapitel bar præ af at du skulle have skrive problemer. Det var en rigtig god dialog du har fÃ¥et skrevet… Have a nice week by the sea and hopefully you will come back refreshed and ready to give us a new chapter of your great story
awesome story..you are a GREAT writer, and happy Birthday! Enjoy the ocean, relax, and have fun! Will patiently wait for next update….
Happy Brirthday. Can’t wait for you to continue withe this story but for now enjoy your special day.
Hi! Your story is great. Keep it up. I am looking forward to the next chapter. Have a Happy Birthday!
HAPPY Birthday, I know that your age is your own business, but how long have you been in business? (ha, ha). I hope you enjoy your stay at the ocean. I love the ocean in fact I was scheduled to go he Cali. for a week at the end of this month. I love the drive up and down the PCH. As I said before, I am loving you story and your mamagement of it. Big step for Bette to introduce Tina and charlot to Kit (love it). If you had a writers block,it looks like you have unblocked it rather well. In reference to Kit’s statement, is there some underlining reason that Bette left the Art Gallery and went into police work? Maybe there is an avenue for her to return to the gallery. I agree with B&TForever, I think that the candy kane is involved in all of this. Maybe she is the type that can’t take no for an answer. To bad, so sad, Candy because Tina is officially off the market. She is now TAKEN and Bette will not be sharing. It would be fun to see Bette and Tina out clubing and Tina letting all the chicks know that Bette is taken. Please continue and welcome back.
oh boy i love it..Bette finally open up to Tina i think they are great together and Charlot is so cute..great chapter post soon thanks
I hope you had a nice birthday!!!!!! great update and nothing wrong with the story except you don’t post enough lol
This chapter is wonderful and please post soon, thanks! HAPPY BIRTHDAY!