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A new and different B & T beginning CH. 18
Previously
Their breathing was heavy. Bette kissed Tinas forehead, while Tinas juice went down her fingers. Bette slowly retreated her fingers from Tinas core, bringing them up to her mouth, to lick the liguid of them. Tina raiser her head from Bettes shoulder, while Bette supportet her back. Bette smiling at Tina, leaning in to kiss her, so she could taste herself.
Tina: (smiling) GOD…..that was amazing…….how the ***** did you learn that?
Bette: (famous Porter smile) Something I picked up on my way……..especially for you, Tee……..now lets get you cleaned up
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Chapter 18
Bette leaned in and placed a big kiss on Tinas lips. Guiding her into the shower to clean them up. They stood face to face while the hot water rand down their aroused bodys. Bette cupped Tinas face with her hands and kissed her. Tina opened her mouth to give Bettes tongue access. Their tongues danced into each others mouths. Each wanting to deepen the kiss furter.
Tina put both her hands on Bettes waist, while doing so, her face revealed pain and Bette saw it.
Bette: Are you ok, Tee?
Tina: (fake smile) Year, Im ok
Bette: (concerned) No, youre not…..you have the same look on your face, as in the car after the accident……..Yourre in pain, arent you Tee?
Tina: Maybe just a little……..I must have made a wrong move with my right arm earlier
Bette: Lets finish off here and get you some painkillers and some rest
Tina: Bette……..Im going to be fine
Bette: Year……well Im not going to hurt you in any way Tee………..so lets get out of the shower
Bette and Tina stepped out of the shower. Bette dried herself off and then Tina afterwoods. She dressed herself, then helped Tina into her clothes. She followed Tina into the bedroom, tucked her into bed for some rest. Bette found a glass of water and 2 pills for Tina to take.
Bette: Tee……take this and get some rest
Tina: Only, if you will stay with me
Bette sat on the bed and laid down. Tina scooped in to her safe arms after taking her pills. She restet her head on Bettes chest, while Bette stroke her face. Tina fell a sleep. Bette could feel Tina was relaxed and could hear her breathing, her chest raising up and down.
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(39 votes, average: 3.36 out of 5)
Trolle, as I just discovered your story recently, I preferred to comment after having read all the chapters from the beginning.
Well… read them ? Savour them would be better to say ! You made a really excellent work and it was a great journey to do, discovering all the former chapters I missed until now. Detective stories with psychology are a genre I always liked a lot in literature !
So, from now I will not stay a “silent reader” anymore : I’m caught and happy to be – and will be delighted to wait and comment your next chapters !
By the way, please don’t be afraid of this good old writersblock : every authors know it, from time to time. So don’t worry, enjoy your break week and let inspiration comes back slowly, sweetly… Your story is great, both a thriller and an engaging romance : a wonderful and original mix !
Cheer up !! *wink*
Awww….. you’re going back to the sea, and you didn’t email me? And what’s wrong, honey? What’s going on with life, that has you upset? (I sent you two emails eariler, today….. so, email me, when you get back.) Again, Happy Birthday!! :)
Hope you have a wonderful birthday! Enjoy the sea and I hope that whatever is bothering you get better and you come back refreshed. Take care and of course, love the story
Hope you have a wonderful birthday! Enjoy the sea and I hope that whatever is bothering you get better and you come back refreshed. Take care and of course, love the story
K
wonderful chap, love this story, don’t stay away too long.
Happy belated birthday!!! Great chapter! Hope the writers block doesn’t keep you down for too long!
Do continue this story, love the line that your taking…Happy B-day, how OLD are you now???? tks
HAPPY BIRTHDAY :) And this chapter was great to, doesn’t seem like you have a writersblock to me :) Take your time, I’ll be waiting.
Happy Birthday :-)
Hej Trolle tillykke med fødselsdagen;-)Jeg synes nu ikke dette kapitel bar præ af at du skulle have skrive problemer. Det var en rigtig god dialog du har fÃ¥et skrevet… Have a nice week by the sea and hopefully you will come back refreshed and ready to give us a new chapter of your great story
awesome story..you are a GREAT writer, and happy Birthday! Enjoy the ocean, relax, and have fun! Will patiently wait for next update….
Happy Brirthday. Can’t wait for you to continue withe this story but for now enjoy your special day.
Hi! Your story is great. Keep it up. I am looking forward to the next chapter. Have a Happy Birthday!
HAPPY Birthday, I know that your age is your own business, but how long have you been in business? (ha, ha). I hope you enjoy your stay at the ocean. I love the ocean in fact I was scheduled to go he Cali. for a week at the end of this month. I love the drive up and down the PCH. As I said before, I am loving you story and your mamagement of it. Big step for Bette to introduce Tina and charlot to Kit (love it). If you had a writers block,it looks like you have unblocked it rather well. In reference to Kit’s statement, is there some underlining reason that Bette left the Art Gallery and went into police work? Maybe there is an avenue for her to return to the gallery. I agree with B&TForever, I think that the candy kane is involved in all of this. Maybe she is the type that can’t take no for an answer. To bad, so sad, Candy because Tina is officially off the market. She is now TAKEN and Bette will not be sharing. It would be fun to see Bette and Tina out clubing and Tina letting all the chicks know that Bette is taken. Please continue and welcome back.
oh boy i love it..Bette finally open up to Tina i think they are great together and Charlot is so cute..great chapter post soon thanks
I hope you had a nice birthday!!!!!! great update and nothing wrong with the story except you don’t post enough lol
This chapter is wonderful and please post soon, thanks! HAPPY BIRTHDAY!