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Heartless – (Chapter: 7. you'll never find nobody better than me)
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I pull away first and we both look hesitantly at each other before smiling. I give her another quick kiss on the lips when my cell phone rings.
I groan out of frustration because I know who it is.
“What!” I pick up the phone
“You have 14 minutes” Shannon replies and then hangs up
“She’s uh…persistent”
“This is nothing…you should see her when she tries to get a guy she likes” I replied remembering the kid she was with before Scott
“Stalker?” Ashley asks
“Actually she’s sneaky to start off, she had lunch with the kids mother at their country club, kid never stood a chance”
Ashley blew out some air, “so I guess we should get ready huh?”
I sighed as well, “Yeah I guess”
I looked around the room, “um I can’t see anything”
She laughs and reaches over to my nightstand and turned on a flash light and put it under her chin.
“Oh right” I looked around feeling foolish
I grabbed a few flashlights from the hallway closet after our shower, with the intentions of using them to go get some candles from downstairs, something tells me we didn‘t make it that far.
She crinkles her nose, “you’re cute when you just wake up, you know that?”
I blush and grab the flash light out of her hands and point it at her, “and you my dear are sexy when you wear my clothes”
I pointed the flashlight to reveal her in a silk robe similar to the one I was wearing and it was now her turn to blush.
“Yeah well I’m gonna need some more of your clothes for this party, that you’re dragging me too” she smirks
“oh no, don’t even!” I yell as I try to tackle her but she hops off the bed before I can get my arms around her
She’s laughing at me as she backs up, out of my reach.
I jump off the bed and walk out into the hallway, with the flashlight and make my way down the steps into the kitchen to try to find some of the candles my mother spends hundreds of dollars on but conveniently are no where around the house.
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omg this last chapter was so cute….im sad tht it ended tho…maybe make this a trilogy…plz??? n e ways badass writing on this…keep up the good work
ok that was amazing as usual but it just doesnt feel complete like there defintitly needs an epilogue!! well i wanted to thank you for makin me laugh like i was literally laughin out loud through every chapter not jus this 1. i read this while i am very drunk which isnt a good thing bc im extremely emotional when im drnk which meant i cried in parts of this so ill be re-reading this tommorow when im sober bc i wont remember any of this tomorrow anyways but there should epilogue like there sb trip in florida u know end it where it started well ima go drink some more then get up and go to summer school…EPILOGUE!
babe, it was perfect…start to finish, save tonight all the way up until now…perfect. I find it very interesting that you’re so much funnier in your writing…I’M KIDDING, or am I? I’m glad I’m a pain in your ass cause you’re a pain in mine, but in the best way possible. great job hun
I love you, I hate you, I love you. Yes, I love you! I decided that although it’s done, over…(unless you trilogise it of course lol!) that the two stories as a whole are some of the best, funniest and most touching I have ever read. Thanks for writing them and I’m already in love with your new one xx
that was perfect! the best way possible to end such an amazing story! I’m so sad it’s over but I feel like everything was wrapped up really nicely. everything that happened just seemed right and like it fit. this was truly a masterpiece. I’m really looking forward to your next story!
dude!!! that was awesome!! great ending
wow. what a fantastic way to wrap it up. although you did have me wanting to jump through the screen and kill parker and then strangle spence a lil bit. but it all worked out thankfully! always great to have people like ky, shannon, and blake looking out for you and ready to help out with these things. anyway I’ve enjoyed every single chapter of both parts and plan to reread it all (hopefully in one sitting if I have the time lol). thank you so much for writing both of these, truly great excellent fantastic fabulous job (I’d grab my thesaurus but I’m sure you get the idea!). I’m planning to read the next story although its 330 am so I may leave it till tomorrow but I can’t wait for it! again, thanks and great job!! =)