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Heartless – (Chapter: 7. you'll never find nobody better than me)
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“Forever” she replies
“Good” I hand her the envelope, “because I don’t think I could go with out you”
“What do you mean?” she asks as she pulls out what’s in the envelope
Her eyes widen as she reads the plane tickets.
“Are you serious?” she asks and looks back down
“Spring Break, just the two of us, where we first met” I say smiling
“Florida?!” she practically screams
I nod my head and she pulls me into an embrace.
“Compliments of Grandfather, who wants to meet you officially by the way” I say
“Bring it on, no one can resist the Davies’ charm”
“I’m living proof”
Okay that was seriously the end.
Hope you all enjoyed the ride of these two and I hope you’ll continue to read my stories… I’ve begun writing a new story that’s a little different, it’s called “You Found Me” and it will be posted after this update. Thank you all again for reading and staying with me while I took my hiatus and I appreciate all the kind words and compliments you’ve given me over the past few months or so. I got this idea for the story while I was actually at the hotel that they were at in 2006, so yes it’s a real place, it’s called the Vistana Resort in Orlando. I never thought that I would actually write it or that it would escalate as far as it did, but I’m glad I wrote it and I’m happy with the way that it turned out and I hope you are all happy as well. You guys have been amazingly nice to me and I love you all!
I have to give shoutouts to three people however SoNFANFOREVER for commenting on I’m pretty sure every chapter I’ve ever written and your in depth analysis, I look forward to hearing what you have to say every time. lizard201007 for messaging me, had I never read your messages I wouldn’t have found the inspiration to start writing it back up again and I’m very glad that I did so thank you, and stix04 well what can I say…you’re a pain in my ass but I thank you anyway 
The songs were- ‘take me on the floor’ by the veronicas and "wonderful tonight’ by eric clapton
K now I’m done
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omg this last chapter was so cute….im sad tht it ended tho…maybe make this a trilogy…plz??? n e ways badass writing on this…keep up the good work
ok that was amazing as usual but it just doesnt feel complete like there defintitly needs an epilogue!! well i wanted to thank you for makin me laugh like i was literally laughin out loud through every chapter not jus this 1. i read this while i am very drunk which isnt a good thing bc im extremely emotional when im drnk which meant i cried in parts of this so ill be re-reading this tommorow when im sober bc i wont remember any of this tomorrow anyways but there should epilogue like there sb trip in florida u know end it where it started well ima go drink some more then get up and go to summer school…EPILOGUE!
babe, it was perfect…start to finish, save tonight all the way up until now…perfect. I find it very interesting that you’re so much funnier in your writing…I’M KIDDING, or am I? I’m glad I’m a pain in your ass cause you’re a pain in mine, but in the best way possible. great job hun
I love you, I hate you, I love you. Yes, I love you! I decided that although it’s done, over…(unless you trilogise it of course lol!) that the two stories as a whole are some of the best, funniest and most touching I have ever read. Thanks for writing them and I’m already in love with your new one xx
that was perfect! the best way possible to end such an amazing story! I’m so sad it’s over but I feel like everything was wrapped up really nicely. everything that happened just seemed right and like it fit. this was truly a masterpiece. I’m really looking forward to your next story!
dude!!! that was awesome!! great ending
wow. what a fantastic way to wrap it up. although you did have me wanting to jump through the screen and kill parker and then strangle spence a lil bit. but it all worked out thankfully! always great to have people like ky, shannon, and blake looking out for you and ready to help out with these things. anyway I’ve enjoyed every single chapter of both parts and plan to reread it all (hopefully in one sitting if I have the time lol). thank you so much for writing both of these, truly great excellent fantastic fabulous job (I’d grab my thesaurus but I’m sure you get the idea!). I’m planning to read the next story although its 330 am so I may leave it till tomorrow but I can’t wait for it! again, thanks and great job!! =)