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    My One Special One – Chapter 23

    Story written on September 5, 2006 by arceextl.
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    Story Shortlink: https://assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=62332
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    The hand pushed the elevator door open…Tina held her breath…will Bette get to have ‘dessert’?

    My One Special One – Chapter 23

     

     

    Previously…         

     

    She reached for the buttons and pressed “1” and watched as the doors closed – or almost closed.  Just as they were about to shut, a hand reached in and the doors automatically sprung apart.

     

    Crap, Tina thought.  Everyone had told her: Never ride elevators alone.

     

     

     

     

     

     

    The hand pushed one side of the elevator doors all the way open.  Tina’s heart was pounding so hard she thought it would burst from her chest.

     

    “Hey, Tina.  Another late day, eh?” Ray asked still breathing heavy himself from rushing to catch the elevator.

     

    Tina’s heart settled back down when she saw it was the Judge’s law clerk.  If she ever had the use of the word unctuous, it fit this guy.  He was just a little too Snidely Whiplash for her.  But at least it was someone she knew.

     

    “Hey, Ray.  Didn’t see you in the courtroom today.”

     

    “Nah, I was doing some running around and just stopped back in there thinking old Charlie would still be on the bench.  You okay?  You look a little pale.”

     

    “Oh, it’s City Hall after hours and I didn’t know who it was getting on.”

     

    “Sorry about that.  I just turned the corner and stuck my hand in the door.  I probably should just take the stairs and get a little exercise in, but maybe another day.  The girls like to hold on to the love handles anyway, right?”

     

    Jesus, Tina thought, I know this guy and he gives me the willies.  How fucking long does it take an elevator to go four floors?

     

    “Sorry, Ray.  I don’t know about other women’s proclivities.”

     

    “Yeah, but someone like you knows what a woman likes, right…”

    Ray’s cell phone rang and interrupted his backdoor digging for info. He looked at the caller id.

     

    “Christ, can’t this guy wipe his butt without calling me,” Ray mumbled under his breath but Tina heard him.

     

    “Yeah, Katy I’m on my way.  Just going down for a pack of smokes. Okay, bye.”  Ray ended the call.  The elevator doors opened at the street level.

     

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    3. i hope you are ok and the crash didn’t give you hard time. THis chapter is so good but i really hope that all that bad people against Tina will be discovery soon.

    6. I am glad that you are back. I have missed this story. I agree with Lamentamini on the love scenes being hot and yet subtle. These two women deserve to be together and not hassled or hurt in any way.

    7. arceextl, this is a really enjoyable read. I can see the 25yrs of court reporting sneeking in there. it caused me to read your bio, which mentioned something about no awards yet…ain’t gonna be waiting too long I don’t think. Look forward to the next chapter.

    8. So glad to see your post! I love your story and the way you write. Beautifully done once again and as always, I can’t wait for the next chapter. Thanks Rene!

    12. Ray and Rick should both be run over by a bus. Ick. And I can’t get over how well you craft love scenes that are so damn hot without getting graphic. Wow…

    13. Hey there! I’m a huge fan of yours, Arceextl. Love this story so much! You’re so talented and with every chapter you take us on this amazing ride, a subtle combination of love, lust, and mystery… It’s great! Sorry to hear about the drive crash, and hope you’re doing okay. Doesn’t matter how long the wait is, I’ll always remain an unconditonnal addict! Thanks…

    16. loving this story… and please don’t let them get hurt… that slime ball rich… i hope he gets some bad coke or a 2 BY 4 up the side of his head… hmmm… please continue

    18. Hey Rene, I never knew that fan fiction could be this good. Could move and emote such real feelings. I never knew that it could be so good. But now I do. I know that your words weave a magical and mysterious melodrama that entices and intrigues me so. I know that there is danger ahead for Bette and Tina. I know that they love and shower affection on each other as only true sould mates can. I know that this story is majestic and magnificent and entertains me at every turn. I know that you were sorely missed but now I jumped for joy as you had returned with this brilliant post. Tank you so much. Your Loyal Fan.

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