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Finally On the Ground – (Chapter: Achilleus)
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Slamming on the back throttle Ashley eased the Dolphin down into the landing pod and prayed like the dickens that the struts would hold. The craft bounced once, but settled, and she shut off the engines with an expressive sigh. Swinging her chair around, she leaned down and tightened the laces on her boots, making sure they were completely done up. Then she grabbed her jacket off the hook next to the overalls and the logs from the slot where they lived, and made her way to the back of the ship. She did stop momentarily on the way to make sure she wasn’t TOO grubby, a small part of the vanity she just couldn’t shake. Then she shuffled out of the side door of the craft, and clanged it closed behind her. As she did so one of the metal outpieces next to the door fell off and hit the ground next to her with a thud, a small cloud of dust swirled up between Ashley and docking official standing before her. He coughed.
The cloud cleared and Ashley raised an eyebrow at him.
‘Greeeaaat. Customs officials. Her favorite people in the world, after Alliance guards and Mormons that is…. Play nice Ash, gotta play nice for the man if you want to get your craft fixed and get off this burb.” Ashley’s thoughts were not evident on her face as she smiled brightly at the man and handed him her logs.
“Thank you” he clipped, flipping them open and perusing them quickly. He wrinkled his nose slightly, but handed them back. “What is your purpose here in Orlandio?”
‘To pick up hookers and get drunk you moron.’
“My craft needs some new parts and I need to restock. You were the closest planet.”
The official raised an eyebrow. “Terratrek 2 isn’t far from here, it’s a military supply dock. Are you sure you aren’t better served there?”
“No. I like the trees here better.” Ashley crossed her arms and glared him down.
“Do you have any intention to commit a crime or smuggling activities in mind?”
‘Yes, there are fifty pounds of heroin up my ASS right now, want some?’
“Why in Kwanza would I do that?”
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Awesome. A great update and I can’t wait until they actually meet. They seem to be polar opposites and that has got to make for some interesting chemistry. :) Love ya. Post more soon please!
I’m the first to comment. That is freaking awesome . . . and an honor. Love you Clom. Everyone else should comment to!!! Leave her some love so that she keeps up with the posting. *shakes head* You’d think it was obvious.
Oh, and one more thing, the whore planet of babylon or what not? Wow. That is funny. And I don’t watch firefly so I’ll prolly have no idea what you are talking about. :)
Ah this is exciting. Clom has a new story! :) Yeah, I commented on the last post, but that fact that you’re going to keep it going is pretty awesome. :]
oh baby. i’m so excited for when they meet! i think you’ve got yourself a winner with this one!…but seriously clom…just because this story rocks doesn’t mean that you can forget about 28 days – you’ve been leaving us hanging for quite some time. :) but i really do love this story so keep posting this one too!
ok, cursing, that cracked me up to no extent PRICELESS, and locking it? im surprised the lock actually works. haha “Otherwise, she’d just drift through space until her air ran out. And she’d die. Gee, there was a pleasant thought” hahah sounds like something i would think and for some unknown reason those two sentences has brought me a fit of giggles. “r. This was turning out to be so much better than she’d hoped. For a moment, Ashley wondered if sarcasm could be fatal.” again another fit of giggles, and i must say one of my fav words is fatal, and its also a nick name. ok im done quoting lines from your story, but i must add you won me over from the first story, i absolutley love this. keep them coming, feed my fast growing addiction :]
YAY loving it… and like everyone else I can’t wait for the two to meet! sweet church girl spence and the wild space roamer… sounds like fun… also I noticed you also have the girls skipping rocks in 28 days and now here…LOL
ahhhh whores a plenty won’t keep ashley away from spencer! i just hope she can get some booze. so happy you’ve started another fic.
You know I started reading this and I was momentarily confused…it seemed like you kinda jumped into it. So I back tracked a bit and realized that this was in fact the second chapter! How did I miss that?!! Great job…it is going to be interesting when they meet. Can’t wait! Post more! :-)
Awesome. A great update and I can’t wait until they actually meet. They seem to be polar opposites and that has got to make for some interesting chemistry. :) Love ya. Post more soon please!
I’m the first to comment. That is freaking awesome . . . and an honor. Love you Clom. Everyone else should comment to!!! Leave her some love so that she keeps up with the posting. *shakes head* You’d think it was obvious.
Oh, and one more thing, the whore planet of babylon or what not? Wow. That is funny. And I don’t watch firefly so I’ll prolly have no idea what you are talking about. :)
Ah this is exciting. Clom has a new story! :) Yeah, I commented on the last post, but that fact that you’re going to keep it going is pretty awesome. :]
oh baby. i’m so excited for when they meet! i think you’ve got yourself a winner with this one!…but seriously clom…just because this story rocks doesn’t mean that you can forget about 28 days – you’ve been leaving us hanging for quite some time. :) but i really do love this story so keep posting this one too!
ok, cursing, that cracked me up to no extent PRICELESS, and locking it? im surprised the lock actually works. haha “Otherwise, she’d just drift through space until her air ran out. And she’d die. Gee, there was a pleasant thought” hahah sounds like something i would think and for some unknown reason those two sentences has brought me a fit of giggles. “r. This was turning out to be so much better than she’d hoped. For a moment, Ashley wondered if sarcasm could be fatal.” again another fit of giggles, and i must say one of my fav words is fatal, and its also a nick name. ok im done quoting lines from your story, but i must add you won me over from the first story, i absolutley love this. keep them coming, feed my fast growing addiction :]
YAY loving it… and like everyone else I can’t wait for the two to meet! sweet church girl spence and the wild space roamer… sounds like fun… also I noticed you also have the girls skipping rocks in 28 days and now here…LOL
ahhhh whores a plenty won’t keep ashley away from spencer! i just hope she can get some booze. so happy you’ve started another fic.
You know I started reading this and I was momentarily confused…it seemed like you kinda jumped into it. So I back tracked a bit and realized that this was in fact the second chapter! How did I miss that?!! Great job…it is going to be interesting when they meet. Can’t wait! Post more! :-)
haha it was so funny at the start when ash locks the door and something falls out and leave a swirl of dust. i was totally imagining it. how awesome that you’re starting and updating a new fic at high speed after just completing a grand epic!!! but uhh there’s something i wanna ask ya… as any good stalker should ask.. have you forgotten all about 28days???
haha it was so funny at the start when ash locks the door and something falls out and leave a swirl of dust. i was totally imagining it. how awesome that you’re starting and updating a new fic at high speed after just completing a grand epic!!! but uhh there’s something i wanna ask ya… as any good stalker should ask.. have you forgotten all about 28days???