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Young Love: Chapter Sixteen
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“What’s the matter?” Helena sat next to Alice on the couch, and Bette stood with her hands in her pockets.
“I stayed the night at Dana’s because her parents and her brother were in Seattle.” She sighed. “But the next morning, her brother bust in on us. They ended up coming home a lot earlier. So we got dressed and went downstairs after Howie went to distract them for a little. Dana introduced me to her parents, and her mother was wondering why I was there. She told her that I came over this morning to talk to her.” She shook her head. “Sharon wanted to be a bitch and told her that’s what phones are for, and Dana told her that it shouldn’t be a problem for me to come over, but she thought that Dana was talking back. Sharon wanted her to call her and tell her that I was coming over, but Dana didn’t think that she should have because she’s almost eighteen years old. She didn’t think she needed to ask for permission to have a friend come over to keep her company.”
“Well what happened?” Alice looked at Bette.
“Dana got grounded for a month because Sharon didn’t like the way she was talking to her.” She raked her fingers through her hair. “I wanted to leave, but Dana had me stay for the whole argument. Her father was trying to interject, but Sharon kept cutting him off, and Howie was in the background laughing his ass off. Well after that happened, Sharon asked me to leave and I told Dana I would call her later, but Sharon,” she said bitterly. “Said that Dana won’t be receiving any phone calls.” She lay back on the couch. “I really want to strangle that woman.” Bette chuckled softly, and Helena looked at her.
“Sorry,” she muttered.
“Al—there really isn’t anything that you can do. Dana still lives under her parents’ roof, so she has to listening to her mother and obey her rules.”
“Well why doesn’t she just move out? Then she wouldn’t have to deal with her mother.”
“I really think it’s you who doesn’t want to deal with her mother,” Bette sat next to Alice. “Besides, we have this year left of school, and we’ll be off to college.”
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awww, that was sweet. almost enough to make me want to be going throug all of that…but not really…lol…lovely writing, i like seeing how its changing with each story. keep up the great work:)
I know exactly what Alice is feeling…being with someone who still lives at home is the pits, really, but Dane should’ve told her about Harrison, though…I went to prom with a girl (and we both were so lovely in our dresses), so I didn’t have a problem…lol…Shane and Carmen son muy calientes, yummy (can you tell I’ve had spanish class today…lol)…Helena and Bette are cute as hell, as usual
awesome update!!! cant wait for the next chapter!
Well, I suppose in real life, encountering bumpy roads is common. I just feel bad for D having a nazi of a mother and A dealing with closeted D. If it would take 30 more chapters to work things out, so be it. But please let them work it out. It is good to have a sister like Kit, so supportive. Wow, another sizzling hot encounter between S and C. Now why couldn’t A & D have the same privacy like S & C. It must be their karma. Akira, another great chapter. pps.
whoo Sharmen,so hot,I didn’t need a lighter for my cig it spontaniously combusted from the heat!
aww… shane and carmen… finally… it’s so sweet :)
Aki, finally was able to get to a pc and loved your chapter. Loved how Helena gave sound advice to Al ,and then Shane and Carmen was claiente/hot. And last loved how Kit talked to Helena about Bette and the moving in, we shall see if it happen or not, Ih ope it does(wink).
ACB, THank you for your kind shout out. I am loving this tale. Good to see the gals giving Alice some advice. It is times like these when you need the wise words from a mate. It was good to see Dana and ALice talking and trying to sort out how they feel. Dana just needs some time to realize that being out is not as bad as she thinks it will be. Yes, people will talk at first but all too soon it will be yesterday’s news and another scandal will take people’s interest. I think her family are the biggest hurdle she faces. As for Shane and Carmen, too fucking cute… They just rock together. I loved the intimacy that you crafted between them. There is a genuine sense of love between them. Wonderful. More please. Many thanks for answering my questions. Your Loyal Fan.