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Window of Opportunity ch. 66
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“How?” was all I asked her as she sat beside me wiping a stray tear away.
“I had gotten your parents to send me pictures of you and I got the ones of me from Kit. Alice and Shane went through all their pictures and Alice called Dana’s mom and got her photo albums. Neil, my grad student made the video for the wedding but when I saw it, I knew that I wanted to share it with you during our time here. He made another one that we can use at the wedding that is as good. I just wanted you to know that when you asked me that time to tell you something about myself that you didn’t know, it sparked something in me to want to know all those things about you I didn’t know. I wanted to see you as a baby and compare you growing up to Angie. It started out as one thing but when it came together, was more than I ever hoped for. I wanted to show it to you today for two reasons. The first reason is that I thought you would enjoy it and I thought that us watching it together would be good for us. I know we are at a wonderful place but I want to always feel that connection with you and each time I’ve watched it I have felt so much more connected to you. The second reason is a little more complicated.”
She got choked up and had trouble talking to me. I watched as she sat there sipping her wine and trying to formulate what she wanted to say.
“Babe, whatever it is, it is ok. Just tell me. I love you and there is nothing that you can say or do to change that.”
She stood and took my hand. I just thought she was going to express herself through actions and that she was going to lead me to the bedroom. When we passed our room and went to the second bedroom I was confused. She kissed me tenderly.
“Know that I love you and everything I do is because I love you.” She opened the door and the arrangements of flowers were in evidence in this room also. My album that she had created was on the bed and there was wine on the night stand. The thing that caught my eye though was the nitrogen container that I saw sitting on the other night stand. It couldn’t be. Could it? Had she somehow managed to get Marcus’ sperm from LA to NY for us to attempt an insemination? Oh my gosh. I love her!
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this chapter took my breath away. so romantic, sweet, tender…WOW…:)PWYHT (post when u have time)
“wow” is right – I feel as though I’ve just gone a few rounds :-)! Beautiful…wow…
Can I get a round or two of that? That was awesome! PPS:)
Our Bette is so romantic,can she get any sweeter? Any more wonderful.
I have followed this story from the beginning. I have laughed and cried, and when I thought that Bette couldn’t be anymore romantic, you write this chapter. You have made me believe in love and second chances. For me, Window of Opportunity, is by far the best story that I have read. Please don’t stop!!!!PPS
Wow and Awesome don’t even begin to describe what this chapter has made me feel. To have someone love you that much, that deeply, and to go to those lengths t show that love is absolutely breathtaking. Happy that Baby G is sleeping so much better and that makes you feel better as well. Thanks for sharing. Post when you can.
“Skyrockets in flight, tun-tun-tun, Afternoon delight, A-a-afternoon delight!” LOL! I think we grew up in the same decade, NAG. Who wouldn’t fall in love deeper with this super romantic Bette who would pluck stars and pull down the moon from the heavens if it would make her Tina happy? “If my last breath on earth is used to put a smile on your face then my life will have been worth it.” Awww, too sweet. But I can’t blame her, Tina’s such a great catch. Loved the return of the album and the letters. Tina’s letters evoke sincerity and her deep love for Bette. She really shouldn’t worry on how she’d write her vows because she clearly knows how to speak from her heart. Tina’s painful memory of her self-insemination was touching. “Once again, quiet Bette Porter could have woken the dead.” LOL! Tina, not to be outdone, “came so hard that I think my screams put hers to shame.” LOL! I hope they succeeded but if not there’s no doubt they had a screaming great time trying over and over again. Thank you, thank you, NAG! Hope you and little G are enjoying the summer! :>
wow… i read this at work last night… and i have a feeling a baby porter is on the way… love it…
Wow, Bette and Tina were so romantic. The first time they did an insemination at home was amazing, But this one was even better. Bette did not hold anything back for her and her family. This was so special, how can Tina not be pregnant?
I know I keep saying it every chapter, but once again this keeps getting better and better L. So all those nice things everyone else said and I think I have to see a MD as maybe you made me and the other readers pragnet too. Thank you, Md
Amazing (I just don’t know what to say anymore)…Ummm…tho…*Afternoon Delight* cracked me up…The Starland Vocal Band…I met Jon Carroll (a band member) at a party in Washington, D.C. in the 80’s! Something tells me Tina has a Baby G on the way! Thanks, nagster!
Bette is such a romantic and that insemination hopefully takes away bad memories for both. Loving this story. Hugs to Baby G from Aunty Rau. PPS.
wow….that was just wow…:)
What a great chapter – you as well as the two lovers have come so far since the beginning of this and it never seizes to amaze me have you write such solid chunks of romance and emotional drama. Awesome!PPS
GRET chapter, I hope that this will help fade away the bad memories of the previous insemination; although having Angie should also help. The end OES justify the means. Shout out to the “G” man. PPS :o).
NAG, this whole chapter was so beautiful and romantic. I am in total awe of your ability to write like this. I hope the insemination worked as it will form one of their most wonderful life memories. I can’t wait until your next installment…I LOVE this story and this author!
Incredible chapter….I feel like a voyeur in the best possible way….Your insight to Tina’s feelings surrounding Angelica’s insemination & why she did it that way was great. Her thinking that Bette’s needs shouldn’t have superseded hers is accurate, perhaps in that time that they were both ignoring each others needs it was a late attempt to rectify/acknowledge that – what they needed to be doing was talking and including each other on what they were thinking & feeling….SO glad they’re doing that now!!!
awwwwww….so sweet and romantic…hope all works out and Tina gets pregnant 1st try