Well there was the loss, here is all my shaky memory has, i’m so sorry i couldnt come up with more.

seven ~ Thankyou so much for commenting It means so much. Blushes at the fact you say you commented ‘just for me’ lol im so sorry for the loss of your comment.

Alexandra ~ the Riemann Hypothesis is to do with prime numbers. it is believed that prime numbers are random however there is a logarithmic function that can tell us how often primes occur i.e. there will be 40 primes between 10,000 and 20,000 (not actual value). This indicates that there is a pattern and that there is some way of predicting primes. Now this is one of the seven pillars of wisdom for the twenty first century meaning if you solve it you win a million dollar prize however more importantly all of our e-commerce (banking/internet transactions) are based on prime number coding meaning that if the Riemann Hypothesis is solved we’re all fucked. Now where the joke was “funny” is that it is impossible to solve unless your smarter than Einstein Galileo Newton and the dude off a beautiful mind mashed into one. And guess what… Im not. lol. happy? tomorrows lesson what is the complex number ‘e’? oh and hope you like the story and all that shite. lol

Real J lo ~ lol you know i was really really tempted to write in some kink but i managed not to. lol

windrider ~ nup Dana could never reach the pillar of susan birch. She is the one true evil ***** and thankyou so much for creating her. ; )

Janet M ~ cant remember what you wrote. soz lol

Gina ~ i have a feeling you might have commented. did you?

THAT IS ALL I CAN REMEMBER I AM SO SORRY. I KNOW THERE WERE AT LEAST 17 OF YOU!!! HEY MAKE UP FOR IT THIS TIME AND COMMENT TWICE ; )

now for those who survived.

cylentstud ~ lol. ok then i might just post again… only cause you told me too of course. ; )

bvhall ~ did you comment before? im sorry if you did. dont know why im apologising just am. lol. i dont get what you mean by “Alice is so combatage” im dumb. Lol. thanks for the comment Hope you can keep reading

Ness ~ lol you want to see me explain things look at my reply to Alexandra lol. Stunned mullet. lol. Im glad some one knows what it is and can convince everyone else Im not clinically insane. Lol. BAD NESS for not commenting last time. GOOD GOOD GOOD NESS for commenting this time. Thanks for reading.

str8trippin’ ~ Lol yes i believe so too, maybe. lol

mskhaos ~ lol well wouldn’t you play with the idea of killing Bette … ok probably not. lol hope you keep reading

Incendiary ~ calm down mate i dd see them i cant remember them though. too big lol. show your dedication that you posted again. nice work mate *Takes off hat to you and bows in your honour* (oh and not the past tense that i WAS going to Dubai) now then Lol. so you want an Electra out fit. i dont know if thats come out here yet. *shakes fist at the fact that Australia is 6 months behind the rest of the planet despite being in the future* lol Im glad you had a dream about Bette … i think .lol this might be the last before Monday. im soooooo sorry. you have no idea how much im gunna miss your comments. ; ) Have an awesome time. !!!!

Incendiary ~ lol. i was playing up where Marina was lol. She always struck me as a weak person. Lol. i piss off my lectures too. With out sounding boastful i was always a bad child to teach. In primary school (at the age of 8) I with the help of a few friends gave 2 techers breakdowns. like seriously. I feel so horrible when i remember that. Be nice to your lecturers. lol and have fun reading the story.


Alright guys. now to the stuff you want.

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Dana had decided she should do some recon work. Earlier in the evening she had set up a call to Tina that included 5 seconds of Bette pleading for her life. Yet the idea of playing it and wondering how Tina would react didnt appeal to Dana. No, Dana wanted to watch Tinas reaction in person. See just how deep this would cut. To see if pain twisted Tinas pretty face.

Dana was ready for this. She didnt have a lot of equipment, just the berretta snugly in its holster at the small of her back. She was wearing a pair of cammo pants and a black turtle neck shirt. She had considered smearing two lines of shoe polish on her cheeks but had conceded that was a little ridiculous.

Dana crouched in the damp bushes outside Tinas house. Looking into the living room with her binoculars, thanking god the curtains were open. Half an hour till show time. Danas ribs ached. She was cold she was damp and she was thinking so this kind of ***** is what I have to go through to become a Princess in general she was in a rather pissed of mood.

Suddenly Dana heard a rustling on her left .She tensed not sure if the sound was natural, caused by a cute lil critter or unnatural, caused by a cute lil killer. Dana didnt get a chance to blink before a figure exploded out of the foliage and collided with her, winding her and she was slammed into the muddy ground. Dana prepared to fight, damn it; if this was going to be dirty the Dana would fight dirty. But when she looked up it wasnt the face of Tina she saw but that of

Marina! she exclaimed in a whisper. In her shock Dana still took in Marinas dilapidated appearance. Her clothes were soaked she was shivering. She had dirt smeared on one side of her face and her hair was a mess. She looked as though she had been living rough for a few days.

Marina Dana said again not yet sure wether to be relieved or terrified What the ***** are you doing here As the wind blew some branches aside the glow from a nearby streetlight illuminated Marinas face, her bloodshot, teary eyes were not that of a happy woman. Dana relaxed a little. Whatever Marina was doing here she doubted it had anything to do with her.

Marina let out a big sniff. Jenny she said extending a long arm in the direction of the little shed with the curtains drawn. I I just wanted *hiccup* to *sniff* make sure that *sob* she was alright

Marina flung herself at Dana sobbing insanely I loved her She wailed. Dana now felt a new form of panic. How the ***** was she supposed to deal with this? She rocked Marina back and forward shushing her gently. Its ok she kept repeating. Slowly Marina stopped sobbing and shaking. Great Dana thought what now?

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Bette decided it was time to be bold. She went to the desk grabbed the bottle of what she though might be bourbon and took a huge swig. Her mind flashed to Alice in wonderland and she pondered what would happen if the drink made her a tiny wee little thing Bette shook her head not now Porter she thought. Still she was relived that the only effect was the warm glow in her belly.

Bette stormed to the door tried the handle, surprised to find it unlocked. Threw the door open and was confronted but the largest gorilla of a man she had ever seen cradling a shotgun.

Going some where? he asked Bette in a dangerous tone.

Bette saw the gun and panicked. Uh no, sorry must have been a mistake she stammered flashing the man a terrified smile. He responded in kind showing her his missing 2 front teeth. Urgh Bette actually said as she back-pedalled into the room slamming the door behind her. She could hear the mans heavy wheezing laughter carry to her.

Ok that was dumb. Bette decided that drinking or storming werent her best options. It was time for sneaky and subtle. Time for plan B she though and studied the air vent.

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Shane wandered the streets. Not the nasty hash alley ways that haunted the city. She had wandered those for a lot of her life and they rarely, if ever had given her any answers. No, instead she was in the lifeless lanes of suburbia, dead to the world at 0200. Streets with names like Pleasant street. All of the houses looked the same. All with their happy little families leading their happy little lives living the great American (ouch I really want to type Australian) dream. Telling themselves that they are happy. All an Illusion but Shane would have loved that Illusion. She wanted so much, even at this age, a mother and father to hold her. So much had been taken from her but she never harboured any bitter thoughts against her parents. Her mother had ODed shortly after her father was killed. And Shane was raised by her brother until the social worker took her away Shane stoped, the memories were painful. Looking to the past for answers didnt seem to work. She had tried that approach many times.

Shane kicked a pebble down the footpath. Its clattering echoed in the empty street. So Tina had killed her father. Shane had been too young to go to the court stuff. She had never seen Tina. Shane wondered if she should seek revenge for a family she couldnt really remember. It was times like these that she needed Alice. But no Alice had fucked off too.

Shane heard the quite purr of an engine come up behind her. She turned to see the neighbourhood patrol car pulling up. No wonder the car was quiet she mused, wouldnt want to wake the children.

Are you lost Mam? The rent-a-cop asked in a gruff voice. Shane almost laughed. She would have loved to respond with Yes I almost died in a car crash, and I just found out one of my best friends murdered my father and robbed me of my child hood, can you give me some directions? But she thought better of it
No Im all right thanks she responded. The guy looked her up and down clearly thinking she was up to no good

Well where are you headed? he asked

Shane thought for a second and decided to give the most ironic reply that she had

Home she said and turned and walked away.

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Well i cant do a percentage this time but i can next time please make my day. *Looks at you all with my best puppy dog eyes.* lol Take care all. ; )