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Wanted (Chapter 11)
Bette pulled into the open garage, smiling to herself as she saw Helena leaning up against one of the pillars on the front deck of the house. As soon as she started making her way up the walk, she heard the door closing behind her, concealing once again any evidence that she was here should someone drop by. There was always the chance that Alice could make an impromptu appearance; she had a habit of doing that with little to no warning.
"You didn’t bring anything – aren’t you staying?" Helena asked.
"I left my bag in the car," Bette replied as she walked past, running her hand over Helena’s bare midriff. "I have something else on my mind right now."
Bette walked through the open door and backed up against the wall, her invitation implicit in her positioning and mannerisms. She patiently waited for Helena to follow her inside.
Helena closed the door and considered Bette as she stood just a few feet away.
"I missed you," Helena said quietly. She took another step closer. "I was afraid you might not come back."
They were close enough to touch, but each had a different agenda to pursue. Helena sought the assurance that Bette’s presence had an emotional component, while Bette was battling demons by willing her body to succumb to physical desire. Though seemingly travelling toward the same destination, their respective paths were decidedly different.
Each woman’s position relative to the other held the promise of accidental contact as Helena spoke. Bette could detect a hint of mint as her words issued forth. She resisted capturing her lips in a kiss, but couldn’t resist teasing her. They moved in an intimate dance, alternately pursuing and retreating as the potential connection threatened to accelerate their union forward.
"I suggested earlier that I could be persuaded to provide a demonstration of my vertical technique," Helena whispered. "The haste that brought you here implies my offer may have piqued your interest."
The temptation to be tactile in their interaction was building to irresistible levels. Their visceral responses were becoming impossible to ignore.
Bette’s eyelids were weighted with the lust that she felt for Helena. That lust had been fuelled by her imagination on the drive over. Her intellect struggled to fathom the contradiction of her current state, which existed in stark contrast to her vociferous hatred of only a few months earlier.
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This story is quite enjoyable please don’t stop writing it. The Helebette tain has a lot of passengers.
This is a wonderful story, and I hope you keep it up. It’s quite interesting and a refreshing change of pace. (And apologies for the diminishing comments.)
Oh, jks…I say a small prayer that you’ll have posted a new chapter of “Wanted” before I log on here. Your story is appreciated by many–many who don’t want to admit they enjoy this pairing of characters and feel too conspicuous to post!
Are u kidding..no diminshing interest here!! If anything, gimme more please.
i like the pairing of bette and helenabut i think this is a faze tina is going through because bette isnt working right now .when t finds out she is going to want bette back.i always hada problem with tina when her and betteseperate she can have someone but bettecant,tina get a grip i dont think bette’s going to wait and twingle her fingers this time to see if u come back.
If it weren’t for this story, I would not frequent this site with the intensity that I do. This is the ONLY story I read on here. How’s that for “diminishing interest”? And I don’t care how foul everyone seems to think this pairing is (outside the realm of your story), I find it completely believable! I always wanted these two together, and when it didn’t happen, I thought there might be others like myself, and those people might have written fanfiction, but nothing! Until this story came along, and I can once again revil in my favourite fantasy pairing. But if Ilene read this, just how long do you think it would be before fantasy became reality?
No way is my interest going away. I love this story and look for your posts multiple times a day! I think I have said it before you have me wishing for this on the show. Thank you and post soon.
comment comment comment commentnah :pstill very well written!keep it up!
You know I’m not totally crazy about the paring, but I keep coming back for more…..and it’s all because off you and the way you write this story. Somehow it has capitivated me although I’m a BIG B&T fan. But I’m definitely also a justkeepswimming fan, so I keep reading everything you post. Thank you
Hi Fins, I continue to love this story/pairing. I’m looking forward to Tina and the gang finding out. I’m sure that Shane will not say anything, but I think that Bette owes it to Tina to be honest and to tell her about her relationship with Helena. As always, thanks for your effort and time with this story!
I dont give a rats ass what anyone thinks these 2 are good together in this story anyway…lol…That was very sexy,even romantic,hell..it was hot and not even an NC17 lol so id love you to continue it as long as you enjoy writting it ..Thanks
I personally love this story, but haven’t left a comment yet. Perhaps, I shall do so more often, if it will ensure the continuation of such a lovely tale. Tina is definitely a fool, but I do hope Bette does not end up toying with Helena’s emotion, which she admitted would be okay should that be the case. At this point, however, it is evident that Ms. Peabody has become quite emotionally; let’s hope there is reciprocity in the end.
emotionally attached, that is.
Please don’t take the lack of comments as an indication that the readers are not loving this story. I love HelBette and I’m enjoying every chapter that you post. I’ll try my best to leave comments if you try your best to keep ths wonderful story going. Thanks!
you are generating a lot of heat and yet Bette still seems reticent. Obviously she’s confused and angry about Tina and although being wanted by Helena feels wonderful I’m wondering if she’s not a bit confused about her feelings there as well. Anyway that’s how I’m reading it. can’t wait to see how you proceed.
Ms Swim – Always a pleasure to see that you have posted! Love your Bette/Helena pairing – they both really seem to enjoy each other. Looking forward to where ever you lead us with this story! Please keep writing – your name is certainly one I look for each and every time I log into this wonderful site.
thois pairing is really working isn’t it! NC17 on the beach next? But aren’t you tempted to ramp up the Drama & have Bettes little secret outed to Tina? looking forward to the drama swimmy! (cos its not really the LWord with out over the top drama!)
Thanks for your continuous updates. I keep wondering where it will go. Shane knows, when will the others learn especially Tina?
After last nights episode I’m thinking your story line will really happen! Wouldn’t that be exciting! I think they are a perfect match and really like they way you have them coming together. ‘Cause when it starts out sexual the sweet tenderness of dating comes later (holding hands on the beach) and I think it’s lovely!
Good chapter. I agree with techgal and can’t wait to see Tinas reaction!
Do NOT make me come and find you N. What are you yapping about now? Stopping? Is Tina supplying you with whatever she’s taking cause this sounds a bit twisted to me. Don’t sell yourself short. And whatever you do, don’t stop. “Don’t you dare stop.”
excellent post, old chap! it looks as if commenting has picked up a bit wouldn’t you say? hee hee. on to the next chapter!
I don’t know why the comments have diminished. Your writing is still wonderful as is your story. They are an intriguing and erotic couple as you write it. This may be an ungodly pairing but you make it believable. Please keep writing.
nice story.. i love this pairing.. they are really better together than fighting each other.. please post again..
The cheap drugs that Tina is on are clouding her senses when it comes to Bette. Laurel and Jennifer deserve Emmy’s for making the pain in Ilene’s shit script so palpable with their excellent acting…especially since we know they aren’t fans of the direction of TiBette. Because I know how difficult it will be for me to watch tonight’s episode I’m begging you JKS to make us feel better by having Tina find out about Bette and Helena. I’m going to need copious amounts of beer to get through tonight’s episode. Please, please, please continue!
Don’t mistake fewer comments for diminishing interest. Just look at the numer of views each of your chapters get, and you will see that this story is one of the most popular. I for one hope that you will continue this story…taking your time in order to reach it’s conclusion. This is THE story I look for when I log on. Thanks!!
Tina Kennard is a fool. A good woman like Bette is hard to find. Thanks for writing!
OH JKS…never doubt what your words or story do to us readers…you leave us breathless and unable to comment…struggling to type legible sentences to show our gratitude….I bow down and say thankyou…pls continue and at your own slow steady pace…well except for the posting times…more frequent would always be appreciated….pls love it, want more!!!
I love these two women together !! You have a wonderful talent for writing some very erotic stories !! PLEASE keep indulging us with your special talent!!
Steaming hot story! I’m a B&T fan all the way, but I must admit I love this pairing!
Tina has push the best thing in her life away. she will be sorry, I like Helena and Bette together. I just dont want eather one to get hurt. Just hope Tina doesn’t crook her little pinkie at Bette and she goes back to her. This is one of the best stories on the site, Please keep writing. thanks
here’s a sick thought after S2…oh please don’t let bette break poor Helena’s heart….I really like your one…
JKS i cant wait till everyone else finds out bout these two they r pretty hot together!!!
i got it…the logical conclusion for this story is that it was all a dream and when bette wakes up, she has tina in her arms and angelica in her crib, and everything is wonderful in Porter-Kennard residence :) don’t worry about fewer comments, people just speechless after your chapters and by the time they can formulate a comment, there’s a new chapter already posted and they are speechless again ;)
I am so loving this story. Bette and Helena together is great. When is Tina going to find out? Please make it soon
I don’t comment everytime, because I hate to sound redundant…..but, not that I don’t enjoy the other stories from all of the other great authors, but this is the one that I look for first. I am definitely a BT fan, but I am loving this pairing. Please continue with a lot more chapters!!
you have to keep going — as much as i adore Tina i am looking forward to her finding out just what B has been up to. this is brilliant JKS — which is exactly what we all expect of you — thank you v much
Great chapter and i still love this storry.I hope you post soon.
well shame on me for not leaving you a comment with each chapter…I should know better. This is one of the few stories I look for everyday. Please keep going and don’t rush to a conclusion. I love your pairing of these two.
Luvin’ this pairing. Will they admit that deeper feelings are involved. BTW, Tina who? Great chap.
I am thoroughly enjoying this story, much to my surprise. I would like to see Bette happy with someone.
I love the story and I love the pairing. I’m even thinking Bette and Helena should be together in Season 4 if and only if (of course) TiBette separate for good. I guess the change of mind is mainly because your writing. Thanks. Please don’t lose faith, just continue.
No, no, no, keep up with this story jks, it can only be told as gloriously by you! This is most definatately THE story that I look for when logging in! Make no mistake about it – there are many of us who LOVE this story and where you are taking it – as I’ve already said, you draw the reader in so very well! Keep up the fantastic writing and am anxiously awaiting where you are going to take us next…
Please don’t perceive what you believe to be “lack of comments” as a sign to end this story quickly! I want more and more. I would like to see how the relationship is “tested” once ppl find out. Will they weather it together??
I love this story and your writing…I visualize the characters with each word. Your writing a relationship between B&H plausible–something TLW writers should bring to the screen. Thin line between love and hate, so the passion of these two in a relationship would be dynamic. Keep writing…your stories make my day.
I was so happy to see a post from you this morning! The dialogue and descriptions just leave me wanting to read more. I’d love to see this pairing played out on screen, with you as writer, of course.
Are you getting better ? I thought this was wonderfully written, very current ……charming really. I think my favourite so far. Thank you, it was simply; lovely.
Do not stop!! It continues to be brilliant and lyrical and sweet and sad but not so sad, especially since it seems as if something is truly growing between the two, something meaningful, something, dare I say, meant to last?? You write so beautifully, so effortlessly – please, don’t stop. I’ll try and remember to write something more constructive than “yum” – I promise
Excellent chapter as always! It’s nice that at least one couple is actually happy – unlike on the show. Yes, this coupling is indeed interesting. Can’t wait to see how it plays out. Keep up the good work.
JKS ~ Oh please don’t let the lack of comments affect your intended direction of this story. It is still the best story on here. Please, please continue and as always, thank you for sharing with us.
Yet another excellent chapter! I truly look forward to reading more. As a great lover of the beach, I can only hope that you would post another ASAP! Please don’t let the lack of comments deter you from fully exploring this unlikely, yet well liked pairing. Please MUCH more…
Yours is one of my favourite stories. I’m also thinking that perhaps S4 can explore this pairing if IC doesn’t allow TiBette to be together. Please do not rush to an ending. Thanks for the update.
I think the few number of comments has to do with the fact that the shock factor has worn off. That is not to say that we’re not reading, we’re just nor reeling from the whole idea of Bette and Helena. I love this story, and just because I don’t comment every time doesn’t mean I’m not looking forward to the next chapter.
JKS, I can’t speak for others, nor make them speak on their own behalf. All I can do is assure you MY interest has in no way diminished. While I agree that any particular story has it’s own arc and should come to it’s conclusion, that should in no way relate to the number or content of comments and I can no way agree that this one has come to it’s conclusion. This story of this relationship still needs at least a couple of things: the revelation to the gang, and whether or not Bette is going to return Helena’s emotional investment in the relationship.
You’re a great writer, so I’ll read pretty much anything that you post. I’m glad Bette is finally getting some affection and attention, but I still prefer her with Tina. Well, at least 1st or 2nd season Tina, who wasn’t such a freaking bitch all the time, haha. Great chapter…can’t wait to see what happens next!
Hey I am duely busted I have failed miserably lately in commenting but please don’t let that make you hesitate in writing this. I love how you have brought them around. It does seem remarkable that I too would never have guessed that I would go from hating them together to actually loving the couple they make. It’s all due to your masterful hand. Thanks
jks…..this is such a great story. It’s original and could possibly have been in IC’s mind for future developement. Who know’s, but I do know that I enjoy this story. Ya know, sometimes it’s all about the quality of a comment, and not the quanity. Pls keep writing at your own inspirational pace and we will enjoy the results. Sorry to be so verbose, just had to let ya know.
Very sensual but romantic at the same time. Who would of thunk? I think there is much interest in your story as I’ve seen mention made of it in several different places. Please keep writing.
hey jks …i am still loving this story. you have not only made b and h believable but they are quite enjoyable….please continue when you can
I guess a simple “thank you” will do. Isn’t that what you said? A simple “thank you?” I run out of words to confirm to you your brilliance. (But I promise I’ll tell you. I always tell you.)
JKS,Still here and still commenting as often as I can. Listen to Sehurst as she is right on the money there. As for the story, I think that everyone else needs to discover Bette and Helena’s liason. Perhaps as a sign of their commitment to each other. This union has the potential to run and run. It is perfect. That is down to you, JKS, and your talent and effort. Please continue for a little longer and show the rest how a story should and can be written. Ever grateful and appreciative, Your Loyal Fan.
I wish I had a picture of them watching the sunset. I bet it would be beautiful.. just like this story. Looking forward to the next chapter.