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Too Late, Ch. 5
She walked unsteadily for two feet before suddenly, everything went black and she collapsed onto the ground in a heap.
“Her game is really off today,” Alice noted, reaching across Shane and sticking her hand into a bag of potato chips in Carmen’s lap. Pulling out her hand and seeing nothing but crumbs, she uttered an indignant, “Hey!”
Carmen grinned at her impishly and balled up the empty bag.
“Don’t worry, we have more,” Tina said, getting up to hurry to the kitchen.
“Hurry up. You don’t want to miss anything,” Bette said, her eyes on the screen.
“I will, I will,” Tina called out reassuringly from the kitchen.
“Something doesn’t look right,” Shane said slowly, leaning forward as Dana lurched jerkily toward the ball.
A collective gasp filled the room as Dana fell and didn’t get up.
“What happened?” Tina screeched, hurrying back into the room, dropping the unopened bag of chips when she saw Dana on the television.
“She fell,” Jenny answered unnecessarily, grabbing Mark’s hand and squeezing tightly, causing him to wince.
Bette scrambled for the remote, turning the volume up. They watched in hushed silence as Dana managed to stand and walk away.
“She’s walking. She must be okay,” Kit whispered, digging her fingernails into the arm of the chair.
The group gasped again as Dana suddenly collapsed to the ground and didn’t get up. They watched as the medics loaded her onto the stretcher and then loaded her onto the ambulance that had driven onto the courts. The ambulance then left the screen, its lights flashing and sirens blaring.
“Oh my God,” Carmen muttered, hand over her mouth.
“We have to go so her. Right now. We have to go to Vegas,” Alice said suddenly, a lost expression on her face. Helena laid a reassuring hand on her arm, which Alice shook off. “I’m serious. Something’s wrong. She needs us, you guys.”
“I can get us plane tickets,” Helena said suddenly, looking up. “I can just make a few calls and we can be on a plane as soon as possible.
“Helena, we can’t accept that,” Tina began to say.
“No, no, don’t worry about it. “I’ll just call in some favors. I’ve got it all taken care of,” Helena insisted.
“Fine, fine, whatever. Come on, we can’t just sit here! Let’s go!” Alice practically shouted, jumping up and heading for the door.
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(45 votes, average: 3.53 out of 5)
they need eachother
Wow omg this is getting good, hope you post soon!!!
oh…you best post soon damnit!! lol..j/k!! poor dana..no one is there for her when she needs someone, especially alice to be there…..this time alice has to find out
on the edge of my seat – please post soon!
I can feel my heart pounding as I read this, you better well post soon lol. Alice needs to get there and be with her pronto.
The white knight on the horse should get the princess…not the cancer patient…
ugh. make something nice happen for dana! pretty please!! i can’t take it anymore!! : )
Man, one day and I missed reading this story! I’m out of breath reading this, Alice has to find out soon!!! Post soon, can’t wait!
is Alice really move on??? i hope not..is time for Dana share what is happen to her with everyone..they are a family..post soon thanks
I can’t wait to see where you take this as it is a great story but also a sad one please post soon