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Timid Devotion (Part 30) – FINAL
"We’re here baby," Bette smiled, taking a deep breath in and out.
Tina smiled and took off her seatbelt, a little startled by Bette’s next loud words.
"Wait!" she smirked, "I’ll get your door."
Tina chuckled and sat patiently as Bette raced around, gracefully opening the door for her lover. "Good evening Madamoiselle."
Tina shook her head with a smile as she climbed out. "Baby, you don’t have to open my door for me."
"I know I don’t have to," Bette smiled, "But I want to, T. I like being helpful."
"Apparently," Tina whispered, pulling Bette gently forward to pin her own body against the car.
"That … was bad," Bette whispered back, referring to their fooling around just minutes ago.
"But it was sooo good," Tina giggled, feeling Bette’s lips on her cheek.
"And I am determined to make it inside the restaurant, T," Bette chuckled, holding hands with the young blonde, waiting until Tina looked her in the eye. "I love you baby."
"Aww, I love you too baby," Tina smiled as they walked together into Buona Sera.
After being seated, they took out the menus and began to browse through it, accompanied shortly by a very handsome gentleman.
"Hello ladies," he smiled, nodding at both women, "I’m Chivant and welcome to Buona Sera. Is there anything I can get for you while you peruse the menu?"
He seemed to be lingering on Tina and Bette wanted to laugh, but she didn’t. "Umm … I guess a glass of cabernet sauvignon please."
Tina blushed under Bette’s deep stare. "Uh … I guess a chardonnay for me please?"
"Sure thing," Chivant grinned, taking his leave to the kitchen.
"Well, I guess I can’t blame his taste," Bette chuckled to herself.
"What taste?" Tina asked with a smile.
"He’s been staring at you," Bette laughed, sitting back in her chair.
"He was not," Tina smiled, trying to hold her smile back. "I really don’t get stared at very much Bette."
"That’s because you just never see it," Bette smirked, feeling Tina’s foot on her leg.
"I feel it," Tina smiled mischievously, having slipped her foot out of her heel and onto Bette’s strong legs, curiously making their way up.
"What are you doing?" Bette asked weakly, trying to steady her breathing.
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(53 votes, average: 3.55 out of 5)
WOW! I think I’ll be habing Italian tonight! I’m sorry to see it end but I am excited for your next one. Thank you for taking the time to write for us. BTW perfect posting I was actually at home for once. LOL.
Thanks so much for this story. I love your writing. Good luck with your finals. Please post a new story soon!
I loved this end. It was a really sexy and funny story that I know I am going to miss.
Awww. That a very cute, sweet, and HOT ending to this story. I hope you come back with a new story soon. Good luck with finals!
I didn’t know you could order oysters for dessert. Bette should’ve asked for a discount since she had to dive for it herself. I think you should change your username to NC-17issexi or biisNC-17. What do you think? Or biNC-17sexi, this is the one. Thanks for the post and good luck on your finals. On to the next one.
WOW what way to end it! sorry to see it but will be waiting for a new one :)
That was brilliant, thanks so much for posting this wonderful story! =) Looking forward to your next post, hopefully an epilogue? =)
Good Gracious Alive, Bette eats dinner and then has Tina desert. Then Tina eats dinner waits to move to a new destination and has her Bette desert. Thanks for the wonderful story. I can’t wait for a new one to come about.
a daringly delightful dessert there Bete. Life and loving was simple in the 1st 6 months, huh? U always manage to make me laugh and I love that in your stories. Thx for the chapter and for the shout-out. I appreciate the effort when u r so busy.
Loved it. The Maitre’ D was completely shocked to know what had happened. Now I will go back to the beginning and read all the way thru because I have forgotten how they started. Please don’t remove the story from the site. Either of them. Thanks for taking the time to post especially since you are in school and your time is so short. Really appreciate the posts and love the story. Thanks for posting.
Thank you for this story and this update and the shout-out :) What a perfect ending. Good luck with your finals and hope to see another one of your stories soon. Take care.
OMG,,Timid Duo my ass they have lost that title…more like daring….and you manage to fufill one of my fantasies in this chapter..but I guess now is the time to say good by to this story…thanks
Oh Em gee!!!! How I love this story!!!! What a great ending and what a journey to have taken. Your writing is amazing and I any wait to see what else you have in store for us in the future. Until then this story will fill in the gaps! Xoxox
Resultsonly that was so funny. Indeed daring! Thanks bi that a great ride, and a very steamy too..
Too bad that this story ended. Brought color into the everyday life. Come back soon with your another story. :o)
I think this version of B&T have trasformed from timid devotion to the new insatiable duo! :)
Amazing story!!! Thank you so much!!!
Thanks so much for the stories Looking forward to your new Tibette stories. :) Sure to entertain us.