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Timid Devotion (Part 26)
"I already have sand everywhere," Alice whined, setting their beach blanket down on the sand.
"It’s the beach, Al," Dana smiled, getting onto the material as Alice kicked off her shoes to join her.
"This thing is fucking huge," Alice said, smoothing the blanket down.
"Yeah, haven’t you had this like forever?"
"She has," Bette chuckled, walking up to the women with Tina at her side.
"Nice blanket," Tina smiled, knowing there must be memories of other fun times with the old oversized beach blanket.
"Are we all squishing on this?" Dana asked, trying to mentally divide it into four.
"I wouldn’t have it any other way," Bette laughed, putting her bag down beside it and laying down beside Alice.
"Oh dear," Tina teased, putting her bag at the side and laying down next to Bette.
"There’s plenty of room you big babies," Alice smiled, turning to Dana. "You comfy babe?"
"It’s alright," Dana nodded with a goofy smile, pushing her sunglasses up on her nose.
"I can see that," Alice said loudly, turning only after she had spoken.
Bette took her lips from Tina’s and looked over to Alice. "What?"
Alice gave her a look.
"It’s just a kiss!" she laughed, looking back over to Tina who shrugged and turned over, and then Bette looked back to her friend again. "Alice!"
Alice smiled and laid back, soaking in the sun.
Bette shook her head at her crazy friend and looked back to her beautiful girlfriend. "T? … Do you wanna go swim?"
"Not right now," Tina said, still trying to find the best spot to lay in.
Bette leaned in and whispered to her, "I don’t mean swimming … but it’s more private."
Tina sat up and looked around at the others at the beach, "Hardly, Bette."
"Come on you wuss," Bette chuckled, "It’ll be fun."
"Oh so now I’m a wuss now?" Tina giggled quietly. "That’s no way to get into my pants."
"I don’t have to get into your pants …" Bette whispered with a grin, bringing her two fingers from Tina’s stomach down to her bikini bottoms.
"Get a room!" Dana laughed, along with Alice who threw a towel at them.
"We weren’t doing anything!" Bette huffed, turning to her friends.
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(34 votes, average: 3.59 out of 5)
Welcome back! We missed you!! This story is so great! PPS
Wow! Dreams do come true. Slap on Bette’s wrist for doing that to Tina, not too hard though don’t want ruin things for them. Thanks for the post. Now I will move on to the next post.
Yay! You are back. Love your stories so please don’t go MIA again Thanks and PPVS :)
wow I was just thinking about your stories on Monday and wondering about an update…great to have them back
Soooooooooooooo glad you had time to pop in and drop a hot one on us. I will try to get back and read the other story but wanted to pop in and say HI, HI, HI, glad your back. Thank you, Md aka Oma
Woooooo Hooooo…Bi is baaaack!! Where ya been? I too was wondering where were the updates to this and your other story. PPS You’ve been missed. And for the record …bad Bette baaaaad Bette!
Happy to see you back. I missed this story. Thanks for posting
I’m back as promised – – Bette is CRUEL. I don’t know who is more frustrated – Tina or your readers! LOL. Post when you can!
OMG… hot damn get rid of those kids NOW! :)PPS
WELCOME BACK :)
Poor Tina, Bette better make it up to Tina when they get home or she’ll be in big trouble lol. Please post more, thanks!
Welcome back. Poor Tina getting all hot, well really cold because of the water, and bothered only to have to stop because of a crowd. So cute.
FIIRRRRRSSSSSSSST! Where have you been hiding, bi? We’ve missed your stories! Okay…will read and comment on BOTH later…TY for posting!
Tina should beat the SHIT out of Bette for starting something she couldn’t finish. Shit, I’d beat her myself.Welcome back.
Poor Tina! :o(
Happy dance!!! I was starting to miss these stories terribly! So so so glad to see you back! B&T so hot and that’s the best way to stay warm in the ocean ;) welcome back you’ve been missed
I’ve been missing these stories!!! I agree with brwnsuga, Bette shouldn’t have done that. They’re at a freakin’ public beach and really, water up to your stomach isn’t THAT private. Had she gone a little deeper in, maybe… Anyway, I’m glad you posted! PPS!
Talking about PDAs. I’ve missed this story too. More please and sooner the better :) thanks
Thank you for posting. I have so missed this story! Great update – love it! Poor Tina hey Bette how can you do this to her? Thank you again :)
what brwnsuga said, twice!!!
We all missed you Bi!!! Loved this quick little post and I can’t wait for more. PPS!!
Love it! Thank you. Welcome back.