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Timid Devotion (Part 20)
Tina smiled to herself as she walked up to Bette’s house. She was confident in her little black dress with a revealing neckline – and hemline – as she walked up the stairs with her ingredients. She found the key under the door and held her breath as she opened the door. After it worked, her worries about something going terribly awry had subsided, and she stepped in, closing and locking the door behind her.
She looked around the house and smiled again, thinking maybe one day she could also call it home. Everything was so extraordinarily Bette.
After taking a moment to enjoy herself, she got to work unpacking the food, and put her apron on over the dress. With a contented smile, she began to prepare her special dinner.
Bette let out a long sigh as she climbed the seemingly steep stairs to her doorway. It had been a long work day. Although she was tired, she was excited after remembering that Tina would be inside, surprising her with a wonderful meal. She shook her head with a smile when she recalled Tina’s excitement for making dinner. ‘She’s crazy, but I love her,’ she smiled to herself as she got her key out and unlocked the door.
Upon entering her house, she closed her eyes momentarily. The aroma of a home-cooked meal filled her senses and she was instantly feeling much better. When she opened her eyes to Tina in that apron, she felt even better.
"Oh," Tina smiled, just setting the table. "Sorry, I thought you’d be longer."
Bette chuckled, "Yeah I got off a little early … Look at you!"
Tina let out a breath of laughter as Bette walked over to her. "I know, I know. I wanted to take it off before you got here."
Bette chuckled again, "No, keep it on. It’s so fucking cute."
Tina looked her in the eye with feigned annoyance as she untied the strings and threw it onto the counter.
Bette’s eyes travelled down Tina’s body and her mouth dropped opened at the way the dress hugged her curves.
Tina smiled at her reaction, turning to reach for the apron. "… But I guess if you really want me to …"
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(75 votes, average: 3.39 out of 5)
Where the hell is my dinner invitation?
all I can say is WOW! I am really speechless and I can’t wait for the next one! Discovery is sooo delightful!!
OMFG!!!! Tina Kennard is one lucky girl and what a first time it was!!! i’m loving the story biissexi – bettes turn now…i’m thinkin’ you’ve unleashed the beast in our sweet Tina!! pps
I m with Jackiee…except fuck dinner i’ll take dessert please… now that was a hot first experience…we should all have been so lucky..
Tina did a fantastic job in surprising Bette. Bette did an awesome job in thanking Tina. I need a cold shower now. AWESOME post. Please post soon. Thank you for not torturing me any longer.
that a dinner pplllllllllll, tina is the main dose. hooooo i envy bette and envy tina so much….gosh i need a shoer…the tem’ is rising
Oh My God, I need to clam down and then write you a proper comment, That was incredible my dear Cami. You are a great firsts’ writer. I love your work and passion. Love
=O Now you’ve made me blush. I’m reading this in the college library…
*THUD* i am at a loss for words… beatifully written! hot and sexy but tender at the same time. looking forward to the next one!
Very explicit and well worth the wait…part deux soon…
Fantastic!
AMAZING!!!! OMFG!!! WOW!!! Thank you
OMFG*thud* :)PPS
*THUD!!!* OMFG Bi….I have no words to describe the sweetness & HOTness of this chapter…Jesus I’m Speechless!!! PPVS xxx
Ummmm, Ummmmmmm, Ummmmmmm
Holy jesus Mary and Joseph that was so incredibly hot! I felt like I was experiencing it right along with tina!! Finally release and what a release it was amazing as always! Can’t wait to see how tina reciprocates. PPS
WOW. that was great. worth the build up for sure. and i am sure we all re-lived our own first experiences, and for that thank you!! PPS.
Sorry, I was kinda tongue tied. That was just wow. I’m sure Tina is kicking herself for not letting Bette take her sooner. And now it’s Bette’s turn… I can’t wait!
That was something else….and now I can’t wait for Bette’s turn.
Fucking AMAZING! That was definitely worth the wait. Your description was excellent. WOW!
I’m totally speechless!! That’s the best! You’re the best! PPS
“Wasn’t even thinking in English”!!!!!!!!!! Excellent! Hope Bette just unleashed the animal in Tina!
I bow for you!! wow.. just.. wowwwwwwwwww.. the details are so beautiful described.. Bette and Tina are soo lovely, jeezz i’m jealous of what Tina experienced.. i don’ remember my first orgasm being this heavy haha :P you did a fantastic job with this girl.. now bring on Tina’s time.. :) thanks!! PPS!
I bow for you!! wow.. just.. wowwwwwwwwww.. the details are so beautiful described.. Bette and Tina are soo lovely, jeezz i’m jealous of what Tina experienced.. i don’ remember my first orgasm being this heavy haha :P you did a fantastic job with this girl.. now bring on Tina’s time.. :) thanks!! PPS!
HOOOOOOOOOOOOOT!!!!! My hair is on fire!!!! I’m speechless!!! That was soooo worth the anticipation!!!! Now Can’t wait for the next part…. PPVVVVVS!!!
OMG, that was incredibly hot. Tina was in for the ride of her life. Can’t wait for Bette’s turn for her ride.
WOW thats hot hot hot!
I really, really, really want Tina to do that to Bette too! LOL! Bette was sweet, gentle and amazing. Very Hot!
worth the wait:)
WOW! That was amazingly beautiful! I love that Bette took so long to get a clue. :) Very sweet. And I do think that you have unleashed a monster in Tina, but it’s wonderful. Thanks for posting!
Holy smokes! That was so hot I think I’m on fire. Quick somebody hose me down! Wonderful build up to an incredibly intimate connection.
Whoo Hoo Bette has unleashed the beast in Tina. She is going to have fun gettting to know Bette’s body. PPS
Cold Shower anyone??? That was awesome!! can’t wait for the next chap!
Holy fucking shit! That was soooo worth the wa *THUD* (Ouch! I poked my eye with an umbrella. How the hell did that happen? I was already on the floor waitin’…)
Yeah WOW!!!
WOW…I want to say so much, but find myself speechless…for a change;)The way Tina responded to her first was so perfect, it reminded me of mine:)Thanks for that amazing writing and wicked chapter…you rock my world love…xxxx
Wow! Wow! Wow! Love this story and it was so tender the way Bette was with Tina. Definitely need a cold shower. Thank you :)
These two are in for a very long night! PPS:)