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Three is not a Crowd – Part One
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“Come on Bette – why won’t you tell me “
Tina stood at the foot of the bed with her hands on her hips, looking down at her wife of seven years, puzzlement and a slight touch of annoyance on her face, she was annoyed that for some reason Bette wouldn’t open to her, and the fact Bette was enjoying seeing how frustrated Tina was becoming was making her more annoyed.
They told each other everything, so why was this any different, it shouldn’t be, it couldn’t be, it wasn’t a usual conversation but that was neither here nor there, they shared everything, likes, dislikes, secrets and demons.
Tina was wearing the shortest of shorts and her favourite white vest that left little to the imagination, her shoulders creamy against the white material, the scooped neck allowing the vision of the valley between, the material stretched across the rise of her breasts, her dark nipples visible through the material.
Lounging back in bed, Bette laid with her arm behind her head, her hair tied back, looking completely delectable, she was admiring the view before her, Bette’s eyes travelled over the expanse of the material, lingering on Tina’s breasts, noticing how the skin was getting tighter under the material, puckering, the erect nipples straining against the white cotton.
“Its no big deal Tina,” she said smiling, her eyes travelling back up to Tina’s face.
“So if its no big deal why won’t you tell me?”
“Just because that its no big deal!”
As Tina continued to stand in front of her, hands on hips, her bottom lip protruded, confirming her frustration in not getting her own way in the line of questioning.
Bette laughed at Tina’s pout, enjoying the conversation and the view of Tina, her long legs now drew Bette’s attention and she took several seconds to take her wife’s body in, lingering on certain areas, knowing Tina was watching her intently, knowing her body was reacting just by the mere fact that Bette was tenderly making love to her with her eyes.
“Stop looking at me with such lust Porter!”
“Me?”
“Yes, you, absolutely no action until you tell me what this fantasy of yours is!”
Bette laughed out loud, the old idle threat that Tina has tried on several occasions in the past and has never lasted long. The reasoning being that no matter what either of them did, the rising passion was already in the air, building between them, and then, the threat was laid down, testing them both.
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I am SSSSSSSOOOOOO ready for this next chappy or 2……post very soon…..what an awesome thing to write ……those 3 together in one bedroom, ……wooohooo….
It will be amusing if after the threesome, Tina starts to have feelings for Helena and she has confusing/conflicting thoughts in that blonde brain of hers.
ohhh lordy plz hurry this one up!!
Well, a few months ago I would have thought this absurd but I would rather see this than Tina doing it with a man and Dana dying….bring it on…at least its fun and it is B and T!!!!!
What fun, you two! Ignore the negative comments because anything is possible especially after this season. So…Bring it on you Brits!
This is hot and gonna be more hot next, Please post soon, thanks!
Um, why did you stop now? Keep going!!
oooooh … oooooh … yummy so far! more, pweeze!
oh shit… this is good… and i don’t care who you two are… just keep writing… no wi hope the next chapter opens up… the site is having trouble tonight… sure of all fucking nights… it has to be now when i want to read the next chapter… so if you don’t see a comment from me… i hope you two will repost it… and soon… thanks
J&A – I’m up for this! Theres no threat of drought in this part of the copuntry so I can have lots of cold showers – Wheres the rest?!!! Go Girls!
bring it on!!!!!!!!!!!
Hot! Hot! Hot! Damn! Can I be a fly on the wall in the room When this takes place?!?! =) Very nice chapter. I am definitely waiting for the next update.
hey there — well the sex scene was a little tame and not much humour that we Brits are famed for. Hope you do better with the next chapter
After reading this I don’t have a clue as to who the writers of this chapter are. I think you may have to write another one or maybe even more :-)
Bring it on, this should be interesting.
Look you two! Your comments aren’t going to through any of us off the scent. Now get the chapter with the SEX posted.
wowness.
A little disappointing, from the Author name and the title of the story I was expecting a little more, I must admit. I’m afraid that it hasn’t given me much hope that it will keep up with the British contingency of British writers currently on this board who are running away with the most popular stories. I think there definately has to be some more work if this is to be considered a story worthy of following. Sorry, just an honest opinion.
Did I forget to tell you that ‘through’ is the American spelling for ‘throw’?
Oh my, BBareB, season3 Helena plus season1 B&T = … fireworks? ;-)
And you talk a good game, now let’s see ’em!
You are sooo busted.
Who’s allyemmerson?
i resent being associated with this rubbish — and who is this jobodge character ??
What complete and utter CRAP! There is no way this is believable, the story and the suggestion that it could be such brilliant authors as allyemmerson and Jobadge. There writing is so much better than this pile of tripe. Bette would never agree to a threesome, especially with Helena. Won’t be reading again!
Wow! It’s like alternate universe l-word where people commited IC so she couldn’t write anymore. :) Can’t wait for more.
Okay you two I waited long enough to comment hoping someone would guess who you thw two of you are. FeltHat knows, but she only gave your initials away, so I am going to tell your screen names—Allyemmerson and Jobadge. This is a fantastic collaboration from the two of you. Keep it coming–I’m sure you both will have such fun with this story. Almost forgot funnyone also knows who you are too.
Okay you two are just having way too much fun with this. Let me introduce you two to the other. Allyemmerson is my best friend in the world and Jobadge is my newest friend and they both live in England. One lives in the southern part and the other lives in the northeastern part. Now if you two would quit playing around and get to writing we fans might actually get another chapter from one or both of you on any of your stories.
hey Jo – i think we better stop having so much fun, i know my chapter is unfinished and now i wanna start on the next one to this story. talk soon babe
yes, yes, hell yes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
LMFAO!!! This is classic!! And JT, that was a very negative comment you left, you are a bad girl, now go to my room… Ally, I’m Jobadge (not Jobodge), pleased to meet you!
Bring it! this should be interesting!
OMG! YES! please continue!
Oh, and for leaving us in this current state, you need to give us each a chapter of your current stories…that’s only fair..
You guys totally gave that away with your comments…only someone who could have written that could dish it as well….tsk tsk…And how cruel to leave us at that point knowing full well that if we don’t grovel enough we will likely not see another chapter…And also to leave us at that point…This was to eliviate some of tonights stress…well that means you have to finsh…PLS, and thankyou…That was a great read and I shall go back to it again and again…
Ruuth — you are such a damn spoilsport — i won’t play with you any more
Closet cases
I for one thought the writing was good and it reminded me of 2 specific writers as others have posted: Jobadge and allyemmerson. Now I hope I guess right but I hope even more that yo continue this story and see where it goes!! Love it!!
OK, so first i was like no way, uh uh, not gonna happen. Now that I’ve accepted that this is not the Helena from the show but a nocer, warmer more vulnerable Helena I can totally get down w/ this story. Tina is mad cool for wanting Bette to be able to experience her fantasy. i personally think threesomes work better when neither party (in the couple) know the 3rd party. but i got to say that i can’t wait to see how this one plays out. helena seems to be totally game and even has some ideas of her own so Bette better get read for a night she won’t forget. in case I haven’t made it clear enough, YES and i would like you fine writers to continue w/ this story. p.s. American breats aren’t to shabby IMHO…….lol