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The Promise
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gte 103j- Dont cry…its jsut a story :)
Chrissy – woah calm down girl more is on the way luv.
Bv-hall – damn sorry girl thats a *****…I know your pain though…my junior year of high school I blew through everything when someone tackled me in practice….I had to have my knees completely redone and it sucked…good luck with everything…atleast you get to sit at home and read fan fiction…just put the comp on the nightstand and buy a wireless keyboard…you dont have to get the laptop.
Leogrrl2 & Sarah- hey thanks and thanks for the first comment.
InSHane – I loved your last two chapters and I will be gentle, Im just kinda well using her to bring someone else closer, while dumping her on the back burner…sorry.
Ange _ ~snort~ Romantic mush Ha thats what I think it is too!
D – dont cry its okay.
Kabby – heres another chapter as promised
seven – its okay yeah I know what you mean if I dont already know the song I cant read and listen cause I always listen to the words of songs I cant tune them out….no sweat love.
Miamigirl – Bette is waiting in the wings…as my BF (best friend) says..you gotta let the ***** marinate….his words I swear! But man was he right!
Nix & Lwordjunkie – glad I could please ya and Im sending more your way. And sorry youre not patient
JanetM – HA Romantic….Ill show you romantic in a few chapters you keep it up!…ok you want to know the truth….I dont consider myself romantic….if.(.and Thats an IF so dont get your hopes up and think youve won the battle) IF I was to be in a relationship…these are the things I would do…its not romantic its just the way someone deserves to be treated when they are giving a part of themselves to you….Now thats also why I wouldnt be in a relationship….I know I would give everything I had and I would prob end up loving the person more than myself…and Ive learned the hard way that I forget to love myself…..so Like I said…Ill take my love the hardway.
Jkitta – thanks luv hehehe…Ive never read Nora Roberts or Danielle Steele…which is funny since I quit my job at Barnes and Noble like a month ago…but I know theyre the *****, so thanks…Im sorry Ive left you emotionally drained…should leave you a little something so you can spread it to others. :)
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Batman is good, but Spider-Man now thats a superhero!!!! (I know – I am in need of therapy!!!) I love how you have got in to Shane’s head. As a fellow fuck up i can relate.
that was simply amazing.
I really love Shane in this story, it’s about time she opened up to someone besides Bette.
Anyway update soon!
beautiful, as always.
Your are definitely the silver dollar of the Fan Fic world.. you rock.. and you are a helpless romantic… post again soon…thank you
Beautiful chapter. Shane is open up to Tina and she tell Tina all about of her things and emotion. The 2 of them is beautiful, they have a good time to share they feeling and emotion. I reall love it, so please post the next one soon can’t wait to see Tina meet Bette. Thank you!
i hope i didnt offend you by saying that I consider you in the league of those authors – well, I hve notread their books for a long time but i do remember that they were the so called romantic gurus of the era especially Danelle Steel. But you are an author in your own right – if ever you decide to publish a novel, let me know, I be the first to buy it ;). The dialogue you have weaved are so witty and so full of life – I thoroughly enjoy reading it. and I do like your great sense of humor whereby you weave in one of my favourite superhero characters – Batman — lol, actually I like Superman better – coz he wears his undies outsides his pants !!! lol
~just grins from the Batman reference~ Another awesome chapter with amazing detail and writing. I can’t wait to read the next update. Oh by the way, I love the quote from Ben Harper, I am a HUGE Ben fan! Have you heard the song “Please Me Like You Want To” ? If not, check it out..now that song..is hot.
Anticipation it seems may not have fatal consequences…as long as exposure is limited. Your updates have arrived just in time to save me:) I think I could be overdosing on euphoria because of 2 updates so close together because right now I don’t even care about the TV series…you write a better story. Having said that, I must go somewhere quietly and wait for the effects of your writing to lessen so I can function in the real world. Thank you again.
I can’t get over how wonderful this story is..it would be wonderful to have a silver dollar like Bette in our lives I hope you have one..Please continue with this wonderful romantic story..Post soon..Thank you!!!!
thanks … i stayed up late waiting for this…now i can go to bed, wanting more…love the end..made me chuckle :)
I love the Batman reference!! You need to write longer chapters, this wait is killing me. I’m ready for the next.
loving every bit of this story… i hope al and shane can somehow get 2gether… maybe b&t could adopt dash and keep her in the family!
I cannot even begin to tell you how much I’m loving this story! Such a great blend of heartache, hope, romance, humor…
Wow, when will we get to the big finish, you big tease? I hope Dash doesn’t have to be rushed off to the hospital, though she should with her high fever and broken ribs.
You know it was worth staying up and going to ballet in 4 hours with no sleep so long as I got to read this chapter…. thank you so much, I laughed and cried (somethimes at the same time) and enjoyed every word!! Please post again soon so I’ve got something to look forward to? Thanks for an amazing chapter!! mwaah ;0)
I loved this.So glad that Tina told Shane how she felt and that they had their dollar dance. That was so beautiful. Dash is a hand full. I have a lap top so reading isn’t the problem. how to get it hooked up in the hospital, Really enjoyed this story. thanks for posting again tonight.